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发表于 2014-7-24 18:46:58 |显示全部楼层

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题目采用AW高频。（参加八月组：https://bbs.gter.net/thread-1496041-1-1.html）

八月组每两天一次小组作业互评。参加互改鼓励不强制，请量力而行，保证写作和互评质量。

时间说明：7.25晚23点结束占座，并且用附件上传自己的习作，并附上方便大家讨论的大纲总结，回复互评伙伴楼层完成互评，7.26早上来看分组信息，请注意，如果只占座不上传习作，我会把上传习作的分组，未上传的分组。或者可与互评伙伴协调好互评时间。欢迎在楼内各种讨论分享，秉承小组共享互助宗旨，有拖延不改的欢迎发帖或私信举报，情节严重永久封杀ID

分组信息：
mihuecho批改longlongblack的习作
longlongblack批改lazycatherine的习作
lazycatherine批改mihuecho的习作
Torby与VampireYI互批习作
下面的网友没有上传习作：
蜜与奶罐头与kathykathy~~~互批习作

11) People's behavior is largely determined by forces not of their own making.

Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.

13) In an attempt to improve highway safety, Prunty County last year lowered its speed limit from 55 to 45 miles per hour on all county highways. But this effort has failed: the number of accidents has not decreased, and, based on reports by the highway patrol, many drivers are exceeding the speed limit. Prunty County should instead undertake the same kind of road improvement project that Butler County completed five years ago: increasing lane widths, resurfacing rough highways, and improving visibility at dangerous intersections. Today, major Butler County roads still have a 55 mph speed limit, yet there were 25 percent fewer reported accidents in Butler County this past year than there were five years ago.

Write a response in which you discuss what specific evidence is needed to evaluate the argument and explain how the evidence would weaken or strengthen the argument.

占座ddl：7.25晚23点互评ddl：7.26晚24点

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