ISSUE 105 106 126 求指导 写了好几篇了 没感觉长进。。还有2周考试。。

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105) Claim: Imagination is a more valuable asset than experience.


Reason: People who lack experience are free to imagine what is possible without the constraints of established habits and attitudes.


Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim and the reason on which that claim is based.







正文：

Imaginationis an indispensible capacity of a scientist whose research is in the frontierof his field.To some extent, the more plentiful imagination of the scienceworkers means the more successful research in a new domain.While theexperience, as the writer has stated , sometimes actually put a constraint onthe development of our science because of the stereotype of established habitsand attitudes which have been deposed
onus. Does this fact mean that imagination is a more valuable asset thanexperience?

Admittedly, as the history has told us ,we wouldn't like to get considerable progresswithout imagination.For example ,if the Brother White hadn’t imagined that oneday they eventually can fly freely in the sky, I think the plane is not likelyto be invented, or at least so soon .There are many other cases none of whichhas not told the importance and cruelty of imagination.And people without muchexperience dare to imagine the wildest thing in the world because they don'thave a stereotype.But we must have a clear cognition that any imaginationwithout a theory's support can be just a crazy dream.

Experience,the intellegence's accumulation of our ancestors' works and attempts, is the mostimportant base on which our imagination should be based .Suppose that onemethod of a research has already been justified unreasonable ,but a personwithout acknowledgement about the former experience spends much time imaginingthat this method ,in the end,could work aslike what he imagines.Isn't thatrediculous?Thus,although imagination is important ,we can neither overlook theimportance of experience ,nor use imagination to replace
the role of experience .In my observation, Ithink the most appropriate relation between imagination and experience shouldbe
complementary relationship.

Thereare many good examples in which the combination of imagination and experienceeventually lead us to the final satisfied results.Shenzhou spaceship, amasterpiece of China's scientist workers, is a perfect combination ofimagination and experience.Since long long ago,Chinese people has kept imagining the scenery on the moon,the story ofChang E 's journy to the moon is one produce of this imagination.Now throughseveral generation's endeavors, after thousands of failsures,Chinese peoplerealize their ancient dream using both predecessors' experience and their ownexperience.

To sumup,I think they,imagination and experience,are both indispensable that we needto adjust the role of imagination and experience to the right place,where theyare complementary to each other,rather than to distinguish which one is moreimportant.



PS：问个格式问题，段落之间要空行吗？看到有个经验贴说一定要空

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1# niuniua

Imagination is an indispensable capacity of a scientist whose research is in the frontier of his field.To some extent, the more plentiful imagination of the science 要空格workers means the more successful research in a new domain.While the experience, as the writer has stated , sometimes actually put a constraint on the development of our science because of the stereotype of established habits and attitudes which have been deposed
onus. Does this fact mean that imagination is a more valuable asset than experience?

Admittedly, as the history has told us ,we wouldn't like to (get considerable progress) fulfill outstanding achievementwithout imagination.For example ,if the Brother White hadn’t imagined that oneday they eventually (can)could fly freely in the sky, I think the plane is not likely to be invented, or at least so soon .There are many other cases none of which has not told the importance and cruelty of imagination.And people without much experience dare to imagine the wildest thing in the world because they don't have a stereotype.But we must have a clear cognition that any imagination without a theory's support can be just a crazy dream.

最好有个however Experience,(the intellegence's accumulation of our ancestors' works and attempts) the accumulation of intelligence within our ancestor's works and attempts, is the most important base on which our imagination should be based两个base重复了 .Suppose that one method of a research has already been justified unreasonable ,but a person without acknowledgement about the former experience spends much time imagining that this method ,in the end,could work as like what he imagines.Isn't that ridiculous?Thus,although imagination is important ,we can neither overlook theimportance of experience ,nor use imagination to replace the role of experience .In my observation, (I think )the most appropriate relation between imagination and experience should be complementary relationship.

There are many good examples in which the combination of imagination and experience eventually lead us to the final (satisfied )satisfying results.Shenzhou spaceship, a master piece of China's scientist workers, is a perfect combination of imagination and experience.Since long long ago,Chinese people has kept imagining the scenery on the moon,the story of Chang E 's journey to the moon is one produce of this imagination.Now through several generation's endeavors, after thousands of fail(s)ures,Chinese people realize their ancient dream using both predecessors' experience and their own experience.

To sum up,I think they,imagination and experience,are both indispensable that we need to adjust the role of imagination and experience to the right place,where they are complementary to each other,rather than to distinguish which one is more important.

有不少错别字。
另外句子读起来不是很顺，可能不必要的附加结构和反意结构用的太多，比如第二段所有的句子都是反意表述的，有点恐怖。。。正反要平衡一点~

大家都说段落要空行的，可能也方便老师阅卷吧。
同616，加油！

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2# loly_he
thanks!确实反义句用的太多，隔几天后，自己读都这么觉得~