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我刚开始写，没找到方法呢...边学习边改...麻烦也帮我看看啦~
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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?  Some people think making sure that others (influential people or potential employers) know about your strengths and accomplishments can help you succeed, if you do not do this, you won’t have a successful life.

How to get success is sure to be widely concerned by most people and in light of influential people and potential employers relatively have adequate abilities and opportunities to help people close to the achievement, I prefer to make them know people’s 这里不知用什么词比较好strengths and accomplishments.

To begin with, it is strongly difficult不确定 for people to have an appropriate job if nobody else understands their abilities. What the successful life looks like is a hard question to answer, but according to the recent study, it seems that the successful life is directly related to people’s jobs. It shows to some extent, a necessary part of success is a good vocation with high salary. However in most cases, the employers only get wise to people via two or three tests. So, without making sure the HR knows about people’s abilities, people would lose the job opportunities. Take my classmate for example; he is an intelligent man with excellent practical experience and professional skills. However when he tried to get an internship and felt tired to attend the tests, he fails without doubt.

Furthermore, the influential people and potential employers often manipulate several opportunities and those have important impacts on people. If there is no chance to reveal your capability and or? only seldom people know your abilities, what the meaning of those intelligence? In the past, there are lots of examples to state this. Picasso, a famous artisan, was a foolish student in the view of his teacher due to his math score is stupid. But on the other side, he was very lucky to get an opportunity to show his special skills on a painting competition. Suppose there is no chance for Picasso to get award of painting, he might be defined as a foolish child and go on an ordinary life.好例子，好说法

However, what is striking is there are also some people could be understood even though they do not get nobody knows. In these cases, the people are always the ones of most outstanding people in their periods. For instance, the Zhu Geliang in three kingdoms was repeatedly invited by his master. Because although Zhu in the suburbs, his intelligent having heard spread all over the countries many times. In short, except those outstanding men, making sure others know about you more exactly is essential.感觉有些矛盾

In conclusion, although it is not only making sure others know your accomplishments that is mapping the path of your future, in most cases, the success requires people to show their ability.

swolf54UID：2421931

改了，最后一个观点不对

estopUID：2864494

8-31
独立：
2009.8.7
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement:
Parents should allow children to make their own choices rather than determine their children’s future for them.　　(Family)

How to help children to get a successful career is sure to be widely cared by most parents. Concerning the future will be designed by themselves, I prefer to state that parents should allow children to make their own choices.

To begin with, parents could make relatively better choices and always help their children to face the difficulties to some extent. Concerning every parent has the similar period as well as children’s. Therefore it is easy to say that the choices are always valuable and reasonable. The rich experience- the places they were failing to, the tortuous paths they were walking and so forth-is a wealth for the children. When a child is confused by whether go to the university or not, his parents could help him to analysis the possible results and may recommend him to go to the college for further study for having a better chances link to big company.

Although most parents would like to make the choice instead of their children because they believe their experience to daily life could help children to develop in a correct way, actually, nobody would say which way is the right and the correct way is only by parents’ own thought. Take my classmate for example; he was a wiser child in math lessons. But his parents urged him to study medical science due to his family is full of the doctors and they thought only becoming doctor is correct. Unfortunately, although my classmate joined a medical school, he got a stupid score without the interests on it.

Finally, in light of the tragedy, the future path should be mapped by children themselves. Even though the parents could help their children until they become adults, how about their over about 50 years left? For instance, my neighborhood, Eric, got to the university and was off his home. But he has never make choices by himself, thereby almost all the decisions he faced were determined by his mother. I cannot imagine what he will do if his mother dead. Besides, what is striking is some companies are complaint about the graduates about that most students are not capacity of making decisions, not to mention strategy decisions.

In conclusion, the experience of parents is precious and plays a crucial for the development of their children. But by and large, the future is face to the children themselves and the assistance will be not effective forever.

estopUID：2864494

8-31综合    第三点谁能告诉我怎么听，我怎么就是听不准呢

TPO 13

The reading passage and the lecture give a contrary opinion about sellingthe fossils for the commercial. The passage states that the sales are bad forboth scientists and the general public, but the lecture does not think so.

Initially, the reading demonstrates that selling the fossils would makethe public to see fossils difficultly. The lecture refutes the passage that itis not less exposure. And the private collectors are more likely to show thefossils than libraries and schools.

Subsequently, the reading believes that scientists could lose access tosome important fossils and to discover the extinct forms life. However, thelecture contradicts by citing the evidence of every fossil was sold after beingidentified by scientist experts. Besides, it is not only scientists that couldidentify the fossils.

Finally, the lecture argues that for excavating the fossils, it needs toensure the location and others by scientific technology. And if theuniversities publish the locations and surroundings many fossils will be notunder undiscovered. It contradicts the reading that the fossils are easier tobe destroyed.

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8.30  独立和综合 不好意思 改晚了
传送下我的独立 嘿

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jiangskyskyUID：2478960

修改好了

estopUID：2864494

寻求新的突破，想内容多写的，加入比较新的观点，求狠批。

您的批评是我前进的动力！

独立：
2009.9.11
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Governments should pay more attention to health-care issues than environmental issues.

Which issues in the society should be paid more attention to is sure to be widely cared by both governments and residents. Concerning the profound and lasting influence of environmental problems, I prefer to say it is better to pay more attention to environmental issues.

