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本帖最后由 comorain 于 2009-4-19 16:58 编辑
(5)小词的精妙用法
下面是上海新东方夏霏老师的一篇好文章,供大家参考。在此感谢夏老师。
GRE/GMAT写作中的小词
2009-03-18
作者:
夏霏
来源:上海新东方
国外部
在 GRE和GMAT写作的满分(6分)评分标准中,无论是ISSUE还是ARGUMENT,都会对写作的用词提出要求。如在ISSUE 中提到:Uses language fluently, with varied sentence structure and effective vocabulary.即语言流利,使用多变的句型和有效、令人印象深刻的词汇。ARGUMENT中提到:Demonstrates control of language, including diction and syntactic variety.即展示对语言的掌控,包括用词和用句的多样性。通过这两条,不难看出,阅卷人在“词”这块的要求其实很简单 ----effective(有效、印象深刻)和variety(多样化)。而在写作中,恰到好处的使用“小词”就可以帮助你的文章达到上述两个要求。
首先要说明一点,所谓“小词”并非俚语。由于评分标准明确要求使用standard written English(标准书面英语),因此非正式的俚语、俗语、外来语都不被建议在写作中使用。“小词”------- smart word,指的是一些看似稀松平常普普通通的单词的精妙用法。主要包括以下几种情况:
一.
具体—抽象:
所谓具体到抽象指的是把一个单词的具体含义进行引申从而用在某些抽象的场合。下面我们来看几个例子。
1.Bask. Bask这个单词表示晒太阳,由此可以引申出沉浸,沐浴在(胜利,喜悦,赞美,关怀中)。如bask in the glory of world cup (沉浸在世界杯的荣耀中)或者bask in jubilance.(沉浸在喜悦中)
2.Brew. Brew这个单词也很熟悉,表示酿酒,一引申就可以变成酝酿这个抽象含义。如每逢战争即将打响,我们可以说Storms are brewing on every frontier.(每个边境上都酝酿着风暴。)
3. Swallow. Swallow表示吞咽东西,也就是不加咀嚼地吃东西,因此当我们在描述一个人不加思考就轻易相信别人时,就可以使用这个单词。如Surely, I know better than to swallow hiswords.(我当然不会傻到就这样相信他的鬼话)有时也可以表示取消,如He had to swallow his words。(他不得不取消前言。)
4.Gnaw. Gnaw指的是小动物,如啮齿类动物,咬,啃。稍加引申就变成了使烦恼;折磨。如Thefeeling of guilt gnawed at my conscience day and night.(内疚日夜折磨着我的良心。)
5. Wean. Wean原义指新生儿断奶,引申为使断绝;使戒掉;使放弃。如Theseplants have succeed in weaning from the green house environment.(这些植物已经成功摆脱了对温室环境的依赖。)
二.
名词—动词
不同词性之间的转换也是小词活用的一个思路,这里我们讲讲相对较为普遍也容易掌握的名词到动词的活用。
1.Bridge. Bridge,桥梁。桥梁的作用很显然是连接,因此它做动词就可以表示连接、消除(隔阂,鸿沟等)。如bridge chasm, silence, difference,generation gap(弥合裂缝,打破冷场,消除分歧,弥合代沟)
2.Budget. Budget名词表示预算,动词为合理安排。如She is extremely busy, so she has to budget her time carefully.(她忙极了,所以必须好好安排时间。)
3.Toy. Toy是玩具的意思,由这个名词演变出的动词可以表示漫不经心的考虑,摆弄。如She toyed with a pencil, brooding on something like ahen.(她摆弄着铅笔,似有心事。)
4.Bracket. Brackets 复数形式表示括号。动词bracket指把某和某归入一类,相提并论,Jones and Smith were bracketed in a tie forthe first prize. (约翰和史密斯双双被评为头奖。)
三.
由人到物
所谓由人到物是指这个单词原本形容人,而在某些场合中可以采用“拟物”的手法,形容物体或事件。
1.Flatter. Flatter指谄媚;奉承。拟物后可以表示(照片,画像等)比真人好看。如You are surely flattered by this dress.(你穿这衣服更漂亮了。)
2.Flirt. Flirt最熟悉的意思是调情,而事实上,它还可以表示不当真的对待,玩笑地对待。如Flirt with the idea of resigning (脑子里一直浮现辞职的念头)
3. Conspire.conspire形容人同谋,密谋,也可以形容事物联合发生共同导致(不良后果)。如Wretched weather, nasty food and disgusting companionsconspired to reduce my picnic to be a wet blanket.(糟糕的天气,难吃
的东西,和不喜欢的人,我的野餐真倒霉。)
4.Coax. Coax指人用好话劝,哄诱,指物的时候作耐心地处理,小心摆弄的意思。如Pianists have their own difficulties on thepiano hammers that hit the string have to be coaxed not to sound likepercussion.(钢琴演奏家也有自己的困难处,钢琴上的用来击弦的小锤务必仔细摆弄,以免听起来像打击乐。)
四.
