Laura的916作文备考日志

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接下若若的棒来看看~加油哦!

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16# 123runfordream
嗯，真的很感谢，谢谢支持！想起一首歌，someone watching over me! Hilary Duff:)

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Argument 179

Practice on Hasty Generalization.

The author’s dissatisfaction with Good-Taste Company lies mainly on its prices of food, service without special diet and the complaint raised by three employees. Well-presented though the evidence seems, it fails to support the director’s view that Cedar Corporation should dismiss Good-Taste Company for food supply next year. Specifically, the author neglects the quality of the canteen food and the professional services Good-Taste Company provides. Perhaps the high charge is due to the strict sanitation standards or hiring experienced chefs and the continuous rising price is owing to the fact that the foodstuff costs more than before or the corporation has hired more employees. Besides, the author fails to apprise the readers how many people there are on special diets or the reason why Good-Taste Company turns down the corporation’s request. Thirdly, three employees’ complaint might not be typical of the overall staff; the others probably enjoy the Good-Taste Company’s food and service very much. Meanwhile, the description of the discontent stated obscurely with the word unbearable quoted lacks of detailed evidence to strengthen the author’s tone. Accordingly, unless pricing principles, explanations from the canteen part and opinions of other employees are investigated, the viewpoint of the director could not hold enough water.

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Special Sample
The article focuses its research on adults sleeping at night, which might not be typical to draw the conclusion that all people should guarantee seven hours of sleep to keep health. Perhaps babies and toddler need to spend more time on slumber to complete their processes of growth; the aged, however, need not so much sleep at night but need a nap during the day. Besides, adults working on night shifts might sleep much longer than eight hours at day to keep themselves much healthy. As a result, unless further research considering sleeping habit of children and other groups of people lends its credence to the seven-hour sleep theory, the article could not be convincing and persuasive enough.

写的语句非常的局限，还是需要加油积累句子和词汇使用。

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Respondents
Argument 62.
According to the survey, the author concludes pine Tree dollar is far more popular than other dollar coins, which might not be the case. The respondents appearing in the survey might not be typical among the overall population; thus, even high percentages could not lend enough credence to the viewpoint that people would like to use Pine Tree dollar. Besides, the survey was conducted soon after the coin was released, which means it could not predict the trend that whether this type of coin will keep as appealing as it is now.

我觉得一篇好的argument不是凑字数，格式也不是那么重要，重要的是你能把这个问题阐述的很完整，描述问题的能力，我这个就很弱，发现加入难词表达也不对味儿。

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Argument 62.
According to the survey, the author concludes pine Tree dollar is far more popular than other dollar coins, which might not be the case. The respondents appearing in the survey might not be typical among the overall population. Perhaps they have no choice but to accept the coin changes from stores or banks; or the circulation of new coins attracts people for their novelty, which might not last long taking into account of the fact that the survey was conducted soon after the release. In addition, the author fails to provide historical data about circulations of other types of coin; perhaps more people own those coins and more multi-coin holders collect them at the very beginning, but afterwards the enthusiasm waned. Thus, current high percentages could not lend enough credence to the viewpoint that people would like to use Pine Tree dollar and would continue to use them.
字数多了一些，但是还是没有把问题陈述清楚。。。

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觉得Argument范文叙述的语气都很客气阿，我怎么觉得我写作的时候很尖酸刻薄呢！
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Faith and faithfulness
Infidelity is rampant in nature.
People are no different.
public disapproval does little to dissuade the sinner.
看得好艰难
California's Gift of Shame
economics, politics related
start with a question:
how would you like to be running the California Travel and Tourism Commission right now?
(It's so strange that the following has nothing to do with Travel and Tourism.)
an almost constant stream of alarming news.
with no agreement in sight between Gov. Arnold Schwarzenegger and Democratic lawmakers
detail how massive financial obligations have rendered the state essentially ungoverable.
get a handle on their public employee commitments.
During a length budget standoff
On its face
put pressure on
Chiang has been fairly consistent in his comments.
In any event
among these concessions
has long been on the governor's wish list
runaway
Passed after a mere five minutes of debate
highly misleading documentation and unrealistic expectations
pave the way a nearly 3,000 percent increase in pension liabilities for the state.
deserve more credit than he has received for raising the national alarm about public sector union power
Viewed through this lens
alternately described as nonsensical
petulant
gubernatorial ransom note
as much as advertised
the savings are a side benefit
so the thinking goes
Schwarzenegger has proven to be a master at stratagems like these, declaring states of fiscal emergency, using apocalyptic rhetoric in places
what looks like the catastrophe from the outside can be pretty useful in negotiation.
Whether it helps the state's never small self-image is another matter.
we're not worried that political news is detering people from coming to enjoy all the things California has to offer.

