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发帖人:liulangde_bugua
背景:6.30 成都 F1 2000 MPA(Public Administration) 自费 Rejected
我真的很无语了,昨天2000被哈里微笑的拒绝.很麻木了,昨天下定决心不去3000了,但是醒来以后又觉得如果今天就放弃,那么我离美国真的就渐行渐远了...
我的1000:
昨天的签证,非常辜负大家的期望.不过现在说这些已?amp;shy;没有任何意义,关键是要分析出2000需要改进的地方.昨天虽然我们几个都没有签过,除了运气的成分外,我想还是要在自己身上多找下原因,因为毕竟签证官有他自己的愿则和职业道德,不管是杀手还是?amp;shy;,如果我能说服他,那么运气这个说法就不太站的住脚了.希望在你们的帮助下我们共同努力,拿到签证.
整个过程如下(括号里面是我自己的猜想和分析)
开始因为人比较多,我坐的很靠后面,杀手开始喊我的时候,我第一下没有反应过来,喊了两三次.
然后当时还没有来的及打招呼,他就让我放左手.我放了后,还没有等他说换手就把手拿开了,结果没有采集好,他又让我重新放,我还是自己就把手拿开了.然后他说,我让你拿开的时候你再拿开...(如此这般折腾了一下,估计是否他已有些不爽了?)
VO:where are you go?
me:I will pursue my master degree of public administration ...,and my concentration is nonproft administraion.
VO:which university are you in now/
me:....
VO:what's your major?
me:marketing.(我觉得我不太主动,应该在他问学校的时候主动告诉他,并且阐述我的本科专业与我现在的申请专业之间的联系)
VO:What is your planning after master graduation?
me:I plan to build my own NPO support center.(这里我认为我应该跟他阐述我的NPO support center是final goal,他的主要功能,干什么的,为什么服务;然后就主动告诉他如何一步一步实现final goal)
VO;You are a markeing student,you know that you cannot bulid the center after you graduation right away,right?you need experience,,,,,,(明显我认为他在怀疑我的归国计划了)
me:Yes,I know.So ,I plan to work in some NPO in china first,such as SOS chirdren village,china youth development foundation,ect.I have once been the volunteers of SOS.do you want to see my certificate?
VOK.
me:that's very wonderful expreice for me.chileren are very lovely.I want to help them .(这里我觉得我说偏了,感觉是想当幼儿园老师,不象是想创业当管理者)
VO;how long you worked there.
me:from march to april.
VO:In this year?
me:yes.(我觉得我应该解释,之所以不继续的原因)
VO:what's your parents do?
me:My father is a general manager of a hotel,his annual income.
Vo:打断。where is the hotel.in chengdu?
me:yes.in.....road.
Vok,what's your mother do?
me;she is an accoutant in ....her annual income is about 20,000rmb.
VO:抬起头来,皱了下眉头.Are you sure?(我觉得他认为我母亲收入太低了,我是否应该告诉他其实妈妈曾还在其他地方兼过职?但是因为之前兼职的私营企业已倒闭了,无法开证明,所以我没有说)
me:yes ,I sure.My fathter is the main source of our family income.His income is quite enough to support me.and USD privide me scholarship and GA.and they have also promised to give me 500 per month living allonce.
VO:let me see your housing certificate.
me:we have two houses .My parents bought a house for me last year so this new one have no certificate,but this is the buying contract.(递了一个房产证,一套合同加发票)
VO:you live in the old one or new one?
me: old one.
VO;.............(声音太小没有听清楚)I am sorry but I cannot help you.
mek.thanks.
总之整个过程我认为我其实还是很有问题,太不主动,他问一句就说一句,而且中间他打电脑的时候我就一句不说,冷场...我怕影响他工作,所以不好说.这个度不好拿捏所以就干脆保持沉默了.总之整个过程就是这样.请杨姐和签陪组老师再帮助我分析一下下.昨天,我再拒签分析的时候,没有冷静思考自己的问题,主要归咎于运气 不好,所以他们也没有了解到这么多的细节.现在的重点就是要对症下药了~
昨天的2000:
me:good morning sir,nice to meet you.
Vok,you will go to US for study?
me:yes,I am going to the ...for my master degree of public administraion,and
my concentration is nonprofit administraion.
Vo.How many NPO in china?
me: about 200,000.
Vo:200,000?
me:let me think.Sir,there are so many zero there.(当时我确实是知道数字的,但是一直数零真的不是我的强项...)20万个吧.(这个数字我又用中文说了一遍)oh ,I am sorry ,2 million .(我晕了当时)
VO:2 million?
me:Yes,there are so many NPO here but most of them didn't work well.So,I want to study nonprofit administraion to help them.
VO: OK,when will you graduate/
me:I have graduated from...you see ,I have got the bacholor degree of
management(拿学位证给他)
VO 一直都在看电脑,然后我想不能冷场,所以主动说:sir,to help the society is my
life time dream.这个时候我看到他在看学校写给领事馆的支持信,我就主动的给他说:sir,you can see the highlight words that the programm is quite special since it
combine the American exprience with the current asia situation,it 's very practiical
for the asia student who want to develop there career in asia.VO还是一直没有说话...
VOo you have some working exprience?
me: I don't ,but I have volunteer exprience in SOS children village.My school is not located in the city ,so I can only do this job when I am at home.
VO:how long did you work there
me:several months.(这个问题我心里其实还是有点虚,因为第一个vo当时也问了我这个问题,而且当时我把证明给他看了是2个月的,所以我只能实话实说)
这是,Vo就在表上写字,当时我还想是不是过了,然后忽然就看到他盖章了.然后哈里微笑着,很温柔的说,Iam sorry.
mels give me some recommendation.
VO:as you want to learn NGO,I recommed you to work for some time and then
apply for the visa.
me:yes,I originally do plan to work first but the oppotunities seems to konock at
my door earlier than I thought...(当时我有点生气,因为我觉得他没有给我机会解释这个问题就直接拒我了)
VO: I am sorry
me:thinks all the same.
现在我马上3000的话不是依然没有工作经验么?莫非真的就是死定了啊...我昨天本来已经下定决心到此为止了再来重新准备考试,明年申请好学校,但是今天起床又觉得有些不甘心...我该怎么办呢?最近真的是倒霉到极点...
第一感觉,楼主签证准备的不充分,对签证思路没有一个整体的概念,建议3000前仔细看看版内的精华签经点评、chris斑竹置顶的分析帖和我的签证问答思路帖,对如何把握几个重要方面的思路再研究一下
资金方面,你没有给出详细信息,不好做进一步分析。
留美动机上,阐述的很不好,说得很空,没有结合自身,也没有表述清你从marketing转这个专业的原因以及赴美读MPA的必要性。这点上,3000要着重加强
在说这个program怎么样怎么样时,你也没有结合你自身来说,只说这个program对亚洲学生怎么好怎么好是没有意义的,每个人都是独立的个体,你没有让VO感觉到对于你自身来说,读这个program为什么最适合你,为什么你要花费钱财和时间去美国读
你的问题的核心不是缺乏工作经验,虽然VO经常会以这个为由拒人,但事实上是你没有阐述清楚自己的留学动机和必要性,更关键的,是你没有让VO信服你对自己有清晰合理的规划,你对这个行业也不了解,对自己今后要从事的工作并不了解。这体现为对自己的人生并不负责,因为出去读书是要花钱花时间的,一个目标清晰、有上进心的人应该事先做好规划和分析,不能就这么糊里糊涂地出去读书,如果你给VO地是这个感觉,那么他就会置疑你的留美动机。所以,VO以这个理由拒你,是可以理解的,也是正常的
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