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2011年3月14日 周一：0 c5 W5 X! a- o% x# v

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? do you think people should buy things made in their own country, even the price is higher than same things made somewhere else？

Should people buy things that made in their own country, as the statement content, regardless of the price which might be higher than the same thing that made in other places? Although supporting the goods of people’s own country appears to help economic growth of the nation, I do not agree with this notion because a nation’s economic development should depend on itself. There are two arguments to support my opinion.

First, consumers always have rights to purchase for the product they want, no matter where was the product made. In other words, they are free to buy a product with lower price but better quality even it is made outside their country. On the contrary, if they see fit for them to purchase for higher-price product, then it also makes sense because consumers are supposed to make decision according their own hobbies and context. There shouldn’t have been any judgment about right or wrong, should or shouldn’t. One popular product that attracts a lot of consumers only results from the quality and proper price itself, rather than whether it is made in the same region with its market.

Second, there will be a negative impact upon the market by making choice depend on prejudice in nation instead of a natural process of a healthy competition. By taking advantage of support from local residents, native manufacturers hardly concentrate on improve their products any more, which results in a overall decline of products’ quality level. Those manufacturers won’t be aspiring to transcend other foreign products because it seems that they share more market than the foreign ones and they actually received lucrative financial rewards. In the long run, people won’t tolerance their higher price and lower quality anymore, in the meanwhile the manufacturers will find that it has been a long way to catch up with foreign manufacturers.

In sum, consumers should be allowed to choose products based on their own condition rather than for a special purpose to prevent the native products which will lead to a stagnant in local manufacturers without healthy competition.

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2011年3月14日
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5 f! x- c3 C. ODo you agree ordisagree with the following statement? do you think people should buy thingsmade in their own country, even the price is higher than same things madesomewhere else？

Should people buythings that made in their own country, as the statement content, regardless ofthe price which might be higher than the same thing that made in other places? Althoughsupporting the goods of people’s own country appears to help economic growth ofthe nation, I do not agree with this notion because a nation’s economicdevelopment should depend on itself. There are two arguments to support myopinion.（重复，。。。）

First, consumersalways have rights to purchase for the product they want, no matter where wasthe product made（Where the product is made....这里用不着过去时). In other words, they are free to buy a product with lowerprice but better quality even it is made outside their country. On thecontrary, if they see fit（see是什么意思？） for them to purchase for higher-price product, thenit also makes sense because consumers are supposed to make decision accordingtheir own hobbies and context. There shouldn’t have been any judgment aboutright or wrong, should or shouldn’t. One popular product that attracts a lot ofconsumers only results from the quality and proper price itself, rather thanwhether it is made in the same region with its market.（连词很多，其实可以拆成两个句子说）

Second, there willbe a negative impact upon the market by making choice depending on prejudice innation instead of a natural process of a healthy competition. By takingadvantage of support from local residents, native manufacturers hardlyconcentrate on improve their products any more, which results in a overalldecline of products’ quality level. Those manufacturers won’t be aspiring to transcendother foreign products because it seems that they share more market than theforeign ones and they actually received lucrative financial rewards. In thelong run, people won’t tolerance their higher price and lower quality anymore,in the meanwhile the manufacturers will find that it has been a long way tocatch up with foreign manufacturers.

In sum, consumersshould be allowed to choose products based on their own condition rather thanfor a special purpose to prevent the native products which will lead to a stagnantin local manufacturers without healthy competition.




总体还不错～伶女同学还应注意 连词和介词的使用，，

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3.17.2011
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Does advice given by older people more valuable than from people at your age?

Should we take advice of our peers or people who are older than us, as the statement contents? In my opinion, I prefer to choose the latter one for their advice are always more thoughtful and useful, especially at the points when the decision is significant to my life. There are two arguments to support this.

The first argument lies in the fact that suggestions from older people are more thoughtful and deliberate, for the reason that older ones’ consideration from various aspects provides better solution or a thoughtful decision, rather than the monochrome thinking mode of young people. In other words, the more experience and problems people have come through, the more thoughtful they will be. Older people definitely experience more than the young ones, so that their advice involves empirical views which young people have not yet encountered. For example, I wanted to enter a nearby high school as most of my former classmates do, while my parents insisted to send me to a completely strange one with better education quality. Ultimately, upon graduation the best university in my country sent me a permission but others didn’t, which made me realize the importance to listen to older people.

Besides, many young people argue that older ones are not able to interpret their thoughts because older people are no longer young. Although that is an undeniable truth, this statement fails to take account for a important issue that every older one has passed through their young age. What is in young people’s mind, therefore, can’t be more familiar to older ones, because they not only have those experience as young people, they also have passed through the period. Moreover, older people are even afraid of the same mistake that might happen on young people, which make them place an affirmative duty on their own to guide young people. So their advices shouldn’t be ignored.

