[820互助] 指向大海, genie05：legendhfwang, GITER, sophyw

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4. It has been said, “Not everything that is learned is contained in books.” Compare and contrast knowledge gained from experience with knowledge gained from books. In your opinion, which source is more important? Why?
Which recourses should be attached to more importance in knowledge gaining, books or experience? I agree insofar as experience takes precedence when it comes to creative knowledge. However, books play a more important role in daily life and theoretic science.

Admittedly, the experience exerts a pivotal influence in initial knowledge. In fact, it is the experience that most knowledge derives from. A striking example is the relation between lighting and electricity uncovered by Franklin though a risky but historic experiment. In this regard, the experience serves as the very basis upon which our learning stems from.

Aside from the forgoing proviso, however, in our day-to-day life and in some scientific fields, learning from books provides a more effective means to gain knowledge.

First and foremost, it is unnecessary or even dangerous to repeat some experience. In the increasingly specialized world, knowing everything is time-consuming and, more often than not, we just refer to related books when we encounter some problems. For instance, we do not necessarily master the structure of computers. If they break down, we tend to computer books for help. Further, some experience is not secure. Let us turn back to the example of electrify. It is ridiculous for us to retest the theory about the lighting again, because books have made it clear. In short, a book is like a reservoir for knowledge, which in turn saves our energy and time.

Another factor deserving some attention is that most scientific originality springs from books. Einstein’s theory of relativity, for example, demonstrate that the pace of time, and possibly the direction of time as well, is relative to the observer’s motion through space. This truth ran so contrary to our subjective, linear experience, and to previous notions about time and space that it was only printed in publications without being accepted by his counterpart. Therefore, in some period, we only comprehend this great scientific breakthrough from books rather than from experience.

In a word, I concede that experience outshines in some respects. Otherwise, in our daily life and in scientific arena, books weigh over experiences. Accordingly, on balance, I vote for the books in knowledge gaining process.

字数360，是限时的话，很不错，以后就这个数，也不用加了
你听过王令的阅读和写作课没？他的课很幽默的，也蛮有才华的，偶欣赏，他说中国学生的作文最大的毛病是拿中国学生自己读，用中式思维，巨通畅无比，但一到老外手里就看不懂了。这是你的文章的主要毛病。还有就是你的用词很深，不知道是不是红宝的影响，但我见过的高中生作文5分以上的，都没有采用什么过难的词汇，他们也没这词汇量
正文两段支持你自己的观点的不错的，其实开头那段Admittedly可以不要的，问题讲清楚的就可以，不用像GRE作文那样思辨的味道那么重。例子还可以展开，个人以为。段与段之间的衔接还不够好。开头和结尾都是要用中式思维才能理解，可以直接写我支持XXXXX因为XXX，不用However，Otherwise什么的，我的个人意见了。其实不错了的，我只是批的狠而已，4.5-5分吧。再加把油的说。其他人来拍砖？

指向大海UID：158737

说实话legend，我看到你的错题数目都不敢带你了，远比我当年好的说，如果你的目标是620那么绝对够了，语法要巩固，因为你说的你六级没有语法题所以考的好，近年的题目难度上升的明显，语法着重
其他的保持就很好了，问题目把题号年号标清楚，偶考了快一年的真的不记得很多了

genie05UID：30358

发现我没做啥正经事~~水水，顶顶帖子吧~~哈哈......................

指向大海UID：158737

Giter呢，人呢？也来贴篇作文的说

GITERUID：138732

我也给你找点事儿~~呵呵
Twe主题写作——96, 缓解压力的方式, 超时两分钟
People have different ways of escaping the stress and difficulties of modern life. Some read; some exercises; other work in their garden. What do you think are the best ways of reducing stress? Use specific details and examples in your answer.

In the modern advanced society, Individuals always encounter different pressures and potential stresses in their works, studies, and the communication with others. People always enjoy changing to an alternate way to relieve themselves from such stresses, such as reading, touring, exercising, and multiple kinds of ways. In my opinion, people would like to be engaged in using various ways to reduce my stresses according the reasons by which they are bothered.