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Argument 62之分析，昨天在绿色书上找到了Argument 62的分析，不是很满意，自己分析一下。
1.我觉得前两句话是有问题的，大家不使用硬币，也不一定就使用纸币阿，可以刷卡阿，硬币一直流行不起来也可能是因为其他的因素而不是人们的喜好。
2. 76%的回应着也比较不可靠，或许那些回应着更多持有这种硬币，而没有持有这种硬币的人群并不愿意对这种调查作出回应，所以调查并不能反映整理人们的观点。62%的多种硬币持有者更不靠谱，可能持有多种硬币的人数就很少，62%更少，所以这些数据不能说明pt硬币很受欢迎。

即使假设这些数据说明pt受欢迎，但不能说明它将一直受欢迎，因为这个调查是在pt发行之初进行的，可能因为比较新奇，大家愿意接受这种硬币，可能另外两种硬币发行之初也是如此火爆场景，但后来逐渐没落，作者没有给出同时期前两种硬币的使用情况，就不能得出结论pt更受欢迎并将一直受欢迎；
3. 作者没有证明纸币更省钱，所以何来财政部这种决策是正确的呢？即时纸币更节省成本，但可能防伪性，便携性，纸币都优于硬币，民众仍然不能接受财政部的做法。政府不能把节省成本全放在硬币的发行上，而应该从其他方面着手可能更有效，比如投资研究降低纸币成本，宣传信用卡交易等等。

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Misapplied Generaliztion
The nationwide study could not be applied equally to C Note, where the  fan might not be willing to spend money on jazz entertainment, or they just dislike going out to the club to enjoy jazz but purchase albums or records to entertain themselves.
CAT answers:
Finally, the nationwide study showing that average jazz fan spends $ 1,000 each year on jazz entertainment would lend support to the applicant's claim only if Monoe residents typify jazz fans nationwide. However, the applicant provides no credible evidence that this is the case.
miming the sample:
One problem with the argument is that it assumes that the nationwide statistics about the expenditure on jazz entertainment among typical jazz fans applies equally to Monroe's jazz-enthusiasts. Yet this might not be the case, for a variety of possible reasons. Perhaps the economic situation in Monroe is worse than the national average level, so the residents are not likely to spend  much money on jazz entertainment. Besides, jazz entertainment does not necessarily means going to jazz clubs much less (let alone) going to the C Note. Without ruling out such possibilities, the applicant cannot justifiably conclude that the C Note would earn money.

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False cause
1. A occurs before B. Thus, A is the cause of B.
Typical sentence structure:
the argument also assumes unfairly that ~ is the result of the ~ rather than some other phenomena. The only reason for this causal relation is that ~ occurs before B. ~ ignores a host of other possible explanations for the increase-such as ~, or ~. Without ruling out all other possible explanations for the ~, ~cannot convince me that by ~would ~ let alone~.

The state lottery, in the citizen's opinion, has supplemented Lucria for education and public health, for the evidence indicates that in Lucria pupils gain more educational support and average people obtain better public health treatment. However, that may not be true. The reasons are as follows: if the situation is what the author states, specific profit data and its usage distribution should be prodived to prove lottery indeed improves the public services, but there is only the fact of rising educational and health input, which may be owing to other stategies Lucria enforces, such as reducing fiscal payout on government fairs or collecting more charity donations from private hands. Besides, the comparison between Impecunia and Lucria is unreasonable, for the argument fails to instruct their numbers of pupils and their population. Once the Lucria owns fewer people, its high average welfare might not be attributed to the state lottery. Consequently, without ruling out all the other possibilities, the citizen cannot draw the conclution that lottery in Lucria could subsidize the education and public health system.

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The president and the peace process
bother with
The present conflict between Arabs and Jews in Palestine
be implored upon entering the office to entering office to bring the quarrel swiftly to an end
Jimmy Cater owes his Nobel peace prize in large part to the peace deal he borkered between Israel and Egypt in 1978.
Since the Nobel committee saw fit to reward Barack Obama virtually the instant he was elected
be the lure of that prize
invest in this thankless conflict so early
compulsory
mounted their second intifada
it is more realistic for America to "manage " the conflict in Palestine than to seek actually to solve it.
that is progress of a sort, albeit not the sort that poses the slightest danger of raising high expectations
keep his coalition together
compromises with
be accused of betrayal by Hamas
denounce him as an American dupe
Having given the talks a year, the president may not yeat have made up his own mind.
For if Middle Eastern peacemaking requires the stamina of a boxer, it also demands a chess master's patience to play the game in at least three dimensions.
The first of these, fixing a border
be subsumed within ~
Richard Nixon, Ronald Reagan
To the extent that
extra leverage
Most Jews are Democrats.
tectonic change in American policy
devoid of the customary pomp

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LZ有写完整的ARGU 么
私以为argu讲究的还是逻辑和思维的发散性，其实你的语言和语法都很好了。

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28# maraschino1985
谢谢，不过现在的确在语言上花了较大功夫，因为我发现我一不小心就会掉进模板。
想着要脱离范文，脱离模板，可能是对e-rator的恐惧吧

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