12.8要考 我的作文大聚会!(,每日必定更新,更新到12.4)

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每天中午12点,或者晚上12点在线更新!今天例外!哈哈

[ 本帖最后由 firhaday 于 2007-12-4 19:40 编辑 ]

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自己贴上作文
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Some people prefer to study alone because they feel they might be more efficient when there is just him. But, in my opinion, I prefer to study in group, because of the following reasons.

First, there are a lot of discussions in the group learning, which would help to overcome the difficulties. In a group, each one has his/er own creative idea. When a problem is encountered, each of the group will give out their ways of solution. After the discussion, the team would find the most suitable way to solve the problem. For example, when I need to give a presentation about biology in the class, I would turn to my friends for help. We would have a brainstorm. Then, we will make a best project as far as we can. They can supplement what I do not know or what I forget to put into the presentation. That is the benefit of the group learning.

Second, group learning never make us feel lonely. For most of us, I believe, we are afraid of being lonely. We, human beings are born to be work in group. "I am not just fighting myself." one of the saints mentioned when talking about the group work.. When a task or assignment is facing me, I am so eager to work in group even when they can not help me in the solution of it, because they will give me the spiritual encouragements which make me head on bravely.

At last, working in group cultivates us the ideas of team work. According to the arrangement the leader assigned to us, we need to not only do our jobs well but also play well with the group members. We are a group and each of us is the members of it. In order to make the group to improve, each need to dedicate and contribute to our group. In the situation such as making a group play, we need to cooperate well with our group members, so as to make our group a good impression when our play is on in the school theater.

Though, work in individual would also make some advantages, such as more efficient, doing what I want without considering others ideas, etc. I am still sure that I am a person so suitable for the group learning.

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Some may be fond of getting up early in the morning and sleeping early in the night because they would feel better, while others prefer the opposite living style. As for me, I am much more interested in the later one.
Admittedly, getting up early in the morning brings us a lot of benefits. I can breathe the fresh air in the morning, which may be vital to my healthy life. I can do some exercises in the morning such as jogging, aerobics, tennis, etc. That would make my figure perfect. Moreover, in the morning, memory is at its best level. So I can do a lot of reciting or memorizing works.
However, on the other hand, the disadvantages of this life style are obviously. To be frank, when the winter is coming, I prefer to bury myself in the bed because there is so warm. I even hated to get up at 7 or 8 in the winter morning, when the day are almost just after dawn and the temperature is so low. Besides, in my point of view, in order to get a healthy body, I must sleep early, to make up for the missing hours caused by the early getting up. Or I may live in the condition of sub-healthy.
In that case, I am so convinced that i am a person so in favor of getting late and work until late in the night because I am so in love with the environment and view of the late night. Admittedly, the late night is so quite. In that environment, I am ready to do more things, especially those trouble things and pains-taking things. I can have a good consideration of the problems and difficulties in the daily life. Apart from these, I am a person of romance. In my definition, the late night, with a lightening moon and some shiny stars are most romantic in the nature.
Furthermore, I need to be used to this working late life style because this life style may be the most suitable for my future work. We are now living in an ever-competing society. In order to get better work done, we need to spare more time for extra hour working. As a result, I will be not able to get to bed early in the night. Accordingly, I need to adapt myself to this kind of life style. In order to make the preparation, I think I should live that life style from now on.
In conclusion, early getting up and early getting to bed brings a lot of benefits to me. However, in our nowadays society, the contrary life style are more needed because that I often work extra hours. Besides, as for me, the late night means some atmosphere of romance, which is just my favorite one.

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126. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? There is nothing that young people can teach older people. Use specific reasons and examples to support your position.  



Personally, I do not agree with this statement. Though the senior citizens are more experienced in many aspects, we, as for the youth, are likely to teach thing they do not have

As for the older people, they got a lot of experiences in a lot of experience which might be so useful in our daily life. They can instruct us in many aspects, for example, in the machine operating, getting well with the colleges, living a healthy life, etc. What will our life be if all the things in operation are made by inexperienced novice? In the other words, without the help of the experienced senior citizens-sure, we can easily imagine the result-everything may at a mass  So the senior people really play an important role in the daily routines.

However, Should that be what statement implies? Is it the truth that youth have nothing to teach the senior people. Definitely, I will say no. Because of the following reasons

Youth are more talented in the new high technology. It is a situation that young people have a better command of the high tech such as Personal Computer, Cell phone, Internet, MP3 and something like these. Out of the date as our senior citizens are, they might be in a loss when dealing with the situations in which these high tech are used. Without doubt, it is the time that youth teach the older people to use or operate these high tech machines. Besides, with the importance of information plays a more and more important role in our society, our senior people also in need of these high techs to make themselves informed of the whole world. For example the changes taken place all over the global, or just some retirement funding policy and so forth. At that time, they need youth to instruct them to get the current information easily and conveniently.