As a college student, the most common stress of annoyance comes from the studies and relationship with friends. In this occasion, such a group of teenager would like listen to some classic music, especially some inspiring one to prevent such kind of tension from piercing them in the deepest of their mind. In one hand, classic music could elevate spirit and elicit to an altitude, which catalyzed them never mind the current condition, especially the adverse circumstance which they confront in their life. Under the assistance of this peculiar tool, the classic music could as if an international-shared language, echoing their mutual idealism, and conveying their perspective of thinking as well as a composer.

However, not everyone appropriate to use music to release their stress, based on the different personalities and the attitude toward the society. For young people always court the novel exploration, also with some adventitious behavior, maybe touring is the best way to relieve such kind of tension. With an associate contact with the nature power, the significant scenery could unveil the knobs in the mind of young one, and the admiration to the nature will make them have a more positive attitude toward social relationships between people.

In conclusion, as far as I’m concerned, people enjoy myriad of ways to antagonize potential stress in their mind, young people preferred touring because they have inborn courage and soaring ambition in their related ages, which make them reduce stress in maximum, while some aged people and people would not like to travel outside, maybe the best way to achieve the same purpose is to listen some music, experiencing the wide range of the world in a virtual way.

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genie05UID：30358

我机器昨天装，今天还没有OFFICE..嘿嘿~~
嘿嘿嘿~~~~
再UPUP

sophywUID：203712

Originally posted by 指向大海 at 2005-8-8 02:00
sophyw，是否可以介绍一下你是文科还是理科，10G对么？这里面我就不了解你的说

嘿嘿，理科，ee专业，
斑竹，我最近语法总是错到5个左右，而且总不减少，我该怎么办啊？大多数都是粗心错的，怎么样训练自己的细心呢？哎

sophywUID：203712

语法紧急求助，大家支招阿，55555

genie05UID：30358

People have different ways of escaping the stress and difficulties of modern life. Some read; some exercises; other work in their garden. What do you think are the best ways of reducing stress? Use specific details and examples in your answer.

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In conclusion, as far as I’m concerned, people enjoy myriad of ways to antagonize potential stress in their mind. youngYoung people preferred touring because they have inborn courage and soaring ambition in their related ages, which makes them reduce stress in maximum语法错误,; while some aged people and people 删除 would not like to travel outside, maybe the best way to achieve the same purpose is to listen some music, experiencing the wide range of the world in a virtual way.最后一个句子点的不是你的主题，个人有个人的方法，不是综合在有一起最好。

很久没看过作文。呵呵。

genie05UID：30358

Originally posted by sophyw at 2005-8-9 11:35


嘿嘿，理科，ee专业，
斑竹，我最近语法总是错到5个左右，而且总不减少，我该怎么办啊？大多数都是粗心错的，怎么样训练自己的细心呢？哎

EE是工~~:L:L

genie05UID：30358

Originally posted by sophyw at 2005-8-9 11:45
语法紧急求助，大家支招阿，55555

汗,才发了10分钟就开始催答案啦~~~
呵呵。
只有总结，细心吧.状态不好的样子。
作题的时候稍微慢点呢?
然后再检查下

genie05UID：30358

水母，我喜欢你另外一个头像.这个不够可爱

指向大海UID：158737

我正在看你的作文，等会贴上
sophyw 这个，工科，恩，了解，这里几个人的专业都挺强悍的，尤其是Genie哈
语法的是不是你一看答案就能恍然大悟呢？每道题4个选项都要看，不要有思维定式看到一个像错的就选了，一次性做大量的题目（连作3－4套）可以更加熟悉真正的考点，这就是我的建议了，你的错误集中在前15还是后25？

genie05UID：30358

楼上的居然白天出现了~~HIAHIA~~~
偶找吃的去了。.饿死了。

指向大海UID：158737

不要说的我和猫头鹰一样好不好？FT~~
你说我MSN上以前的和这个一套的头像可爱？