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◇第十八次作业小结◇ (issue 47 EQ vs IQ)

=====================作业小结负责人:小蜗牛; 备用楼=======================


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PS:第十九次作业：argument 51为optional,所以无作业小结.
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◇第二十次作业小结◇ (issue 36 时代局限性)

=====================作业小结负责人:PK; 备用楼=======================


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PS:第16和18次作业目前还没有全部完成(先自我批评),互改也没有进行,所以小结在下星期一之前交即可.:)

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◇第二十一次作业小结◇ (6.10) issue 185 (丑闻的作用)

下面是ylwang同学为大家写的详细作业小结.非常全面,意见也很中肯扼要,称赞!~~
建议大家仔细拜读~:)

ylwang本人的习作修改稿也比较完善,大家可以去第21次作业贴 (第16楼) 参考.:)

★义无反顾小组第21次作业总结贴★

第21次作业总结:
June.11.2005

组员issue总评:

yuvi的观点非常新颖，文章结构比较清晰，词汇量很大，读她的文章增加了不少词汇量，还需要在例子展开上再加强一些，使论证更严密一些。还有就是细心一些，减少小错误。

glxing思路清晰，结构完善，如果能增加些字数，充实下内容使论证更有力就更好啦，当然现在已经蛮不错的了。个人觉得你的文章句式还是单一了些，还有就是句式多变换变换就好了，比如定语从句，独立结构，倒装等等。

even1985310的开头很好，观点提的也好，但要注意你提的是大对小错的观点，所以在写小错一段的时候，要控制其长度，最好比每个讲“对"的论证段少两三行。论证时要注意多下笔墨展开例子。

我自己的嘛，正如 yuvi指出，论证时候为了支持论点过于不择手段，夸大事实，这一点要改，glxing说的也很对，要少用chinese的例子。

本来该打分的，但是我太菜，怕打出分来起误导的作用
因此向组员们道歉~~



ISSUE185:

185."Scandals-whether in politics, academia, or other areas-can be useful. They focus our attention on problems in ways that DO speaker or reformer ever could."
丑闻----无论是政治、学术还是其他领域----可能会是有用的。丑闻可以用演说家或者改革家无法使用的手段让我们注意到某些问题。

提纲
1。On the one hand, scandals can sometimes serve to call our attention to pervasive social or political problems that we would otherwise neglect.
2。On the other hand, scandals can sometimes serve chiefly to distract us from more pressing community or societal problems

                                                              ---------摘自gter 分类提纲

1。关注丑闻有助于了解真相，使大众对名人更好的认识
2。丑闻对完善社会监督和运行体制有作用,尤其在政治和学术领域，能拒绝腐败，提高效率
3。对明星的自我炒作的丑闻不值得提倡
                                             
                                    -------摘自yuvi,glxing,eleven1985310,ylwang的提纲

优秀句子摘录:
1。 Even their behaviors have been criticized by many social sounds, those people who success in the way of sensationalizing their scandals, at least benefit from the commercial angle.
                                     --------摘自yuvi

2。Scandals can incite a society or community to introspect its internal running mechanism, which may contains irrational factors and corruptive holes.
                                      --------摘自ylwang


例子摘录:


1. A case in point, President Clinton's sex scandals once had made him very embarrassed, and even worse made most American people feel unpleasant under the his leadership. Nevertheless, while bringing tremendous pressures to President Clinton, this scandal indeed contrarily resulted in Clinton government officials' highly motivated working spirits and more rigorously disinterested personal styles, maybe to some degree for the compensation to unpleasant citizens. As a result, during the rest years of administration by Clinton, the U.S. enjoyed more peace and economic well-being than any other time in its history, with a balanced budget and even a budget surplus, the lowest inflation rate, and the lowest unemployment rate in the past 30 years.
                                                                    
                                                                                   ----------摘至ylwang

2.  While Foucault as one of the greatest philosophers in the last century, he was been exposed as a homosexual after his death. In a traditional thinking, this fact might be seen as scandal for Foucault's later age. Nevertheless, just because of the unusual experience, Foucault has done two volumes of the history of sexuality, and he points out a totally new way for people who working in the academic areas.                                                                     
                                                                                   ----------摘自yuvi

3. The most famous scandal in politic may be the Water Gate about Nixon. After he stole the competitors' secret documents by recording illegally, the Nixon administration tried to avoid this event to be open to public. Thanks to the media's report, we can gradually get to know the truth at last.                                                                  
                              
                                                                              -----------摘自glxing

4. Once upon a time, many mala fide pedlar collected waste food from the restraint, reclaimed disqualification edible oil from the food, and then sold back to the hash houses and the station of food supplies in a very low price. The scandal was bannered by the Chinese People’s Daily and several programmers also report this. After this people have became more careful when they ete outside or by edible oil for themselves.
                                                                              