本意引申
有些单词在长期使用中,可能会慢慢衍变成其他我们更熟悉的含义。但是有时恰恰是它的本来意思可以引申出一些奇妙的用法。
1.Throw. Throw原本指的是人在马背上,被马突然摔在地上。因此就有了这样的用法,表示使处于,使陷入(某种状态中)。如Thousands were thrown into homeless by thewar. (战争使千万人无家可归。)
2.Pitch. Pitch除了表示投、掷等意思外,还可以指定标准,用合适的角度,方式表达。这是由于在古希腊的时候,运动会上往往会通过投掷标枪确定一条合格线,因此这个词就慢慢有了定标准这层意思。如The program was pitched at just the rightlevel.( 大纲所定的水平恰到好处。)
3.Blood. Blood鲜血。猎人在猎狐和狗在第一次出猎前给它们尝血的味道。引申后表示使新手取得初次经验。如Many revolutionary devotees were blooded inWuchang Uprise.( 武昌起义使很多热血志士首次经受革命的洗礼。)
希望通过上述的这些小词给大家提供一些思路。其实只要平时多看一些欧美TV,电影,原版书籍或者多收听如VOA,BBC这样的英语广播,多留心,多积累,做个有心人,就可以轻松掌握这些小词,并且在写作中熟练使用,使文章锦上添花。
(6)十对言简意赅的绝妙小词
我在平常写作时经常用这十对小词,感觉它们不仅能精确地表达意思,还可能节约不少笔墨。大家也可以自己积累小词。下面的例句主要摘自北美范文。
① in terms of/with respect to
前者表示“根据,从……方面来说”,用来列举和解释;后者表示“关于,至于”,用来引出话题
My intuition isthat the more a person shares in common with us—in terms ofexperience, heritage, disposition, motives, and evenphysicalattributes—the more accessible that person's heroic traits areto us, and the stronger their attraction as a role model.
With respect toindividual achievements, great achievers are by nature ambitious peopleand therefore tend to be dissatisfied and discontent with theiraccomplishments-no matter how great.
② perspective/viewpoint
都表示“观点,视角”,用来说明看问题的角度
From the perspective of an Imperialist, conquering other lands and peoples might be viewed as an unqualified success. However, from the viewpointof the indigenous peoples who suffer at the hands of Imperialists,these so-called "achievements" are the source of widespread oppressionand misery, and in turn discontent, to which any observant NativeAmerican or South African native could attest.
③ instead of/rather than
两者均表示“而不是”,用于对比
They should question what they are taught instead of accepting it passively.
Even in the arts, students must challenge established styles and forms rather than learn to imitate them; otherwise, no genuinely new art would ever emerge.
④ due to/result from/result in/lead to
四个词都可以用来表示因果关系,后面均需要接名词性结构。用它们既简洁,又可以避免反复使用because
Modern art that violates these principles might hold ephemeral appeal due to its novelty and brashness, but its appeal lacks staying power.
As for the physical sciences, innovation and progress can only result from challenging conventional theories--that is, the status quo.
Also, information overload can result in confusion, which in turn can diminish one's ability to assimilate information and apply it usefully.
These and further discoveries certainly will lead toprogress in dealing effectively with pressing social issues in thefields of education, juvenile delinquency, criminal reform, and mentalillness.
⑤ despite/regardless of
前者表示“尽管,即使”,后者表示“无论”,都用于让步
In sum, despitea deluge of information debunking our false notions about people whoare different than us, as a society it appears we have not reversed ourinclination toward prejudice.
Moreover, in the final analysis anybusiness is indebted to the society in which it operates forits veryexistence, and thus has a moral duty, regardless of any legal obligations, to pay that debt.
⑥ counterproductive/unproductive
前者表示“适得其反的,事与愿违的”,后者表示“没有收益的”
Although the critic can help us understand and appreciate art, more often than not, critiqueis either counterproductive to achieving the objective of art or altogether irrelevant to that objective.
Research workersare well aware that much of their time and effort is unproductive.
⑦ counterpart/peer
前者表示“相对应或具有相同功能的人或物”,后者表示“(官阶、等级、地位或功绩)同等的人,同龄人”,两者都可以用来当代词,避免重复
An informed listener of popular music hears not just the same pleasing sounds and pulsatingrhythms as their naive counterparts,but alsothe rhythmic meters, harmonic structure, and compositionalforms used by the great classical composers of previous centuries, andwhich provided the foundation of modern music.
American childrendid less well in math than their peers in Japan.
⑧ unnecessary/infeasible/ineffective
要区分三者的意思:unnecessary(根本就没有必要干某事)、infeasible(根本就没有干某事情的条件)、ineffetive(达不到预期的效果)。如果要层层递进的话,逻辑顺序是:首先,根本就没有必要干(unnecessary);其次,即使有必要,也没法干成(infeasible);最后,即使干成了,也达不到预期目标(ineffective)。
Specifically, whenit comes to learning rote facts and figures, personal interaction with a teacher is unnecessary, and can even result in fatigue and burnout for the teacher.
Re-floating the sunken ship has been proved infeasible because of its fragility.
In sum, while ads portraying people we want to "be like" are undoubtedly effective in selling products, they are equally ineffective in helping consumers feel better about themselves.
⑨
effective/efficient
这两个词容易出错,中文意思虽然都是“有效”,但effective表示“达到预期效果”;efficient表示“没有浪费时间、金钱或精力”
Few would disagree that through theirability to inspire others and lift the human spirit Mahatma Gandhi andMartin Luther King were eminently effective in leading others to effect social change through civil disobedience.
In sum, television and video can be more efficient than books as a means of staying abreast of current affairs, and for education in the arts that involve moving imagery.
⑩ available/accessible
两者均表示“可利用的, 可获得的”
The choice to forego this security is always available, although it might carry unpleasant consequences.
However, equally influential wasJohannes Gutenberg, whose invention of the printing press severalcenturies later rendered Western knowledge and culture accessible to every class of people throughout the known world.
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