求问argument40和74题

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40. Milk and dairy products are rich in vitamin D and calcium—substances essential for building and maintaining bones. Many people therefore say that a diet rich in dairy products can help prevent osteoporosis, a disease that is linked to both environmental and genetic factors and that causes the bones to weaken significantly with age. But a long-term study of a large number of people found that those who consistently consumed dairy products throughout the years of the study have a higher rate of bone fractures than any other participants in the study. Since bone fractures are symptomatic of osteoporosis, this study result shows that a diet rich in dairy products may actually increase, rather than decrease, the risk of osteoporosis.

74. The president of Grove College has recommended that the college abandon its century-old tradition of all-female education and begin admitting men. Pointing to other all-female colleges that experienced an increase in applications after adopting coeducation, the president argues that coeducation would lead to a significant increase in applications and enrollment. However, the director of the alumnae association opposes the plan. Arguing that all-female education is essential to the very identity of the college, the director cites annual surveys of incoming students in which these students say that the school's all-female status was the primary reason they selected Grove. The director also points to a survey of Grove alumnae in which a majority of respondents strongly favored keeping the college all female.

这两个题都有正反两方的观点，大家是找的是哪几个错误的~谢谢~

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拿47做例子
前面几句话可以说是背景，介绍了一种many people认为的观点，即 a diet rich in dairy products can help prevent osteoporosis。
真正要关注和寻找逻辑错误的是But之后的句子。即a long term study所引出的一种新结论。

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foamfly 发表于 2013-8-28 16:22
拿47做例子
前面几句话可以说是背景，介绍了一种many people认为的观点，即 a diet rich in dairy product ...

所以74是在however之后找错误喽？
谢谢~

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foamfly 发表于 2013-8-28 16:22
拿47做例子
前面几句话可以说是背景，介绍了一种many people认为的观点，即 a diet rich in dairy product ...

74题除了1、反驳incoming student 的调查2、反驳在校女学生的调查 两点以外还可以写什么呢？

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love_pxijun 发表于 2013-8-28 22:54
74题除了1、反驳incoming student 的调查2、反驳在校女学生的调查 两点以外还可以写什么呢？

eg, 校友的反对的影响，校友的态度会不会在改革后改变等等。仅供参考

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foamfly 发表于 2013-8-28 16:22
拿47做例子
前面几句话可以说是背景，介绍了一种many people认为的观点，即 a diet rich in dairy product ...

我觉得这类题目前后都应该考虑吧，因为两个题目前半部分都有典型的逻辑错误额，而且本身题目的结论就是支持后半部分，反对前半部分吧。。而且argument题目要求有的确实有weaken or strengthen，不过很少见到范文有说哪点可以加强的，求指导。。

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lxf19930328 发表于 2013-8-29 16:51
我觉得这类题目前后都应该考虑吧，因为两个题目前半部分都有典型的逻辑错误额，而且本身题目的结论就是支 ...

我见过有习作同时写了WEAKEN 和STRENGTHEN的，只是容易写乱。
还是40题做例子，找出s后半段的论述，其实就是w前半部分。
我个人不喜欢写strengthen。写不好真的容易看起来很乱。。。

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foamfly 发表于 2013-8-29 18:44
我见过有习作同时写了WEAKEN 和STRENGTHEN的，只是容易写乱。
还是40题做例子，找出s后半段的论述，其实 ...

昨天刚考完。。。
还好没考到这两题，可以跟gre说拜拜了。。