issue130 children socializing第一高频，求指导

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                   children socializing is actually a difficult matter. And I have to reach an agreement with the speaker’s position that how children are socialized determines the destiny of society. After all, children are the mainstay of the future. However, it is not the fact just as the speaker hold out but we have done a lot to cultivate better children.
                   To start with, I share the uniform attitude that children socializing is closely related with the destiny of society. Given that socialization embraces various aspects, I conclude them into three parts ,namely, how to making a living, how to getting along with others, how to protect oneself. Obviously , these skills conduce to build a sustainable sociaty ,in the other words , a better destiny of sociaty.
                    Where living skills is concerned, the phenomenon of unemployment and social crimes occur to our mind. Individuals lack of skills are easily fired , which leads to robbrey , stealing , and suicide. In addition, learning the way to coooperate with your companion makes for a harmony work space. Apt work space result in efficiency, in a sequence result in advanced society. What is more, if citizens are acquianted with the approach to defend themselves on accidents or violence, life are far away from death and grief. Above all, the massive project of socialize children connects immediately with the stable development of society.
                      However , the speaker have a narrow light on this project. In fact , a myriad of measures have taken to raise promising children. Taking schooling teaching for example,things have done to enhance the equipment of education in order to achieve better scores, and universities offer scholarship of every description. As a result, students are motivated to acquire more craftmanships . Besides, there are many courses about psychology and health available for all the students. They will get to know the appropriate way in which they deal with the relationship with their partners as well as that they keep a fine body and positive lifestyle.
Unfortunately, problems still exit. Children themselves not always catch the importance of society. A certain proportion seems unaware of it. They skip their class and spend the precious time on meaningless games, such as computer games. As a consequence, they fall behind the rest of the peers, even badly impact their health.
                   What on earth do the phenomenon result from?I harbor the idea that family education plays a great role on this issue. Just as a two-side sword, neither too much nor too little care is proper. On condition that children are doted excessively, they tend to take everything for granted the way they think things may be. Yet, the society is not operating as not expected that they are not willing to acknowledge the truth. That is to say, they may turn to the addiction of games or drugs. Gradually, they are declined to thieves and terrorists. The similar process comes to the ones who are less concerned. The situation is often that they feel lonely and sorrow, what is usually the case is that they opt to abandon themselves to do something wrong to grab else’s cautions. In a word, it is not we know less of the way to raise children who can bring about a better society, but the strength of our care or love that counts more.
                      In the final analysis, socializing of children is a challenging task and a must, the better the task is working, the better our society is developing. What is worth rejoicing, we have got out the way to highlight socializing. At the same time, we might think in retrospect so as to promote the method of socializing.(613)