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When comes to the problem of unhealthy eating habits that disruptmodern people so much, there are several important bad life behaviors cancontribute to,such as the amazingly increasing pace of life rhythm,exorbitantattention to losing weight,lacking of knowledge of nutrition science.Advertising,however,isone of the most vital reasons for this.And,in my point of view,it is not exact to say that advertising is the only one.

One of the most important cause may be the fast rhythem of mordenlife.Because of the depression of the world's economy during last twoyears,it,now, requires more and more people to participate in the war ofeconomy,which will ensure the people a comfortable living condition.In such aworldwide background,people devote their whole time to work and study,and thatdeprives of their dinner time.It is not unusual that workers in the companyoften go to Mcdonald's nearby and get some hambergurs and fried-chickens astheir resource of breakfast and lunch.Their principle ,"fewer dinner time,morework time",makes them have a lower standard of eating——that is just nonesense of hungry is enough. Those fast food with barely nutritious contents,eventually,will lead workers and students to a fat shape in an abnormal state,alsobring a poor constitution in the mean time.

Another reason for the bad diet style is that increasing people,fromchildren to the elderly,excessively focus on their weight and body shape.Inorder to pursue an ideal figure,most of them refuse to add meat and eggs which containsabundant vitamin and protain into their dinner schedules .Thesepursuers,adversely, only eat fruit and nuts instead of noddles and rice.Infact,several girls even only drink water all day long to make sure a reductionof 3 kilos per day.Such an unreasonable eating model would definitely givebirth to severe diseases,if they never consider about transfering theirmisleading perception.

Besides,advertisingmay also accounts for the dinner habits without nutrition.Development of theadvertising enables people get the food information directly throughtelevisions and radios,but it is unfortunate that for the purpose ofprofits,messages of most advertisements exaggerate the effect of the food.Notonly the pictures can they see from the TV,but also the flysheets impressconsumers that the food is so delicious and nutritious beyond theirimagination.By the curiosity of the masses,they purchase the un healthy foodjust for the brand or the fashion.

In conclusion,from the threeabove reasons explained, it is obvious to say that advertising is not the onlyone most important factor of bad eating habits, pressure from the fast rhythmlife style and unrational pursuit of perfect figure may also attribute to this poorconsequence.Furthermore,it is vital for people to realize that a nutritiousdiet style is urgent for they to follow.And some nutrition knowledge should bestrongly required.

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When comes to the problem of unhealthy eating habits that disrupt modern people so much, there are several important bad life behaviors can contribute to, such as the amazingly increasing pace of life rhythm, exorbitantattention(这个词是什么意思？) to losing weight, lacking of knowledge of nutrition science. Advertising, however, is one of the most vital reasons for this. And, in my point of view, it is not exact to say that advertising is the only one.
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One of the most important cause may be the fast（quick） rhythm of modern life. Because of the depression of the world's economy during last two years, it, now, requires more and more people to participate in the war of economy,(这样写感觉不太好，用在这太大了) which will ensure the people a comfortable living condition. In such a worldwide background, people devote their whole time to work and study, and that deprives of their dinner time. It is not unusual that workers in the company often go to McDonald’s nearby and get some hamburgers and fried-chickens as their resource of breakfast and lunch. Their principle,"fewer dinner time, more work time", makes them have a lower standard of eating——that is just nonsense of hungry is enough. Those fast food with barely nutritious contents, eventually, will lead workers and students to a fat shape in an abnormal state, also bring a poor constitution in the mean time.& E0 y- w* m) T, I. V2 q8 I8 V

Another reason for the bad diet style is that increasing people, from children to the elderly, excessively focus on their weight and body shape .In order to pursue an ideal figure, most of them refuse to add meat and eggs which contains abundant vitamin and protein into their dinner schedules .These pursuers, adversely, only eat fruit and nuts instead of noodles and rice. In fact, several girls even only drink water all day long to make sure a reduction of 3 kilos per day. Such an unreasonable eating model would definitely give birth to severe diseases, if they never consider about transferring their misleading perception.9 y1 c4 c: L" a  x$ ]! }2 U0 j: D
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Besides, advertising may also accounts for the dinner habits without nutrition .Development of the advertising enables people get the food information directly through televisions and radios, but it is unfortunate that for the purpose of profits, messages of most advertisements exaggerate the effect of the food. Not only the pictures can they see from the TV, but also the flysheets impress consumers that the food is so delicious and nutritious beyond their imagination.  By the curiosity of the masses, they purchase the unhealthy food just for the brand or the fashion. A6 [% \: R                                 zhey
这一段感觉有点牵强。叙述不够充分。可以加入吃零食的坏习惯之类的。
In conclusion ,from the three above reasons explained, it is obvious to say that advertising is not the only one most important factor of bad eating habits, pressure from the fast rhythm life style and national pursuit of perfect figure may also attribute to this poor consequence. Furthermore, it is vital for people to realize that a nutritious diet style is urgent for them to follow. And some nutrition knowledge should be strongly required.

你有挺多拼写错误的我修改过来了就不标出来了
我觉得你的文章的主要问题是论述不够convincing.