[作文互改27组]stoneSQ&zhangheng1020&fluff

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Originally posted by zhangheng1020 at 2005-12-30 19:13
改得很好


这个27楼是我请来的老师:L:$

我谢谢替我谢谢酸奶的stoneSQ！！

当时写完了很大脑短路，修改的时候只觉着应该重写，所以想有意识的放放再改。
两位给我很多的收获，文章修改中~~~
浪费大家的 ...

如果道歉有用的话, 还要警察做什么  :@

把文章改好以后, 发pm 键接给我, 老夫来动刀.  不逼你怕你偷懒!!!!

不要骂我抬杠哦, 以后考完了你就会知道我的好的  :p

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Stay Hungry. Stay Foolish
Some one hold the belief that games are for the kids only, and it is not proper if an adult still are drown in the game. Although in the traditional Chinese culture, adults are expected to follow a serious behavior, I believe that game is even more important to those adults than to those children in the modern society.还是对应了一下的

Game playing is important for learning. Even in the wild, playing game is a natural way of learning for the young animals. We learn lots of new computer technique nowadays in PC game just as the kitty practicing its hunting skill in the “catching game”. 这里以小动物猫猫为例，讲的是游戏对于学习新知识的作用， Game was and surely will be the most effective way in the knowledge digesting and in the conversance of technique skills, which are often requested long terms of numerous repeating and practice. Game learning can be funny in the children’s oral language learning, in the same way which it can attract those adults in the second language study too. Take typing for example, the input speed practice might be boring and tiresome. Marvelous changing will happen if it added the “feedback award” stimulation as a game. And such trick can make the dull typing into a interesting practice. 又用打字练习为例说明游戏的技巧可以让枯燥的训练有趣。

Game teaches people how to cooperate in commutation. The psychologist tells us that in playing, children enjoyed their game by creating several game rules for the benefit of their own, in the meaning while; they have to balance the benefit as well as public interests for their partners for attraction. Such creation 上文中的儿童对游戏条例法则的创造can teach a child what is the max-benefit for a group before he joins the mature social communication讲在游戏的过程中，儿童学会人际交往模式中利益最大化的构成. As for adults, those role-playing game still have its function. When fresh employees get the company training, their first lesson is usually carried on by groups of competitive games. In those kinds of practice, adults learn each other’s character in play and familiar the new company’s culture in game. 成人新员工的培训， 游戏中培养团队精神  

Game plays an important role in the stimulation of creation and award. Children are regarded as creative for the something new formation by the praise from parents. In playing, they are really rejoiced and willing to try sth more and sth new. On the other hand, though the first prize might bring positive stimulation in a competition, for the adults, we suffered the fear of being a loser more times than contented by the successful feeling on “top 1” champion. For those aspirant people, the winner-desire open push one for the result only and fade the enjoyment in the progressive trying. The focus on success might limit the adult to try more possibility and decay the creative passion. As a matter of fact, working for those real successors is their favorite game. They can enjoy their life in working. Albert Einstein said his theory is “God never gamble” Another famous physical scientist Stephen Hawking, the writer of “brief history of time”, told us that the model of our universe is exactly like “a God in the nut”. For the adults who can trade their work as a game from their childhood dream, who can really enjoy their work in daily creation and finding, who can forget about the prize and keep his curiosity for some new as a child, greater achieve might be gained in their game-like-life. 这里想要表达的是，竞争不一定带来成功，但是用游戏的态度全身心投入，享受工作和生活，可能会收益更多。举的例子也是这样的，成功人士眼中的事业就像是一个游戏。

In brief, like a child, it is the adults also that need the game as the important part of their life, as game can help one in learning and cooperating, and play an important part in creative stimulation. what is more, it lead one to the real success way of a happy life.  我把我那几句居恶心无比的口号删了  


今天的能力似乎就到这里了，一个头，4个大的感觉~:L:(

[ Last edited by zhangheng1020 on 2005-12-31 at 04:16 ]

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这组很热闹啊　哈哈　定一下

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搞到凌晨啊？

stoneSQUID: 2145827

wel!

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搞定  ;)