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    Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Although science and technology will continue to improve, the most significant improvement for the quality of people’s lives have already taken place.

There is no denying that the quality of our live have improved rapidly,it all own to our speedy social and economic development,it is also acknowledged that ,however ,our environment  as well as the transportation and so on still need to be desried. as far as I'm concerned,I favor the idea that the most significant improvement for the quality of people's lives have not taken place.
   In the first place,That we spare no effect deforesting and the things like that leads to threat our lives.Although our science and technology was developing faster,what I'm in want to remind is that the speed of our science and technology is lower than the worsen of the environment .therefore,we still
   In the second place,in practices ,our live quality could still be improved ,.....I really don't know how to write the followings.Please forgive me .

  

llsss_1234UID: 2998447

just move on,write more what you think

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llsss_1234 发表于 2013-4-23 22:00
just move on,write more what you think

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llsss_1234 发表于 2013-4-24 15:11
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太谢谢了，真的，好感动