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30# littleecho33 谢谢，你:D。你的改正对我很有帮助。

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9月28日交

Do youagree or disagree with the following statement? All university students shouldtake basic science courses, regardless of their field of concentration.



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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? All university students should take basic science courses, regardless of their field of concentration.
I am agree with (the) this statement. All the university students should take basic science courses, regardless of their field of concertration.(concentration；最好转述下题目~) Because the basic science is great helpful to the students development. About the bring up( bringing up) their logical thought, give some common sence( sense), have helpful to following life as tips.
The first reason is that, the basic science can bring up logical thought of students. As we know the logical thought is so helpful to the various subject(s) of the school course(s). Logical(Logic) is in the almost subjects of our school studying. We can say if have no logical there is no study. And there is a very productive way to bring up the logical sense is learn some basic science course. The basic science course(…) give a lot of logical thought’ question to given the student sloving(?). So the productive way to cultivate logical thught is (to) learn the basic science.
The second factor is that if we learn the basic science, we can get the common sense. What is the common sense?(有些多余) The common sense is that, the basic expericement（？） of the living life. Or the expericement of the society development. How can （we） get the common sense. The most easy way is learning( to learn) the basic science. The basic science also contain a lot of common sense. About (, such as) the weather, the fire’ function, the water, the air, and so on. So if a student want to get the common sense, he or she should learn the basic science.
The third reason is that, basic science can also promote (help) us (to) live more easily. As we know, the basic science is helpful and functionful in our practical life. Because as listed above, basic science contain many basic life common sense, it can help us more and more in the life. If we acknowlege these things, we can live in the daiy life easy. So, all the students should learn the basic science.
Above all, the basic science is so useful and so important, (and) all the student should take basic science courses, regardless of their field of concentration.

楼主应加强些基本练习：单词拼写，单复数问题，句子结构的完整性。
没有具体例子的作文在toefl中会吃大亏的。
楼主可以多倍写经典文章、段落等。总之，大家一起加油吧~
一同期待我们的蜕变。。。

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10月5日交

09.01.17 NA   Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Advertising is the most important cause of unhealthy eating habits.

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10-5

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35# wttyuse 谢谢！:lol

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10月9日交

Do youagree or disagree with the following statement? Teachers should not show theirsocial or political views in the classroom.
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10月12日
do you agree or disagree, students will not use printed books anymore。

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改好了  我电脑抽风了   明天给你传上来。。。。

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It is better to have a year-long breakbefore attending university.


Somepeople think that it is better to have a year-long break before attendeduniversity, but others have negative attitude that the students should not havea year-long break before attended university.As faras I am concerned, I think the students are better to have a year-long breakbefore attended university. My supportive reason as followed.


Firstof all, it is benefit to students who have enough time to learn some practicalskills that will be helpful to their later studying. Because the society haschanged very mush, students who only learn the knowledge that been taught inthe university will be out of date. So before attended university, students shouldbetter to have a year-long break to learn something useful. For example, myelder brother has a year-long break before attended university. In this period,he learned somethings very useful things, that is Spanish language. Becauseduring this time, about a year long, he just side trip while working through thewhole Spain and work there. When he return from Spain a year later, he is verysurprised to find that he can speak Spanish language very glibly. And my brotherattended university after that, he become so popular in whole university.That’s experience let my brother to
successful not only in his university time but also in job. So it isbetter to have a year-long break before we attended universiy.


Inaddition that, if the students who decide to have a year-long break before they attendeduniversity, that will let them to realize that what knowledge is most in need , what sorts of skill they most need to learn in the university. Because there isphenomenon in the university, that so many students just wast their time in theuniversity. They  like to get up after 10:00, and like to stay in dorm awhole day. For , they don’t know what’s the things they should to learn, and even havenot active heart to learn the major subject. But if students can have ayear-long break before attended the university, they can have a clear aim instudying when they in university. For example, another brother, he use just 1.5years to realize that what thing he should to learn in university. So when hein university, he just aim at these things that he want to learn. And it ishigh efficient for him when he studying in university. There is no wastingtime question around him. So I think, it is better to have a year-long breakbefore we attended university.


So itis better to have a year-long break before we attended university. Because ,through this period, we can learn some practical skills that is benefit to our later studyor job. And also we may have a clear aim in university, let us more efficientin university.






A teacher’s ability to relate well with hisor her students is more important than the ability to give them knowledge.


Someonethinks that a teacher’s ability is to relate well with his or her student which ismore important than anythings. However others think that the teacher major dutyis to give students knowledge. So they think a teacher’s ability is to give pupils knowledge. this thing is more important than relating well with his or her students.