                                                                               ----------摘自eleven1985310

5.For example, Dr. Hwang Woo Suk, who previously announced that his group had successfully obtained stem cells from cloned human embryos, published this paper in the top journal of natural science research—Science, yet then was revealed by his colleagues that he had fabricated the data and experiments in the paper. This affair seems like an explosion in scientific research community. Immediately, voices from lots of famous scientists, government officials, and high-tech companies appealed for an honest, rigorous, and earnest attitude in research work. Consequently, many countries started to complete the surveillance mechanism in scientists' research activities, such as in China, where a national specialist committee was organized in order to reveal academic cheatings and audit research fundings. Moreover, the editorial boards of many prestigious journals such as JACM, JAIR,and JSER, decided to extend their review procedure so as to more accurately scrutinize submissions' authenticity and originality.

                                                                                ------------摘自ylwang


yuvi点名了，偶只好奉命，其实本来还不知道总结为何物，初次写总结，不当之处，大家见谅。昨天由于宿舍网络坏了，世界杯也没看成，所以这个来的晚了，还请大家原谅~

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我们的QQ群号码:24184543,ylwang赶紧加进来吧~~:)

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◇第二十二次作业小结◇

Issue 136 - 第22次作业总结  by coxlee

136.The absence of choices is a circumstance that is very, very rare.
没有选择的情况少之又少。

完成的习作，8份：
jiqixueyuan , lionprince ,yuvi , ylwang , even1985310, KITTY,ginny-mm ,coxlee
这个抽象题好像大多数组组友都写了 ^_^，而且大家好像都有话可说，好现象阿，呵呵，下面仿照ylwang的给大家把我自己认为好的东西提炼出来，希望对大家有用.

提纲：
(a)   1．        生活中的選擇無處不在。
2．        過渡段：沒有不存在選擇的情況，兩方面考慮：客觀環境，主觀想法。
(b)   论点：在事物发展的早期阶段，选择会很多，但随着事物的发展，选择会越来越少
1。以孩子的发展为例进行论证（教育界）
2。以科技公司技术的选择为例进行论证（科技界）
3。以战争为例（军事界）
(c)  孙：1. on the one hand, economic progress has greatly contributed to people’s freedom of choice in terms of consumption.
            2. on the other hand, culturally speaking ,diversity is disappearing due to the trend of globalization.
                3. Another phenomenon worth pointing out is that people in developed countries enjoy more freedom of choice –    politically ,materially or spiritually – than people in the developing world.

妙语：
1.        And who says that we cannot choose our original birth? At least, people have chance to change their original gender though transexualism-operation. Follow the development of technology; choice has been widely extend in our lives, and with many possibilities existing in today's world.  ---by Yuvi
2.        Thereby, life is always like an ant climbing a high tree, in which when the ant go ahead on one branch, it can hardly turn back to  other parallel branches.   ---ylwang

精彩实例：
In the first place, consider the personal development of a child. When the child is very young, before his school age, we can say the child has lots of choices of his/her future, to be an athlete, a politician, a scientist, a doctor, a company executive, a musician, a painter, a soldier, and so forth. However, with the accretion of her/his age, choices will shrink dramatically to some extent. When he/she enter an university with studying the major of computer science, we can hardly predict that he can become a professional athlete, a doctor, or a soldier. Of course, someone would argue that there is still some possibility that  the child can do any jobs as we firstly mentioned, yet it is obvious that the possibility of doing some jobs is much lower after his/her bounding to the major of computer science than in his preschool age, which means choices are becoming rare。 --ylwang

In China, the suicide cases happened very frequently these days. Everyone will not choose to death unless he/she thinks he/she has no choices. Due to the investigation to the reasons of those suiciders, many of them have issues on study, work or love, if they didn't think straight and changed the view angle to their parents or friends when they made the decision to suicide, they would find many other options and death is not the only solution.  ---coxlee

The plentiful supply of material goods provide people an entire freedom of choice. That does not mean, however, we have the absolute  power or freedom to choose. Who feels free to choose his own origin? Who can select the time of retirement except you decide to chuck of it yourself? Who can earn a trip to the moon if you are not an millionaire or a technician. The absence of the “choice ” may be not exist, but the absence of the power to “choice” is exist. --- even1985310

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lz这个帖子做得真不错~狂赞一个！
为了配合小组管理给你们改了一下题目~高亮之~

这个就作为你们的总帖吧~参照小组管理办法再稍微调整一下，把组员的作业帖链接加进来好吧~

有什么问题或者需要帮助的给咱PM

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再赞次lz~;)

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