[口语小组]chenchengtao作业贴（0222）

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zyd8100 发表于 2014-1-28 20:52
对了，我评的是你的23号的，因为找不到27号的

不好意思，前天上傳了，請見諒，謝謝！

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zyd8100 发表于 2014-1-28 20:52
对了，我评的是你的23号的，因为找不到27号的

不好意思，前天上傳了，請見諒，謝謝！

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zyd8100 发表于 2014-1-28 20:52
task1, the reason is that (不需要because)
我觉得第一第二题应该重要来讲例子， 说具体说细节，而不是宽 ...

嗯，謝謝，我會在繼續試試看的，感謝

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派大星Emma 发表于 2014-1-26 21:28
同学你好，我是和你1.24.25互评的小伙伴，我只看到你上传了23号之前的作业，所以想问下，是我这边显示问题还 ...

哈囉，不好意思，我上傳了，不知道有沒有看到呢，謝謝

咕叽乌拉UID: 3453591

1.28
1.I have limit budget->had limited
2.want to->wanted，后面好几处也有这样的问题，因为是描述的过去的事，记得用过去时啦
3.注意下very中v的发音
4.题目问的是“Describe a situation in which you asked help from others. How was it in the end? ”建议后面说下最后去了那人家里住，他提供了可口的local food给你之类的啦
T2
1.save time and also to save money->save time and money
2.和T1一样的问题，讲例子要用过去时啦

感觉比上次听流畅些啦，加油，另外我的1.28麻烦你也点评下噢

咕叽乌拉UID: 3453591

1.29
T1
1.建议可以具体讲讲他具体做哪方面NGO的东西，这样细腻点
2.that的发音听起来有点像that's
3.和1.28同样的问题啦，过去时
4.very friendly and very ambitious->very friendly and ambitious
T2
1.do not的发音听起来像di not
2.that后面把题目完全重复了遍，建议不用重复题目啦，直接说I do not agree with this statement就好啦
3.一样的问题，例子部分的过去时问题

LZ一定要注意这个问题啊，两天的四道题都是用错了时态噢

zyd8100UID: 3475286

1.27
t1：There are some problems. I don't understand the phrase"because my twitter"？Do you mean "because my teacher"？I think you should use the word "instruction" instead of "introduce". Also, the word "mathmatical" is spoken wrongly.
If you found that you are saying a wrong sentence, don't worry and use the phrase"I mean" to lead the sentence to the right way. For example, did not don't worry. Finally, you can speak more detailed. Just prepare some example, and then you will find that the example you use will be abundant.
t2: Generally, we control the beginning in 15s to remain enough time for the example.
I think the example is not good, because it does not tell the detail why you are interruptted or what your feeling is and so on.
Therefore, my suggestion is that prepare some examples, just tell a story and focus on the detail. You do a good job in speaking, try it.

caicaifish2013UID: 3452799

楼主，我明天给你评价，今天在亲戚家，而且刚到，不好意思，请见谅。

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咕叽乌拉 发表于 2014-2-1 21:38
1.29
T1
1.建议可以具体讲讲他具体做哪方面NGO的东西，这样细腻点

好！謝謝謝謝，我會注意的！

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zyd8100 发表于 2014-2-1 22:47
1.27
t1：There are some problems. I don't understand the phrase"because my twitter"？Do you mean "b ...

Very thanks for your valuable suggestions! I learn a lot. :D

zyd8100UID: 3475286

额，你咋老是不上传来，上传了你私信一下我啊

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zyd8100 发表于 2014-2-4 20:53
额，你咋老是不上传来，上传了你私信一下我啊

好～ 好～ 沒問題！不好意思歐

caicaifish2013UID: 3452799

dropbox 的网速貌似不咋地呀，方便用百度云吗？

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我没有找到你的作业，等你上传了再回复我一下吧。

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caicaifish2013 发表于 2014-2-6 21:59
dropbox 的网速貌似不咋地呀，方便用百度云吗？

I am sorry. With the limit of the speed of my internet, I finally got your task in 2.1, which seemed too late. Please forgive me.
I think your pronounciation is really very excellent. When I first hear your answer, I am shocked. I wonder how to learn. Could you tell me the method?
Let us come to the tasks.
Task1. I think the task demands us to give a suggestion. But what you answer is the problem we are facing about environment. I think if you can talk about something about how to deal with the problem, your answer is excellent.

Task2. I think this answer is a good answer. because the job can enrich our social experience, you prefer to take a job in summer vacation. I only find a problem about grammer, that is "try to find a job can help...". I think you had better use "finding a job can help..."

after all, I think your pronounciation and accent is really perfect.