请最近发过作文、口语、听抄练习的版友把自己的练习地址贴进来，修改练习者有加分

sickUID: 2337994

斗胆把作业发过来
请斑竹来看看
斑竹辛苦了:handshake
http://bbs.gter.ce.cn/bbs/viewth ... &extra=page%3D1

[ 本帖最后由 lintelle 于 2007-5-19 09:59 编辑 ]

nunu620UID: 2332744

https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... age=1#pid1770143995
谢谢斑竹

[ 本帖最后由 lintelle 于 2007-5-19 10:00 编辑 ]

wgaggassi34UID: 2279352

:handshake
https://bbs.gter.net/thread-665971-2-1.html

[ 本帖最后由 lintelle 于 2007-5-19 10:06 编辑 ]

gregterUID: 2245291

https://bbs.gter.net/thread-669817-1-1.html
偶的首作

[ 本帖最后由 lintelle 于 2007-5-19 10:02 编辑 ]

han35UID: 2333063

第一篇作文，望大家狠拍！！     3Q


(已点评）



https://bbs.gter.net/thread-669869-1-2.html

[ 本帖最后由 han35 于 2007-5-27 20:01 编辑 ]

未了UID: 2328622

我的作文：
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=671377&page=1&extra=page%3D1#pid1770252355
谢谢版主以及各位好心人！

[ 本帖最后由 lintelle 于 2007-5-21 15:42 编辑 ]

chenglingfengUID: 2303037

https://bbs.gter.net/thread-670152-1-1.html

[ 本帖最后由 lintelle 于 2007-5-21 16:11 编辑 ]

chenglingfengUID: 2303037

https://bbs.gter.net/thread-670213-1-1.html
小楣斑竹,时间较上次少用了20分钟,希望百忙之中能给予指点

[ 本帖最后由 lintelle 于 2007-5-22 16:06 编辑 ]

hellohuijiaUID: 2326818

我的作文
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1

谢谢版主及各位

wyk509UID: 2315040

我的作文，请帮忙修改，谢谢！
http://bbs.gter.ce.cn/bbs/thread-670114-1-3.html

[ 本帖最后由 lintelle 于 2007-6-2 19:54 编辑 ]

kevinliu6883UID: 2338522

Roomate is the person who shares a room with you. Lets consider what makes a good neighbor. Fence, like the old saying. so the most important quality a good roomate posses is to respect other roomate. He will not make noise at night when other roomates are falling to asleep. He will not use other people's property without permission.
A good roomate opts to give you a hand when it is in need. Sometime information, encouragement or suggestion are very welcome.
A good roomate is able to share something in commen. Roomates share the same space and have many chances to communicate. They should not be treated like a stranger.
Other quality like quiet, intelligent is good but not necessary for a good roomate.
If a person has the above nature, there would ne no reason we can't get well along with each other.

kevinliu6883UID: 2338522

I tried to communicate with the most interested person, but my id has no access to the writing correction. Thus I am unable to write something responding to the original piece.
Hostess sent a message but I don't get how to contact her.
Besides i'd like to know what the reading limit means.

If some one happens to know the answer, it would be highly appreciated. Probably most new recruits need these.

sanmuyi3868111UID: 2332555

https://bbs.gter.net/thread-671446-1-1.html

[ 本帖最后由 lintelle 于 2007-5-22 16:01 编辑 ]

qqtingtingUID: 2267755

please~!!

http://bbs.gter.ce.cn/bbs/viewth ... e%3D1#pid1770267860

[ 本帖最后由 lintelle 于 2007-5-22 15:30 编辑 ]

polo1478UID: 2217680

第一次上传习作，谢谢指点！
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1

[ 本帖最后由 lintelle 于 2007-5-22 15:33 编辑 ]