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发表于 2010-12-5 18:25:24 |只看该作者 |倒序浏览
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TOPIC: argument38 - The following memo appeared in the newsletter of the West Meria Public Health Council.

"An innovative treatment has come to our attention that promises to significantly reduce absenteeism in our schools and workplaces. A study reports that in nearby East Meria, where fish consumption is very high, people visit the doctor only once or twice per year for the treatment of colds. Clearly, eating a substantial amount of fish can prevent colds. Since colds are the reason most frequently given for absences from school and work, we recommend the daily use of Ichthaid, a nutritional supplement derived from fish oil, as a good way to prevent colds and lower absenteeism."


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发表于 2010-12-8 13:19:34 |只看该作者
作者认为服用ichthaid可以有效预防感冒和缺勤。依据:east meria 的报告称,吃鱼很多的地方因为感冒而去看病的次数只有一到二次,说明吃鱼可以预防感冒,而感冒是学校和工作缺勤最主要的原因,所以可以降低缺勤率。

首先,ichthaid 和 east meria is different, 环境不同,患感冒的机会也是不同的,吃饭的方式和习惯也是不同的。可能吃鱼在ichthaid 是 useless。
其次,吃鱼是否可以预防感冒是值得考虑的,吃鱼多的同时,其他食物的食用情况不清楚,可能是因为其他的某种食物吃的也多和鱼一起起作用。
最后,感冒是缺勤的最主要的原因这一结论缺少有力的支持。没有提供缺勤人员的原因的统计,患感冒所占的比例。

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发表于 2010-12-8 20:04:27 |只看该作者
是east meria和west meria的比较,楼上打错了。ichthaid作为提炼物,可能与预防感冒无关,窃以为这一点应该比最后一条更好攻击。

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发表于 2010-12-12 16:10:26 |只看该作者
TOPIC: argument38 - The following memo appeared in the newsletter(实时通讯) of the West Meria Public Health Council.

"An innovative treatment has come to our attention that promises to significantly reduce absenteeism in our schools and workplaces. A study reports that in nearby East Meria, where fish consumption is very high, people visit the doctor only once or twice per year for the treatment of colds. Clearly, eating a substantial(大量的) amount of fish can prevent colds. Since colds are the reason most frequently given for absences from school and work, we recommend the daily use of Ichthaid, a nutritional supplement derived from fish oil, as a good way to prevent colds and lower absenteeism."


(1)East Meria的例子远远不足以表明吃鱼能防止感冒。
(2)也没有证据表明感冒时缺席的主要原因。
(3)即使承认以上两者,但是没有根据表明ichthaid是鱼类体内防止感冒的物质。

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