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soarer0474UID: 2665789

10.20作文

https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=1019790&extra=

辛苦了
非常超时。。。。

joyceliuUID: 2477232

10.20 作业
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=1019799&extra=

beangtUID: 2691375

http://bbs.gter.ce.cn/bbs/viewthread.php?tid=1019800&extra=
10.20作文，谢谢大家

HYPS2011UID: 2618437

20 作业：感激大家阿
https://bbs.gter.net/thread-1018518-1-3.html

spyUID: 2295035

10.17
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33楼，望狠拍

daisy840228UID: 2684617

https://bbs.gter.net/thread-1014739-3-1.html
20号作文

fanfan0502UID: 2439300

20日作业，在10楼：

https://bbs.gter.net/thread-1017854-1-1.html

晚交了，对不住同改的同学哦~~

lupiscesUID: 2231942

10.20 miaz

https://bbs.gter.net/thread-1010474-5-1.html

42F 谢谢！

melody106UID: 2559573

20号作文，谢谢。
https://bbs.gter.net/thread-1019857-1-1.html

sunliang3361UID: 2502234

20号作文，谢谢
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=1019861&extra=

我是chineseladyUID: 2662783

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10.20

fish1044UID: 2190500

10.20

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谢谢

scutgongUID: 2564275

10.21  多谢修改。30楼


https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=1015087&extra=&page=3

doubledianUID: 2661760

https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=1020127&extra=
10.21作文，写得太差劲了

doubledianUID: 2661760

738# beangt With the rapid development of science and technology, people have spent less time on cooking and eating their food so that they are able to complete other jobs in the limited time. Some people are in favor of the idea that it will take people more time to prepare food in 20 years later. They arguing（为什么加ing？） that people will pay more attention to the quality and flavor of food. However, I deem that less time will be cost in cooking food in 20 years later. Detail explanations that support my point of view are as following.2 ^! o) A" |# T1 o2 Y
To begin with, people in the future will become so busy that they have less time to feed themselves because of the fast growing pace of life. As we can see in our society, people working in most fields have spent less time on their meals. Take my brother for example, he is a ordinaty（拼写错误） staff of a big comersial（？） company which requires a lot of business trips. Before he was employed by the company, he used to cook for his family and comsumed （拼写）a considerable amount of time in learning to cook new delicious and nutricious（拼写） dishes. But now, he scarcly（？） has time to prepare his own food, not to mention his family. What he can do to feed hiself（himself） in the business trip is to perchase（拼写） fast food, taken away food or to eat out. Nothing can stop the trend the more advanced the society will develop and the busier people will be. Hence, people will have less time on meals 20 years later just like people are possessing less time in eating than 20 years ago.  A4 x2 F! z& Q7 \# j
In addition, much equipment for cooking food will be invented which shorten the time consumed in preparing food. Traditionally, food preparation（the preparation of food 好点吧，你这么写感觉很别扭） often requist （拼写）fire to heat the food which is extremely time-consumingand. Thanks to the improvement of technology, we are in an excellent environment of cooking food with electricity, such as microwave owens（拼错了吧） and auto heating pots. Our daily life is filled with examples which illustrate that life is more convienient（拼写0 especially in cooking. Years ago, we had to ignite the firewood to heat the food which was not only air-polluted but also cost a lot of time. Nowadays, with the help of electricity and varies of cooking and heating instruments, we can cook our food easily without waiting for a long period of time.3 l+ _/ b* Q( u+ ?/ v
To sum up, people will spend less time in preparing food in 20 years later. As is discussed above, both the shrinking time spent on meals and the advantages that new-invented instruments bring to us contribute to the decrease.
整体写的还是不错的，但是离高分作文有点差距，拼写错误有点多，好像高级词汇用的不多（其实我自己的高级词汇用的都很少，但是建议你多用点），思路比较清晰，论证也还可以，建议多看看例文，我作文写的巨菜，所以不能给你提一些什么建设性的意见，谅解！