【作文贴，求重拍】KEL的作文本-2

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10.2 Do you agree or disgree the following statement?
People benefits more from traveling in their own country than from traveling to foreign countries.

  Have you ever been attracted to the exotic scenery? Have you ever been enchanted by the foreign culture? Have you ever been benefited from the communication with the foreigners? Had you possessed such experiences, you would have definitely acknowledge the significance of traveling abroad.
  The point of top merit for my side focuses on the exotic views. Through the travel we can widen the horizon by enjoying the amazing natural landscape. And due to the reason that the scenery is full of exotic atmosphere, it will release us from the pressure of work and study and the worries we had in our own country, which give rise to a cheerful mood. Such a phenomenon can evoke the enthusiasm of work, a result that leads us to success. From the perspective, we can realize how meaningful a foreign travel is!
  With the first point comes the second demonstrating the glamour of culture. The travel to us is not only a physical relaxation but also a spiritual baptism. And the foreign culture is the symbol of the numinous wealth. The knowledge of the culture does strengthen the souls, clear visions, inspire the ambitions and surely qualify us to be the one that could adapt the diverse society.
  Impressive as the above points are, the third enjoys the same value. Traveling abroad can cultivate the ability of communication and develope the friendship with foreigners. From the communication with foreigners we can experience another mode of thinking and increase the width and depth of our own thinkings. It is the collision of thinking that challenged my preconception on some events. It could rock me to my core. In other words, it is hard to imagine what our world will be without the it.
  In the light of the above, we sense that it may be wiser for us to travel to a foreign country. Were the people to recognize this point, the would know how to improve thier lives by traveling abroad.

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