攒RP共享一点自己写的王京竹3月独立提纲

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楼主昨天考完，之前写了二十多篇作文 虽然一个都没中 早上起来看了北美转播，没想到真考了  人品没白攒啊！！！！

在没粗分的这段日子里继续攒人品  口语T4有一个例子没来得及说 其他的感觉大体还行，听力是经典加试，作文敲了500多字

一战还是没有太多经验，等出分才比较好判断ETS到底判分如何（就自己实际的情况而言）

以下是楼主写的王京竹JJ里独立的提纲，实际作文也有，提纲里并没有每篇都写，仅供参考，等人分期间攒RP
写作的确是个积累的过程，写了数量多了实力也就上去了

几点说明：楼主大多用2-1，2段论述1段让步的结构，有时候3-1
<>是指举反例；
Admittedly后是让步，^后是指反攻(however)的部分，→是代表逻辑推理，出现很多→的句子是逻辑说理的大致结构


Parents shouldencourage their children to do their schoolwork independently rather than helpchildren to do their schoolwork.
Independently:
1 form goodstudying habits
i. make out time schedule, straighten thingsout, simplify thing
ii. memorize, review text books psychologists
2 formindependence
i. deal with things by themselves
ii. face failure, learn from mistakes
3 parentsunfamiliar with studying contents
Admittedly: withparents’ help, finishing quickly ^overlook the solving procedure, focus only onthe final answer

When people needto discuss upsetting or controversial problems with others, some people preferto use e-mail or text messaging. Others prefer to use telephone or voicemessaging.
Text messaging
1 involves moreparticipants
freedom, accessible to anybody,<>conference
2 updated in time
update, informed, guarantee simultaneity andinstancy
2 bear closeexamination
i. meticulously organize the argumentation
longer consideration → logisticoutline, accurate & profound understanding
ii. examine the validity and reliability ofstatistics
Admittedly: voicemessaging debate directly, conceive emotion of opponents ^ disordered oraldebate, text messaging more acceptable

To make childrendo well at school, parents should limit the hours that a child spends onwatching TV.
Agree
1 exertdeleterious influence on children
sex scenes, violence, imitate, hard toconcentrate
2 disorientation
commercial promoting consumerism and studyinguseless, discourage the pursuit of knowledge
3 take up time ofstudying
Admittedly:broaden horizon and enrich knowledge ^ other appropriate methods

There is never areason for people to be rude(impolite) to another person.
Agree
1 for individuals
i. regulation in public places e.g. queue upin lines, behave oneself
ii. lubrication among strangers e.g. greetwith smile
2 enhancerelationships in groups
i. harmonious atmosphere in a family e.g.: uncle
ii. efficiency in a company
Admittedly: in timesof busy easily neglected ^ avoid inevitable quarrels

Since people carepublic recognition more than money, they will work harder to obtain publicrecognition even though there is no more money given.
Depends ( 忐忑啊，莫写到这个咯！), not mutually exclusive 这个结构楼主也不清楚ETS吃不吃，只是那天没话这样写的而已，后又加一个一边倒的提纲
1 ordinary people,earning money is more essential
make aliving and support family
Maslow’s hierarchical needs pyramid
2 well-known people, build up positive image, raise public awareness
non-profit advertisement, NGO, establishfunds etc

Disagree
1 money last long
Recognition diminish over time, money alwaysuseful
2 money isrestricted in certain situation
i. terrestrial
ii. cultural


College oruniversities should offer students a better job preparation before they canstart working.
Agree:
1 obtain practicalwork experience e.g. medical student take residency, law student
2 transition fromschool to society
i. communicate with various people at worke.g. Mr.Zhu
ii. handle problems in life on their own e.g.housing, rent, purchasing

Compared withpeople who live in cities, people who live in rural areas can take better careof their families.
Disagree:
1 city dwellershave better living conditions
departments, air conditioner especiallyelderly people in poor health
2 equipments andconstruction provide convenience
shopping malls, gyms, pharmacies etc withinthe block <> drive miles to eat
3 better medicaland educational condition
i. serious diseases like heart attack, canceretc
ii. best educational resources in city appealparents and children
Admittedly: rural area less pollution, fresh air, clean water ^ technology make the better environmentin cities possible

People are easier to become educated than in the past?
Agree:
1 cannot receive education for historical reasons
e.g. ancient China, only boys allowed, ZhuYingtai
2 not aware of the significance of studying
e.g. father’s brother drop out of school
analysis of Department of Edu, literacy ratein proportion with average revenue
3 development of education
construction of schools, basic equipments
Admittedly: less temptation or distraction, concentrate better in the past ^ more people gainaccess to the school nowadays

It is often not a good thing for people to move to a new country because they will lose their oldfriends
Disagree:
1 keep contact with old friends
technique,communication methods
2 real friendship doesn’t fade when time elapses
3 adapt ourselves to new community
social & gregarious animals parties, unions
make new friends
Admittedly:cultural shocks, unbridgeable gulfs ^ adapt and get accustomed to

Although science and technology will continue to improve, the most significant improvement forthe quality of people’s lives have already taken place.
Agree:
1 life efficiency increased due to technology advance
i. communication e.g. cellphone, facetime,skype
ii. transportation e.g. high-speed railway,plane
2 life span extends
i. birth and survival rates increased e.g.grandpa’s few brothers and sisters survive
ii. pay more attention to health
Admittedly: cure other incorrigible diseases due to medical advance and facilities ^ distant andobscure innovation, already changed a lot.

