【Daily Writing作文特训小组】taybson作业帖

taybsonUID: 2975013

1月27日 独立写作101203NA
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Parents should help children to do their work or encourage childrento do their work independently.


Although parents can not live with their children all life long.Children have to learn from their parents during the time they live together.Most parents affect their children more than other factors in the society.Better communication can help their children get a bigger progress in their lives.


In the first place,some of the schoolworks are so difficult toward the children,parents who are better educated should help with their children or at least give them some tips.That will not only reduce the time the children spend on works,but also improve the ability to solve diverse problems.Every child has schoolworks to do after school.They always get very tired after a diurnal learning.They always want to get the schoolwork to be done as soon as possible.So they will have more time to have fun at home.But a mathematic problem may destroy their plan.If at a bad condition,they can not even finish it till midnight by themselves.However,a better educated parent can appear in front of them after their really hard working and do them a favor.Therefore,they will get a better understanding of the question.They can also have a better sleep at night.


Secondly,during the communication ,parents may find deficiency of their children.It will much better help parents to communicate with teachers in order to get a better improve at school.I know some parents,they are always very busy either on their work or on their business.They spend little time to communicate with their children.They only care children' clothing and eating and know nothing about their lives at school.Most of the children have raised bad habits such as smoking,fighting and so forth.I believe the bad habits can be eliminated if parents can spend more time with their children and have a readily communicate with teachers.
Children are like trees which should be trimmed during the growing time.


Finally,the communication between parents and children will lead their relationship to a higher degree.The children will live much heathier than those who left their parents and live a independent life early.Every children have knotty affairs especially during their puberty.Parents have experienced a lot.They can give advices if children open their mind.And after solving the problems,the relationship always become much deeper.However,some children can not find their way to solve these problems.Therefore,the problems become increasingly larger and more complex.A few of them even gave their lives up.That is terrible.


In my opinion,the children should grow up with their parents and communicate with them more.Because parents are the best teacher in the world.We can learn a lot from them.And also,we will live a much healthier life both internally and externally.Thus,I don't agree with the statement.

鸟儿UID: 3238411

nice points~

Joymoon0307UID: 3145258

改好了~~

taybsonUID: 2975013

3# Joymoon0307
改的太详细了。谢谢。
没在论坛上互批过作文。
不过我会努力提高的。

Sudden2012UID: 2856328

taybson，不好意思哈，有点晚了。加油哈

alexfanfanUID: 3133140

不好意思 晚了 1/27的