To sum up, I strongly agree that young people should take advices of older ones. Older people have more experience which makes them more thoughtful. Besides, they know exactly what young people think because they have passed through the period of being young so that their advice should be paid more attention.


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The lecture and the passage both concentrate on the issue that whether dinosaurs are endotherms or not. The professor in the lecture contends that dinosaurs are not endotherms against the three reasons demonstrated in the passage.

First, the polar region might be much warmer than today which was enough for dinosaurs to survive. And even if the weather was fairly cold, it is also possible for dinosaurs to migrate to other warm places or hibernate as most modern reptiles do.

Besides, the position of the legs can not be an evidence to support the demand for physical activity with high energy consuming. According to the professor, it is only efficient to support the heavy body so that dinosaurs could grow into a large size.

The last stance in the passage lies in the bone features in dinosaurs’ fossils. Although there are haversian canals, the growth rings also exist, which represents that dinosaurs’ growth rate varied throughout the year. It might grow rapid in the warm weather and slow or even stop when it is cold.

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The lecture and the passage both concentrate on the issue that whether dinosaurs are endotherms or not. The professor in the lecture contends that dinosaurs are not endotherms against the three reasons demonstrated in the passage.

First, the polar region might be much warmer than today which was enough for dinosaurs to survive. And even if the weather was fairly cold, it is also possible for dinosaurs to migrate to other warm places or hibernate as most modern reptiles do.: f& x  `3 k+ U) U8 ^# S
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Besides, the position of the legs can not be an evidence to support the demand for physical activity with high energy consuming. According to the professor, it is only efficient to support the heavy body so that dinosaurs could grow into a large size.5 Q7 a4 Z$ F' O% h
The last stance in the passage lies in the bone features in dinosaurs’ fossils. Although there are haversian canals, the growth rings also exist, which represents that dinosaurs’ growth rate varied throughout the year. It might grow rapid in the warm weather and slow or even stop when it is cold.


要点都涵盖了。第二点的叙述似乎可以在具体一点，点出腿的位置和“running”的关系。

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Should we take advice of our peers or people who are older than us, as the statement contents? In my opinion, I prefer（有点多余） to choose the latter one for their advice are always more thoughtful and useful, especially at the points (去掉更好）when the decision is significant to my life. There are two arguments to support this.5 N6 O+ [1 [( F
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The first argument lies in the fact that suggestions from older people are more thoughtful and deliberate, for the reason that （去掉）older ones’ consideration from various aspects provides better solution or a thoughtful decision, rather than the monochrome 色彩单一，不能用来形容考虑不周全吧thinking mode of young people. In other words, the more experience and problems people have come through, the more thoughtful they will be. Older people definitely experience more than the young ones, so that their advice involves empirical 实证的，用在这里不当views which young people have not yet encountered. For example, I wanted to enter a nearby high school as most of my former classmates do（本句时态）, while my parents insisted to send me to a completely strange one with better education quality. Ultimately, upon graduation the best university in my country sent me a permission but others didn’t, which made me realize the importance to listen to older people.(没有看懂这个例子）
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Besides, many young people argue that older ones are not able to interpret their thoughts because older people are no longer young. Although that is an undeniable truth, this statement fails to take account for a important issue that every older one（直接用people好了） has passed through their young age. What is in young people’s mind, therefore, can’t be more familiar to older ones, because they not only have those experience as young people, they also have passed through the period. Moreover, older people are even afraid of the same mistake that might happen on young people(how about this: afraid that the young people would repeat their mistakes, which make them place an affirmative duty on their own to guide young people. So their advices shouldn’t be ignored.
(this paragraph lacks clarity，因为besides后面我直接读下去不能理解，然后反过来再看，我才明白你想说什么)
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To sum up, I strongly agree that young people should take advices of older ones. Older people have more experience which makes them more thoughtful. Besides, they know exactly what young people think because they have passed through the period of being young so that their advice should be paid more attention.

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（evidence 是 不可数的）The lecture and the passage both concentrate on the issue that whether dinosaurs are endotherms or not. The professor in the lecture contends that dinosaurs are not endotherms against the three reasons demonstrated in the passage.
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First, the polar region might be much warmer than today which was enough for dinosaurs to survive. And even if the weather was fairly cold, it is also possible for dinosaurs to migrate to other warm places or hibernate as most modern reptiles do.

