Issue43【0906G背水一战三月小组】 大家帮忙打打分吧，鄙人快考试了

yunfeiyang4everUID: 2604917

43. "To be an effective leader, a public official must maintain the highest ethical and moral standards."

【提纲】
论点：作为一个杰出的领导者，确实应该保持高的伦理和道德标准，但是保持最高的伦理和道德标准是不必要的，也是不现实的；
1. 作为一个杰出的领导者，高的伦理道德标准是必要的；
2. 但是保持最高的伦理和道德标准是不现实的；
3. 公众应该将关注的重心放在领导者的能力与才干上，而不是是否保持了最高的伦理道德标准；
总结：尽管高的伦理和道德标准对于一位杰出的领导者是重要的，但是我们不能要求领导者保持最高的伦理和道德标准，因为我们很难定义“最高”，我们应该把重心放在领导者的能力和才干上；

【原文】
When it comes to the leader, most people, including the speaker, would agree that it is necessary for an effective leader to maintain the highest ethical and moral standards. In my view, while I fundamentally admit the above assertion, it is impossible to ask the public official preserve the highest ethical and moral standards.

Admittedly, as a leader, keeping high ethical and moral standards is indispensable for his leadership due to leaders is often held as good examples of his corporate members. On the contract, leaders’ authority would go with their low ethical standards. The chief reason is because people might think the leader is so immoral that he has no rights to rule us and as a result public would resist his demand and even do down this leader. For that matter, the leader who lost his adherent fails to achieve his work. Providing that a program administrator in a software enterprise, who frequently steals the technology of his enterprise and sells it to other enterprise. Having such a leader, several his employees would likely reproduce the leader while others would not work at all since they might realize that whatever else may strive, they could contribute nothing more than wasting time because of the demoralized leader. Therefore, such leader is not celebrated anyway.

However, we should not lose sight of the fact that it is not feasibility for the leader to sustain the highest ethical and moral standards. What really matters is people should aware that anyone can not clarify the definition of the “highest” ethical and moral standards due to the culture and tradition variety in the world. Under the influence by circumstance, some immoral things could be regarded by one person while others might take the opposite view. To illustrate this point clearly, take a look at the difference between east and west. Children call their parents’ names could be very impolite in eastern states while it is very normal in western countries. What is more interesting is in those eastern states, neither children’s name nor their parents’ name can be used by children but in western countries kids always have the similar names as their fathers. For this comparison indicates that people cannot recognize what the “highest” ethical and moral standards are.

Furthermore, judging a leader whether he is distinguished, public should place more emphasis on the leader’s ability rather than the “highest” moral standards. As a general rule, public would advocate the leader who accelerate the development of the society and takes a series of steps to make their life more comfortable and peaceful in spite of having small blemish. Take Bill Clinton as an obvious example. Although the sex scandal with Monica Lewinsky, most people take him as an brilliant and success president according to his effort in increasing the economy of the United States. So there is a good sense in to evaluate the leader by their competence.

In conclusion, from the discussion above, we could affirm that despite the high ethical and moral standard is of important to an effective leader, he should not maintain the highest moral standards because it is difficult to define the “highest” and public should turn their attention to the capacity of the leader.

yunfeiyang4everUID: 2604917

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1# yunfeiyang4ever

When itcomes to the leader, most people, including the speaker, would agreethat it is necessary for an effective leader to maintain the highestethical and moral standards. In my view, while I fundamentally admitthe above assertion,（I feel/believe/hold） it is impossible to ask the public officialpreserve the highest ethical and moral standards.

Admittedly,as a leader, keeping high ethical and moral standards is indispensablefor his leadership due to leaders is often held as good examples of hiscorporate members. On the contract (contrary; in contrast ), leaders’ authority would go withtheir low ethical standards. The chief reason is because people mightthink the leader is so immoral that he has no rights to rule us and asa result public would resist his demand and even do down this leader.For that matter, the leader who lost his adherent fails to achieve hiswork. Providing that a program administrator in a software enterprise,who frequently steals the technology of his enterprise and sells it toother enterprise(这句话没谓语). Having such a leader, several his employees wouldlikely reproduce （copy the behaviors; reproduce是繁殖）the leader while others would not work at all sincethey might realize that whatever else may strive, they could contributenothing more than wasting time because of the demoralized leader.Therefore, such leader is not celebrated anyway.