Which kind of university do you prefer? Universities whose graduates can find good jobs oruniversities where there are famous professors?
Good jobs.
1 most students attend universities to get a good job e.g. inclination to the major likefinance, economy
2 good jobs lay far-reaching influences on student than professors. high income, better living standard
3 university students should study by themselves
Admittedly: famous professors add to reputation ^ famous professors ≠ goodprofessors

The advice from grandparents has no use for their grandchildren because the world changed a lotduring the past 50 years.
Disagree:
1 moral principle:honesty, tolerance, justice, sincerity eternally predominant. Passed downgeneration by generation
treat others sincerely, make true friends; braveand resilient, overcome the obstacles; keep working hard, make yourselfcompetitive in the fierce *
2 life goes in a cycle as history does. the things out of date being popular again *
3 giving advice to the young establishes an emotional bound between grandparents andgrandchildren, regardless of what the advice is. showing love and concern for grandchildren. respect.
Admittedly: some of the advice is cliché and platitude, ^ worth taken because the long survivingand adaptation to the change

Some people think that a university professor should focus time on doing research; while othersthink that the main role of a professor is to educate students in a university.
1 teaching is the basis of doing research. without systematic command of academic knowledge hardly canone readily do the research
2 teaching is more demanding and sophisticated.* ( explain complex term to students withoutbackground knowledge; pinpoint the parts obscure the students)
3 most professors consider doing research more profitable, go to the specific institutes. ∴encourage more professors to teach
Admittedly: doing research is more profitable. The academic level to a great extent hinges on theresearching. ^ teaching is the fundament and root of a university

Parents should allow their children to make mistakes and let them learn from their ownmistakes.
Agree:
1 success lies in failure
2 lessons from mistakes are more impressive*
3 mistakes made in the adolescence or adulthood may be incorrigible and irreversible
Admittedly:mistakes are painful and bad memories for young children ^ mistakes inevitable,one cannot live a life without making faults.

The most important problems affecting our society today could be solved within our lifetime.
Disagree:
1 running out of unrenewable resources
i. automobiles depend on fossil fuels
ii. factories burning coals
2 pollution,greenhouse effect
3 growing population
i. city overcrowded, no enough place accommodatepeople
ii. employment competition
iii. high crime rate
Admittedly: modern technologies mitigate/allay the seriousness to some extent ^ long termaccumulation/cumulation could not be relieved overnight

Universities should spend more money on improving facilities(like library, computer labs)than hiring famous teachers?
Hire professors:
1 professors take effect in the long term
i. facilities wear out while professorsbecome sophisticated and erudite while aging
ii. universities profit from professors inthe long term*
good professors→studentsget good grades→find good jobs→attract more students→make more money
3 professors and students influence mutually
Make progress together；analytical and critical thinking
Admittedly:facilities enrich students’ knowledge, broaden horizon, and gain them practicalskills ^

One of your classmates needs help with some schoolwork, which solution would you recommendyour classmates should do, to ask you for help or to find a professional tutorfor help. Include reasons and details to in your response
Ask tutor:
1 more effectively and efficiently
tutor: deep understanding of knowledge and skills; ability of organize loose ; well familiar with the exercises; overallview
2 professional
i. teach the student in an accessible way
ii. professional, pay and do the job
<>pals not available at any time
3 suffer from peer pressure, not willing to help others
Admittedly: don’thave to pay ask students for help ^ for better understanding, digest knowledge


Is it better to finish a projectcompletely and then begin a new one than work on two or more projects at thesame time?
1 coping withsingle case is not realistic
e.g. boss allocates several cases; students have to study various subjects at the same time
2 effective &efficient
3 develop one’spotential
urgent→ forced towork harder→finish beyond expectation
Admittedly:concentrate better, simple finish a single task ^ learn to deal with many casesat the same time is necessary in the fast-pace society

Spending money on traveling & vacationvs. saving for future.
Traveling
1 pollution and deterioration, go to see the spectacular sceneries before they disappear e.g. Maldivesislands, Mount Kilimanjaro
2 life is short, enjoy your life
e.g. some senior citizens in China, wealthy but low livingstandards
3 the value of a certain amount of moneydecreases with time
inflation,financial crisis, rather buy luxuries
Admittedly: spending large amounts ofmoney for immediate enjoyment hastily irresponsible, save for certain amount ofmoney for emergencies. ^ cannot predict what happens tomorrow, pathetic,regrettably

It is more enjoyable to have a job, and you work only three days a week with long hours rather than work five days a week withshorter hours.
3 days
1 more time for journey
2 working 5 days makes people lazy, procrastination
loose schedule→
do not push himself/ herself , “no need tohurry, I still have time to finish” →procrastination
Admittedly: working five days people are less stressful ^ for working efficiency , and more enjoyable holiday