因为要申请美帝的phd 所以最近在套磁,其实之前套过一次,是根据网上的模板写的,但是都被pass掉了,总结的原因是格式不正确 没有实质性内容 并且还有一些语法错误,总结完这些教训之后又开始了第二次套磁,这次是纯diy的,并且已经找了一位在悉尼大学的学长修改了下格式,让一位英语系的同学改了下语法上的问题,但是还是觉得不够完善,所以想在论坛里请各位帮忙看看,之前也看了很多套磁的帖子,也希望能够给同样申请留学的同学们得到一些经验~以下是套磁的原文
Dear Dr.xxx
I am a medical student from HeBei medical university,China.When searching about cardiovascular disease research articles,I found that your team was focus on cellular pathways that regulate cardiovascular function subject,I am so interested in that,and also make review about relationship between depression and cardiovascular disease,including inflammation response with platelet aggregation and Ca2+ channel affect in the coronary heart disease.For the time to come I also want to study ion channel mechanism in the arrhythmia.
In my opinion,these study maybe effect new predict cardiovascular disease way in factors of high risk individuals. inflammation research can also as new prevention measures cardiovascular function mechanism can improve treatment approach,breaking through in making drugs for patients.
I wish you could give me some advice of inflammation response and ion mechansim in cardiovascular disease,such as study methods and future direction.
I am looking forward for your reply.
Sincerely
xxx
谢谢各位的帮助!