Firstof all, some people think, a teacher’s major purpose is that to give his or herstudents knowledge. Because the role of teacher in school is explain different theories and answer question of students. These thing is the core task of ateacher. If the teacher doesn’t have these ability, he or she cannot beencalled a really teacher. For example, a teacher of my math curriculum is astrict old man. In our classroom, our homework, especial in our test, he justshow his aspect of strict. So when we in his classroom, we have to putour attention on his speaking, it is tired for us. But Inconceivable，about 98% of his studentspassed his test. It is tried and annoying in the processes of math studying,but the test result is pleasant. We now should thank these lovely strict oldman.


Furthermore，ifa teacher put almost his energy in relating well with his or her students than giving them knowledge. This action will produce a problem thathis or her classroom will be disorder. Some young teachers havethis problem. Because this teacher put his or her energy in relating with students. For example, one of my young university teacherthinks that he should put his major ability in relating well with his students. The result isthat he has no authority in the classroom. Because the classroom just looks like supermarket. All the things in the classroom is disordered. The reason is that this young teacher want to well with his students, he do not want to punisheveryone. In this situation, everyone do their own things. Neglect presence ofthis young teacher. At last, almost of us have low grade in this subject.



So Idisagree with the statement that a teacher’s ability to relate well with his orher students is more important than the ability to give them knowledge.

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Somepeople prefer to that the most effective method of improving health is toreduce environmental problem. Nowadays some may hold the opinion that if wewant to improving health care, we should increase the environmental qualities,shut up those factories which damaged the environment heavenly. This will leadto improve our public health. As far as I am concerned, I think that we shouldnot only reduce environmental problems, but also to change our unhealthy dietand take more exercise and other methods provided by government. My argumentsfor this point are listed as follows.
One ofthe primary causes is that environment impact human’s health. According theresearch of the China environmental Agency, the environmental quality is thebetter, the quality health of this place is more better. In contrast with thepeople who was living in the poor environmental, they also has a low health quality.For example, the people who live in the place with a good environment place hasa better health quality. The sick times is less than the people who live in aplace with environmental problems. So a good environmental place is a effectivemethod of improving health care. We should reduce environmental problems.


Butthere is a further more subtle point we must consider. Example what is morebalanced of man’s diet, his health is more better. The environment is the outerfactor, but the diet and the other things is the inner factors. Outer factor isimportant, but the inner factor is more important. As we know that the innerfactor lead the outer factor. Balanced diet and take more exercise can lethuman’s body more healthy, with the we taking a balanced diet and participatein exercise, our body is becoming more healthy. The body parts aredeveloped that will help have a good health. So take the balanced diet or foodand participate in the exercise is also an effective method of improving ahealth care.


Generalspeaking , we not only need a good environment but also should take a balanceddiet and take the more exercise. Those are the effective methods of improving ourhealth care.

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Some people prefer to use own knowledge andexperience to solve question, others believe to ask other
people for advice. When faced with decisionof using own knowledge and experience or asking other people for advice, quitea few would claim that using own knowledge is a better method, but others incontrast. My point in this question is that using own knowledge and ask otherpeople for advice is also important. There are numerous reasons why think thesetwo methods is also important, and I would explore only a few of the mostimportant here.


The main reason why I agree with using ownknowledge is important, is that, some situation is the specific, only in thissituation could realize the specific thing. Other man is out of this situation,so they just observe these outer things, when you ask them, they just give yousome usefulness and unimportant suggestion. In the final, you also should useyour own knowledge and experience to solve the question. Take a story asexample, an young horse crosses the river. One day mother tell her son younghorse that taking a bag of wheat to the mill, but there is a river on the wayto the mill. So when the young horse came to before of the river, he doesn’tknow how depth of the river. So he wasted many time to ask other animal, hewant to get advices from them. When he asked a bat, the bat tell him that theriver is so long and depth, this answer make the young horse disappointed, andhe also asked the buffalo, the cow tell him, this river is slow and shallow,and this let him so embarrassed. At final, he take courage to cross the river,and the river is nor so depth or so shallow. So this story tell us thatsometimes we should use own knowledge and experience to solve problem.



There is another factor that deserves somewords here. We should also gain advice from other people. Because there aresome things that we don’t have any experience and knowledge, but the other manalready have these knowledge and experience. So when we happen this situation,we should not waste our time to solve by ourselves, just ask help from other people. For example, when in doingsome mathematics questions, and we don’t any disciple of this subject, but wedo these questions by our knowledge and experience, this is just a wasting timeaction. We should learn these disciples from textbooks or teachers. If we justdoing by our method and knowledge our actions are ridiculous. So in thesesituation we should ask help from other man, get advice from them. This is theright way.


So we should deal with different thingswith the different way. We should not only to use our knowledge and experienceto solve questions but also should get advice