However, weshould not lose sight of the fact that it is not feasibility （feasible）for theleader to sustain the highest ethical and moral standards. What reallymatters is people should aware that anyone can not clarify thedefinition of the “highest” ethical and moral standards due to theculture and tradition variety in the world. Under the influence bycircumstance, some immoral things could be regarded by one person whileothers might take the opposite view. To illustrate this point clearly,take a look at the difference between （the）east and the west. Children calltheir parents’ names could be very impolite in eastern states while itis very normal in western countries. What is more interesting is inthose eastern states, neither children’s name nor their parents’ namecan be used by children but in western countries kids always have thesimilar names as their fathers. For this comparison indicates thatpeople cannot recognize what the “highest” ethical and moral standardsare.(那么逻辑层上应该补充一条尤其在全球化时代很难确认最高，否则在各自文化内部仍然是可以找出最高的标准出来的。)

Furthermore,judging a leader whether he is distinguished, public should place moreemphasis on the leader’s ability rather than the “highest” moralstandards. As a general rule, public would advocate the leader whoaccelerate the development of the society and takes a series of stepsto make their life more comfortable and peaceful in spite of havingsmall blemish. Take Bill Clinton as an obvious example. Although thesex scandal with Monica Lewinsky, most people take him as an brilliantand success president according to his effort in increasing（improving） the economyof the United States. So there is a good sense in to evaluate theleader by their competence.

Inconclusion, from the discussion above, we could affirm that despite thehigh ethical and moral standard is of important to an effective leader,he should not maintain the highest moral standards because it isdifficult to define the “highest” and public should turn theirattention to the capacity of the leader.

总体不错。但注意论证细节。

加油～

fireofnightUID: 2447280

When itcomes to the leader, most people, including the speaker, would agreethat it is necessary for an effective leader to maintain the highestethical and moral standards. In my view, while I fundamentally admitthe above assertion, it is impossible to ask the public officialpreserve the highest ethical and moral standards.

Admittedly,as a leader, keeping high ethical and moral standards is indispensablefor his leadership due to leaders is often held as good examples of hiscorporate members. On the contract, leaders’ authority would go with(be diminished by)their low ethical standards. The chief reason is because people mightthink the leader is so immoral that he has no rights to rule us(them) and asa result public would resist his demand and even do down this leader.For that matter, the leader who lost his adherent fails(would fail) to achieve hiswork. Providing that a program administrator in a software enterprise,who frequently steals the technology of his enterprise and sells it toother enterprise(others). Having such a leader, several of his employees wouldbe likely to reproduce(感觉change/switch都比这个词好) the leader while others would not work at all sincethey might realize that whatever else may strive, they could contributenothing more than wasting time because of the demoralized leader.Therefore, such leader is not celebrated anyway.
//论点不错，句与句之间的结构有点乱

However, weshould not lose sight of the fact that it is not feasibility(feasible) for(to require) theleader to sustain the highest ethical and moral standards. What reallymatters is people should aware that anyone can not clarify thedefinition of the “highest” ethical and moral standards due to theculture and tradition variety in the world. Under the influence bycircumstance, some immoral things could be regarded by one person whileothers might take the opposite view. To illustrate this point clearly,take a look at the difference between east and west. Children calltheir parents’ names could be very impolite in eastern states while itis very normal in western countries. What is more interesting is inthose eastern states, neither children’s name nor their parents’ namecan be used by children but in western countries kids always have thesimilar names as their fathers. For this comparison indicates thatpeople cannot recognize what the “highest” ethical and moral standardsare.
//角度是没错，例子可以加强一下。比如在集体里，牺牲小部分人的利益，而保全大部分人之类的例子应该有不少

Furthermore,judging a leader whether he is distinguished, public should place moreemphasis on the leader’s ability rather than the “highest” moralstandards. As a general rule, public would advocate the leader whoaccelerate the development of the society and takes a series of stepsto make their life more comfortable and peaceful in spite of havingsmall blemish. Take Bill Clinton as an obvious example. Although having thesex scandal with Monica Lewinsky, most people take him as an brilliantand success president according to his efforts in increasing the economyof the United States. So there is a good sense in to evaluate theleader by their competence.
//这段的论证比较严密
Inconclusion, from the discussion above, we could affirm that despite thehigh ethical and moral standard is of important to an effective leader,he should not maintain the highest moral standards because it isdifficult to define the “highest” and public should turn theirattention to the capacity of the leader.