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TOPIC: ARGUMENT7 - The following appeared in a letter to the editor of the Clearview newspaper.
"In the next mayoral election, residents of Clearview should vote for Ann Green, who is a member of the Good Earth Coalition, rather than for Frank Braun, a member of the Clearview town council, because the current members are not protecting our environment. For example, during the past year the number of factories in Clearview has doubled, air pollution levels have increased, and the local hospital has treated 25 percent more patients with respiratory illnesses. If we elect Ann Green, the environmental problems in Clearview will certainly be solved."
WORDS: 358 TIME: 00:30:00 DATE: 2010-7-19 20:05:43
Final words 461 已修改黑体为后来补充
The argument is well presented, but the evidence provided is not sufficient to conclude the essential reason for air pollution, and simply electing a member of the Good Earht Coalition as the mayor may not effectively solve the problem.
In the first place, the main reason of the air pollution in the region is not clearly pointed out according to the argument. The arguer assumes it is the increasing number of factories in Clearview that has caused the air pollution. However, other possible alternatives are totally neglected. Perhaps, the factories built there do not produce polluting gas at all and it is the growing number of cars in the area that has led to increased air pollution. Also, the worse air condition may be caused by other nearby places where air pollution is exceptionally serious, which has affected the air condition of Clearview.
In addition, the arguer fails to demonstrate the air pollution level in Clearview. The rising number of patients with respiratory illnesses in hospital may not the result of local air pollution. Probably, a flu recently spread the area and most people have been infected, leading the 25 percent more patients. Also, it could be caused by a sudden weather change that a storm has attacked the whole area and a proportion of citizens caught a cold, getting worse and developing to serious respiratory illnesses.
Finally, whether Ann Green will be dedicated to solving air problem if she was elected mayor remains a doubt. Even if it was the factory that has caused the air pollution, would Ann Green, a member of Good Earth Coalition, close them? As a mayor, she must consider other matters of the city. Perhaps, closure of the factories would lead to economic problems of the region, making a number of employees be laid off. Considering such possible result, Ann Green may not close the factories simply for better air conditions. On the other hand, no evidence shows that Frank Braun would not be competent for the position. Although, he is not a member of green organizations, he may be better at balancing economy and environment problems as a member town council, who has more experience in politics. In addition, other capabilities should be taken into consideration when electing the mayor. Probably, there exists other problem that is more urgent than air pollution in the region, which calls for a capable mayor rather than a member of some environmental organizations.
To conclude, merely depending on the mayor to solve the environmental problem can hardly take effects. The local government should make more researches to find the air pollution level and its causes. Meanwhile other capabilities of the candidates must be considered in the election of mayor in order to the long-term development of the region. |
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