Even if they are equipped with the same skills to operate the high tech machines, the youth should have some advantages in the decision-making and determination of fighting. Experience brings us both advantages as well as disadvantages. In one hand, our senior people are more likely to do the things well. On the other hand, they are usually trapped in the cage of fixed thoughts. In the realm of biz, suppose an experienced manager, who judged the plan put forward by the youth for exploration of the market would be a failure. But with the strong desire to success and proof of himself(herself), he\ she still have a best try. Guess what happened? By working hard and daring to break the convention do the youth succeed, they not only make their career succeed, but also change the way of the conventional ideas. This is the very advantages of the youth. Merits if the older people can get from the immature ideas, along with combining these with experience, they might also succeed.
Shortly, older are much better in the experienced needed fields, almost each field. But, with some exception, the youth might take fully use of their advantages in high-tech and daring to do or hard-working spirits to teach older people.
感觉自己写了有点凌乱了,而且感觉写的很随意,而且,今天竟然没有在限定的时间内完成,诶!
说实话,感觉自己的作文的体系是越来越混乱了!真是的!诶!!!
明天早上自己再好好要修改!!!!多吸收意见
大家给我提宝贵的意见啊!

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1203   感觉写的最菜的了,有兴趣的帮我拼命拍
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103. In your opinion, what is the most important characteristic (for example, honesty, intelligence, a sense of humor) that a person can have to be successful in life? Use specific reasons and examples from your experience to explain your answer. When you write your answer, you are not limited to the examples listed in the question.  
Of these characters listed in the statements, I think honest is the most important. If one need to be successful in the life, he need to be honest not only to his friends but also to the clients and customers.
Honesty is vital in the friendship. We often want our friend be frank to us, because you will feel good when your friends can share his really thoughts and reality to you. But what you will feel if your friend makes a lie to you? What' worse? You are aware the truth by accident. Suppose you are happened in such a situation. You will be angry or rage with your friend. Then, you would develop a sense of distrust of this friend. That is, the end of your close friendship with him.
Besides, there is a going that once you lie, you need hundreds of millions of lies to make the lie true. With more lies you have made, there would be more flaws. Eventually, some day, your lies would be discovered by your friends. That is a simple idea. For example, if you do not want to go to class, you might lie to your teacher that you feel not so well, maybe a disease such as a fever or something wrong with your throat. Then later, if your teacher wants to have a visit of you, you may lie that you are going to the hospital. But after then, if your teacher ask you for a dignose or prescription, how you can make a new lie to make up for this one. Ling is a malignant circle. For the people who are so eager to success, the honest is of a more importance. To be frank, intelligence is crucial because it help people to deal with daily difficulties better. A sense of humor is critical especially when one people need a wonderful atmosphere to have a successful negotiation. However, honest, in my point of view, is the most important because it is the feature of some most successful business people in the world. If a people want to clients to patronize him again and again, he need be to be frank, such as offer a wonderful price and provide a good service. In a word, he needs to make an impression of trust manager in his clients. To sum up, with the character of honesty, one person would have more true friends, and would more successful in career
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楼主好,我也是12月8号考,请问时间有没有什么变化呢?因为一直登陆不了考试中心的网站,所以担心时间上有调整...

squall3000UID: 2315646

帮你顶！同考的兄弟！～～～：）

1203首段“Of these characters listed in the statements, I think honest is the most important.”是不是在句尾加一个“one"更完整些？

squall3000UID: 2315646

建议每段首句写长点。尽量避免1203二段的”our friend"之类的拼写错误

加油！：）

firhadayUID: 2287086

那我的 后面的结构有什么问题吗？

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41. Some people think that human needs for farmland, housing, and industry are more important than saving land for endangered animals. Do you agree or disagree with this point of view? Why or why not? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.  


Should the land be saved for protecting the endangered animals? It might be truth that some endangered animals are facing difficulties because they are deprived of the living areas. But, would the saving land really help these animals? And would we need to give up some many good chances to develop economy? Definitely no. So I am not in favor of the statement.

The most important reason I disagree with the statement lies on that there are many other reasons for these animals to be endangered, not only because the lack of room for living. Indeed, with more and more room being deprived, some animals do have some problems in surviving. However, for the most, that may be not the only reason, which means that many other factors may be involved in the distinction of these animals. For example, one main reason may be that through the long history of its existence-I mean the existence of these species-do not evolve when the environment around has changed a lot. As a result, according to the scientific theory, they are not so suitable for living in this would. In sum, these animals become endangered for many reasons not just for the lack of land.

Even they are lacking the living space, and we, sacrifice the development of industry to spare the land to them, they still be in endangered. As I have mentioned above, if these species are becoming endangered for the reason of self-problems such as old genes and not so well-evolved, these animals are doomed to be distinct even more lands are offered,. Accordingly, for one hand, we spare lands for these animals but they are still endangered. For the other hand, we lost our land and maybe the best opportunity to develop.

Though saving the endangered animals are important, we still need to make sure our human being can survive. In some underdeveloped areas such as some places in the Africa, people are in the danger of hunger and famine. For them, the most important thing to do should be developing the economy instead of sparing land and spaces to help these endangered animals to survive. So, in many situations, the governments, in order to make the life of citizen better, are more possible to make to decision of keep areas for housing, farming land or industry, etc.

To sum up, the endangered animals might areas to survive. But in the situation that we don't know whether more space would be useful, and in the situation that our human beings are also in a danger of death, we could just make these lands for the industry development.

豆豆～UID: 2378384

veto. The first sentence of the paragraph should be as precise as possible, or the raters would be confused.

firhadayUID: 2287086

??? 我似乎是写了一个很简单的问句,是后面哪个太长了吗?
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我看懂了,当我没有说!!!!
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豆豆,能帮我看看我最近的这个怎么样吗?我比较满意这个!

[ 本帖最后由 firhaday 于 2007-12-4 19:14 编辑 ]

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自己UP

superkobeUID: 2129651

是不是刚考完GRE啊...iBT作文用得着那么长吗????