To begin with, there is no doubt that the health-care problems should be strongly cared. Admittedly, without the food problems, the health becomes one of the most cared problems. And the topic of lifetime is widely discussed, especially by the elders. Take my grandpa for example, he purchased some books about how to live longer and insisted on taking exercise every morning. Thereby, light of the concerns of most people, it is better for governments to build some medical service stations and provide several free physical exams to satisfy the requirements of most people.

Unfortunately however, the effects of improving health-care conditions are limited. Although the improvement will help people to live longer to some extent, it can only do a little to people’s physical condition, with the severe environmental problems. If the environmental situation is not relieved, the lifespan of people will be decreased seriously. Nowadays, in the Western distracts in China, there are two tremendous deserts. What is worse, the two deserts are gathering and will be bordered on after about two decades. If they are bordered, the dusts will flow into the cities and other areas without any obstacles, and it will be more difficult for people to restraint them. Therefore, the dusts will result to prevalent problems of lungs and others.

Maybe in our time left, the environmental problems will not be so serious to influence our daily life, but we must consider about our descendants. The releasing of the greenhouse gases leads to the rise of sea level, and thereby some islands are disappeared. Concerning about more people and less lands, it is easy to predict the descendants will complain about the poor environment to us. So, in my view, the government should pay more attention to the environmental issues, such as limiting the releasing of carbon gases, building forests as the obstacle to deserts and so forth.

In conclusion, as the human being, it is necessary for people to think about the descendants to prevent and solve the environmental problems. Although the health-care issues should be cared, the government ought to put the environmental problems top in list.

estopUID：2864494

同样在寻求新的突破，这篇主体和以前写的不太一样，字数190，是不是还有点单薄？

您的批评是我前进的最大动力

TPO 14

The reading and the lecture give a pair of contrary opinions on the salvage logging. The lecture believes it will lead to long environmental damage and questions the reasons in the reading passage.

Initially, the salvage logging should not be removed. The dead trees contribute a lot to the nutrition in the soils and the remove is not necessary. It refutes the reading that states if the dead trees are not decomposed, they could have negative influence on other trees.

Subsequently, insects are an important part for the long-term forest. They have been existed for hundreds years and the forests are also not damaged. Besides, the insects are the food for the birds. However, in the passage, it claims that the insects will harm the forests.

Finally, the economic benefits of the salvage logging is small and do not last very long. First, using the vehicles to transport the wood is expensive. What is more, the work opportunities provided by these activities are only temporary. But the reading holds a contrary opinion that wood is usable by industries and it could help to provide extra jobs for residents.

newyork2010UID：2548406

改好了

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8.31 综合+独立 修改

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9-1 综合

estopUID：2864494

9-2 写着写着发现有点把握不住了。

独立：
2009.9.19
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement:
It is more important for the government to spend money on art museums and concert halls than on recreational facilities such as swimming pools and playgrounds. (Government & Money)

Which area should be paid more money to develop is sure to be widely cared by both the governments and residents. Concerning a rapid pace of life and the latest requirements in recent years, it is more important for the government to spend money on recreational facilities.

To begin with, there is no doubt that art buildings-art museums and concert halls-play a crucial role on the society. In light of increasing requirement of people’s mixed-ability, more people in the society trend to form good qualities from the arts. For example, in the art museum, it shows the histories of some famous artisans. From the story that Beethoven had written several classical symphonies after he became deaf, people could pursue the good quality of never give up and they may learn the spirit of facing the difficulty bravely. Therefore, it is essential for government to spend money on arts to help the residents benefit from it, to some extent.

However, the government should be more cared about the daily life of residents. Only does the government improve the art buildings, is it very difficult to satisfy people. Take me for example, I had visited the most art museums and concert halls. But when I am willing to some places to stay with my friends, I do not want to go to these art places again. It seems that the art places always be visited only once for most people. However, the recreational places could make people visit frequently without any boring at all.

Finally, in the emerging world, the requirement to the places for people to relax is increased. Most people in the companies are under heavy pressure and it is too hard to relieve for them. So, in this way, the recreational facilities are more necessary than before. For example, if people want to relieve the pressure, they can go to a swimming pool. From the report in the Journal Science, it shows that doing sports is an effective way not only to relax, but also to abreact. Thereby, nowadays, the government should paid more money to build the recreation facilities.

In conclusion, what is striking is it is not only the arts that is mapping the path, the recreation facilities, what people thought useless before, have play an important role to satisfy the needs of the societies and deserve the more money from the government.

estopUID：2864494

9-2 综合 为什么我综合的字数越写越少。
TPO 15

The lecture and the reading passage have a pair of contrary opinions about the cane toad. The reading states that these measures can stop the spread of the cane toad in Australia, but the professor does not think so.

Initially, the lecture claims that building a national fence is not effective. The young toad could go to another side of the fence and the eggs could through the fence to establish the population. It totally refutes that a fence could block the toads as blocking the rabbits in the 20th century stated in the reading.

Subsequently, the reading believes that the toads could be restrained by the volunteers. However, the lecture presents that untrained volunteers could destroy some native frogs, including some are endanger, citing the evidence that the toads, especially the young toads, look like the frogs.

Finally, the lecture demonstrates that the virus could threaten the original habitat of the toads. And the virus maybe harms the whole Australia and other countries by transportation. However in the passage, the speaker contents that the virus will control the population.