Besides, the position of the legs can not be an evidence to support the demand for physical activity with high energy consuming. According to the professor, it is only efficient to support the heavy body so that dinosaurs could grow into a large size.  S& f$ R7 O- r* y5 P2 E- W/ I
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The last stance in the passage lies in the bone features in dinosaurs’ fossils. Although there are haversian canals, the growth rings also exist, which represents that dinosaurs’ growth rate varied throughout the year. It might grow rapid in the warm weather and slow or even stop when it is cold.
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Should we take advice of our peers or people who are older than us, as the statement contents? In my opinion, I prefer to choose the latter one for their advice are always more thoughtful and useful, especially at the points when the decision is significant to my life. There are two arguments to support this.   （should we....是我们应不应该... 然后你说i support the latter one . 这个逻辑不合理吧.应该是which one .or who should we take advice from...)
The first argument lies in the fact that suggestions from older people are more thoughtful and deliberate, for the reason(有点冗长) that older ones’ consideration from various aspects provides better solution or a thoughtful decision, rather than the monochrome(这个词应该是形容色彩单调吧。不适合用来形容想法单一) thinking mode of young people. In other words, the more experience and problems people have come through, the more thoughtful they will be. Older people definitely experience（have experienced） more than the young ones, so that their advice involves empirical views which young people have not yet encountered. For example, I wanted to enter a nearby high school as most of my former classmates do, while my parents insisted to send me to a completely strange one with better education quality. Ultimately, upon graduation the best university in my country sent me a permission but others didn’t, which made me realize the importance to listen to older people.（这个例子说明了什么？？？） 5 I# x8 _3 o. i* R* z6 S/ O
Besides, many young people argue that older ones are not able to interpret their thoughts because older people are no longer young. Although that is an undeniable truth, this statement fails to take account for a(an) important issue that every older one has passed through their young age. What is in young people’s mind, therefore, can’t be more familiar to older ones, because they not only have those experience as young people, they also have passed through the period. Moreover, older people are even afraid of the same mistake that might happen on young people, which make them place an affirmative duty on their own to guide young people. So their advices shouldn’t be ignored.(这段的中心论点是什么？？，例子呢？？) . _0 Z; e5 m/ s2 A- z& E% u
To sum up, I strongly agree that young people should take advices of older ones. Older people have more experience which makes them more thoughtful. Besides, they know exactly what young people think because they have passed through the period of being young so that their advice should be paid more attention.

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09.9.19北美
Do you agree or disagree that with the following statement? It’s more important for the government to spend money to build art museums and music performance center than to build recreational facilities (such as swimming pool, playgrounds).

Should government spend money to build art museum and music performance center rather than some recreational facilities like swimming pool or playgrounds in the city? Although some might argue that health is the most essential aspect of people’s life so that the investment on facilities for public sports is more practical, as far as I concern, museum and performance center should be take prior to sport facilities for several reasons.

To begin with, art and music indigenous to a city could stands for the cultural heritage that our ancestor remains, which government is definitely obligated to protect and improve. In my hometown, there is a Historical Museum of Hubei Province free to public, exhibiting large amount of antiques that precursor left including a complete series of instruments which enables wonderful music performance even today to visitors. Foreigners are impressed in those antiques while we learn more about our past at the same time. After rebuilt last year, it attracts more visitors which make the place well-known across the nation.

Consider other forms like painting exhibition, orchestra concert, ballet performance that museums and performance center can hold, all present the indigenous and distinct cultural of the city. To be the symbolic building in the area is a real possibility for those museums and centers. In the long run, both the building and the cultural of these places, therefore, will stimulate economic growth, provide more job opportunities and bring lucrative financial rewards to the government and natives.

Admittedly, people indeed tend to pay more attention to their own health recently as the technological advances comes enhances living standard and increases the pressure for work and study in day-to-day life. As a result, more and more private gym or sports centers are built which provides all kinds of facilities for running, practicing, exercise; classes of yoga, dancing; and the most important one- professional training specific to every person, which helps to keep fit with expertise’s direction. On the other hand, people also find another way to release pressure, not in physically through sports but in mentally by appreciating art shows and music performance. So art and music has become increasingly important in everday life.

In sum, art museum and music performance centre help the government to thrive the city by establishment of cultural identity, stimulation of economic growth, increasing the supply of jobs, affording a way to release pressure mentally. And as the improvement of people’ living standard, issues about health should be left to expertise in gym or sports center in which providing professional facilities and advices.

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09.9.19北美
Do you agree or disagree that with the following statement? It’s more important for the government to spend money to build art museums and music performance center than to build recreational facilities (such as swimming pool, playgrounds).


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09.10.10大陆
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同意不同意：It is easier to be a success in the past than it is today. 过去比现在更容易成功


3.23
09.1.23北美
独立写作：   

Do you think that young people should take several different kinds of job before they take a career in a long term?

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09.2.27北美
独立写作：

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? A job with more vacation time is better than a job with high salary but less vacation time.

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09.3.27北美
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teacher shuld or not talking their social or political views to student in the class.

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09.4.3北美
独立写作. 同意否“提高教育水平的最佳方法是提高教师工资”"The best way to improve the quality of education is to increase teachers' salaries”

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08.8.23北美
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Do you agree or disagree that a teacher who is serious and strict is more efficient/ effective than a teacher who is humor and easygoing?
你是否同意：严苛的老师比幽默和EASYGOING的老师教书更有效率？

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