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zhouwujieUID: 2529250

我的第一篇作文，粗糙了点，别介意
题目：Where would you recommand a foreign visitor go to in your city for one day?
    China is a big country which has a long history.If a foreign visitor were coming for only one day to see our country.I think,Beijing is the Preferred chioce,because it's the capital and representative of our country where there are many interesting place that worth a see.And I would suggest  the visitor to go to theImperial Palace,the Great wall and Tiananmen Square.
    The Imperial Palace must see foreign visitor.There are many palace in it that show the beauty of ancient China and Chinese history,it would be very attractivefor foreign visitor.One can be very interested in it.And there are many gardens that would be very agreeable for visitor who walks through it.
    The Great Wall is also a site must to be see.It's one of new seven wonders of the world.It's diffcult to think how the Great Wall built by the ancient Chinese in that period when there are not machine to help them.The Great Wall were used to resist aggressors' aggression long before,today,it become a tourist attraction.There are a proverb about it,that is "A man who has not been to the Great Wall is not a real man. "Thus,i think the Great Wall should be visit by foreign visitor.
    Finally,Tiananmen Square must be one of the list of the place that should be visited.This square is one of the largest in China,possibly in Asia.In this square,one can visit the Chairman Mao Memorial Hall,the greatest leader in China.And one can see many Chinese exhibition in it,which show the Chinese culture.I guess,it would appeal the visitor.
    Of course,in China there are much more than these place to visit,foreign really should spend much more time exploring them all.However,with only oen day,I think,of course,Beijing is the best place.
    先谢谢了

腾格里旅狼UID: 2573178

这几天忙申请的事情，好久没上，论坛怎么戴了“绿帽子”，郁闷，而且速度死慢，我昨天登了1个多小时楞没上来……

腾格里旅狼UID: 2573178

日了，怎么回事啊，怎么一点回复出来个回复框啊，把文章全挡住了，看也看不见，谁设计的啊……郁闷，强烈建议寄托回归原来清爽的版面。

dzy7066UID: 2494175

多谢楼主！！！

小福初托UID: 2374245

好久没来寄托了 考完G 又要忙托福 什么时候是尽头

glamorouskyUID: 2459211

395# 腾格里旅狼
多久没来啦 速度那叫一个快

pb030920UID: 2418999

作文求拍
The nest twenty years from now on, students will not use printed books anymore.

With the development of computer technology and the advent of networks, many people especially young people tend to enjoy reading through new media such as computer, mobile phone and MP3 players rather than traditionally reading printed books. Therefore, some people predict that students will not read printed books anymore in 20 years.

However, I have my contention with this point since in my view there is still a long way to go to complete replace the role of traditional printed books.

To begin with, the first reason for my contention with such prediction lies in that most people are still accustomed to reading traditional printed books. Admittedly, due to the advancement of modern science, there are many electrical version books available on the internet. Combined with ebook reading software like Adobe reader, they do really provide people the latest information and first hand enjoyment. But many people including me feel a sense of uncomfortable. There are maybe 2 reasons for this feeling in my view. Firstly, most people especially some old ones are not accustomed to staring at computer screen for a long time. Actually life experiences reveal me that long time staring at computer screen makes people feel their eyes dry and tired. Secondly, many people especially students are used to making notes directly on the book they are reading using their pens when it comes to reading electrical books, they can not do the same and adjust to the new media even though many reading software provides the function of directly making the notes on the ebooks. And both of these two factors prevent some students completely relying on ebooks. And as a matter of fact, I prefer printing the ebooks which are valuable in my opinion for further reading.

The second reason I have my contention with the prediction is that this prediction seems to neglect a prerequisite for applying ebooks to substitute the traditional printed books, which is the high popularity of the reading tools for ebook such as computer, mobile phone, MP3 players. Actually, people in many places especially for people living in poverty rural areas never get a chance to touch this tool let alone using it to read ebooks and the only means for them to get information is to read printed books. Even when the living condition for these people are gradually getting better, the increased income would be first used to meet their basic needs like food and clothes rather than equip this ebook reading tools, after all for people whose basic living needs are not satisfied, satisfying these basic needs always takes priority. Thus, without the prevalence of ebook reading tool, ebook can never take the place of traditional printed book.

Last but not least reason for my suspicion of the prediction is that the establishment of ebook has to face the problem of protecting property of writers and publisher which puzzles almost all electrical publish products such as music, movie and book. And now a days many electrical books available on the internet are just the scanner version of its original printed version, and are never authorized by the writer and publisher so that the property of writer and publisher is lack of protection which would definitely impair the development of ebook. In this way, to better develop the market of ebooks, more rules and implementations need to be proposed, without which the development of ebook would not be as smooth as many people expect let alone completely changing the role of printed book.
In sum, there is a long way to go to develop the ebook thus the role of traditional ebook would not be altered in the next 2 decades.

水晶小鱼UID: 2471655

帮我看看这个：https://bbs.gter.net/thread-912970-1-1.html

drmikeUID: 2518366

牛人啊

阿泰UID: 209473

旅狼童鞋说放两天假，回来接着改

阿泰UID: 209473

隆重欢迎旅狼童鞋回归

腾格里旅狼UID: 2573178

我回来了。大家有作文都发上来吧

quly510UID: 2580346

谢谢斑竹！！！

阿泰UID: 209473

FAINT!

这个家伙怎么现在这么火！

阿泰UID: 209473

是不是这个帖子还有没改完的essay?