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发表于 2010-10-5 23:34:50 |显示全部楼层
:victory: Argument38: The following memo appeared in the newsletter of the West Meria Public Health Council.

"An innovative treatment has come to our attention that promises to significantly reduce absenteeism in our schools and workplaces. A study reports that in nearby East Meria, where fish consumption is very high, people visit the doctor only once or twice per year for the treatment of colds. Clearly, eating a substantial amount of fish can prevent colds. Since colds are the reason most frequently given for absences from school and work, we recommend the daily use of Ichthaid, a nutritional supplement derived from fish oil, as a good way to prevent colds and lower absenteeism."
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发表于 2010-10-7 04:50:22 |显示全部楼层
The following memo appeared in the newsletter of the West Meria Public
Health Council. "An innovative treatment has come to our attention that promises to significantly reduce absenteeism in our schools and workplaces. A study reports that in nearby East Meria, where fish consumption is very high, people visit the doctor only once or twice per year for the treatment of colds. Clearly, eating a substantial amount of fish can prevent colds. Since colds are the reason most frequently given for absences from school and work, we recommend the daily use of Ichthaid, a nutritional supplement derived from fish oil, as a good way to prevent colds and lower absenteeism."
我们注意到一种保证可以显著减少学校和工作岗位的缺席的革新疗法。一项研究报告说在附近的East Meria,鱼的消费量很高,那里的人们每年因为治感冒而去看医生的次数只有一或两次。显然,吃较大量的鱼可以预防感冒。由于感冒是学校和单位缺席的最常见原因,我们建议每天服用Ichthaid,一种从鱼油中提炼的营养物质,作为预防感冒和减少缺席率的有效措施。
一)        吃较大量的鱼可以预防感冒显然是不成立的。
二)        即使吃较大量的鱼可以预防感冒,也不能说明是Ichthaid,这种鱼油的提取物在发挥作用。
三)        Ichthaid可能有副作用,导致人们患上其他的疾病,这样反而会使缺席率升高。

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发表于 2010-10-7 12:51:27 |显示全部楼层
原题逻辑:要求日常食用从鱼提炼的Ichthaid?来防止感冒以减少矿工,因为常吃鱼?感冒少?;而感冒又是矿工的主要原因?
1、内层:colds are the reason most frequently given for absences from school and work 缺少调查证据,感冒不一定会导致矿工,(可能原因:感冒是一种常见的病,除非很严重一般不会影响工作学习,当然也因人而异;是否有拿感冒作为借口矿工,所以必须有一个针对Meria当地人口随机抽样的调查报告)。eating a substantial amount of fish can prevent colds缺少科学证据(Meria鱼的消费高不一定都是买回家自己吃,可能餐馆批量买进卖给当地游客或者加工包装后卖到外地;对于感冒人数多少与否不能以因感冒看医生少为依据,还可能感冒仅自己买药(注:尽量揭作者的短处而不是加入自己的意见如一般感冒了不用去看医生)、医生太远不方便=;即使吃鱼多、感冒人少也不能将二者联系起来,有其他因素可能physical nature、environment好。
2、外层:即使以上都成立,吃鱼多也不等于daily use of Ichthaid(二者从营养角度不等价;人们买鱼吃不一定会买这个吃、不一定喜欢吃;即使吃了也不一定是鱼油在起作用帮助减少感冒)

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