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发表于 2005-7-27 23:36:11 |只看该作者 |倒序浏览
Issue 157
——题目——
There is no such thing as purely objective observation. All observation are subjective, they are always guided by the observer's expectation or desires.
——正文——
Man is emotional beings, who his preference and aversion, so the prejudice arises when he observe something. In this sense, the observation could be guided by people's expectation and desire. However, the limited cognition and people's disposition are also factors result in the subjective observation.

To begin with, since people have different character, when they see the same thing, they are inclined to pay attention to different part of the subject. The subconsciousness serves as a guidance that makes people merely pay attention the part most attracted them. For example, two girls observed the rose. One said that there are thorns under the roses, whereas the other said there are roses upon the thorns. The reason why they have totally different opinion on the same rose is that an optimistic person tend to see the beautiful facet in compare with the pessimistic person who always critical to the circumstances. And it is true that a scrupulous person tends to pay attention to almost every details of the subject, whereas the careless person often misses some factors that he consider as less important. In this sense, people with different dispositions tend to emphasize on different part of the subject.

Secondly, due to the limited cognition, the result of observation often deviates from the truth. It is hard for people to observe objectively, since they can not comprehend the phenomenon deeply. Take a common phenomenon for example, we see the sun rise from the east and sink in the west everyday, so we tend to conclude that the sun turn around the earth if we are lacking of knowledge concerning to the subject and that is what our ancestors thought in the past. Even when Galileo invented the telescope, people are still inclined to believe their eyes rather than the equipment, because of the limited knowledge and lacking of the scientific attitude. Nowadays, people know more about the earth, but they still feel difficult to observe the world objectively. Why? Their observation largely limited by the equipment, the root cause of which is still cognition. Therefore, limited cognition makes the objective observation hard to realize.

Admittedly, desire and expectation also serve to conduct people’s subjective observation, set aside the limitation of knowledge and people's disposition. As we know the Neptune is call the calculated-planet of which the discovery was delayed, due to the scientists’ expectation that the Uranus is the farthest one from the earth. And it is because someone’s calculation demonstrates the existence of another planet that the astronomer discovered it by their expectations. Furthermore, such kind of subjective observation is indispensable in some area of human life, such as art. We see the photographs, the paintings and the sculptures are all created based on subjective observation of artists. For example, the photographer tends to take photograph of what he expects to see by focalizing and so does other artists. They have different preference and expectation, which serve them to create works in different forms and within various contents. In a word, the desire and expectation is another factor guiding people’s observation.

To sum up, all the observation are subjective, but the reason lead to this phenomenon is different. Personal expectation and desire, limited cognition, and people's disposition are all the factors that have influence on the result of observation.
谢谢你,虽然我只想亲吻一片雪花,你却给了我银色的世界。
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发表于 2005-7-27 23:46:45 |只看该作者
好,存下来了
明天看:)
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发表于 2005-7-28 00:08:18 |只看该作者
偶写过了!明天帮你看看!今天太晚了!刚写了一篇!好累!:):):)

欢迎批改偶的习作!不胜感谢!有拍必回!
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Mencius said,"When heaven is about to confer a great office on any man,it first exercises his mind with suffering, and his sinews and bones with toil.It exposes his body to hunger………….By all these methods, it stimulates his mind, consolidates his character, and increases his efficiency".

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发表于 2005-7-28 11:25:53 |只看该作者
Issue 157
——题目——
There is no such thing as purely objective observation. All observation are subjective, they are always guided by the observer's expectation or desires.
——正文——
Man is emotional beings, who his preference and aversion, so the prejudice arises when he observe something. In this sense, the observation could be guided by people's expectation and desire. However, the limited cognition and people's disposition are also factors result in the subjective observation.

To begin with, since people have different character复数, when they see the same thing, they are inclined to pay attention to different part of the subject. The subconsciousness serves as a guidance that makes people merely pay attention the part most attracted them. For example, two girls observed the rose. One said that there are thorns under the roses, whereas the other said there are roses upon the thorns. The reason why they have totally different opinion复数 on the same rose is that an optimistic person tend to see the beautiful facet in compare with the pessimistic person who always critical to the circumstances. And it is true that a scrupulous person tends to pay attention to almost every details of the subject, whereas the careless person often misses some factors that he consider as less important. In this sense, people with different dispositions tend to emphasize on different part of the subject.个人觉得结尾总结还归到观察是主观上来,可以加上causing the observation subjective

Secondly, due to the limited cognition, the result of observation often deviates from the truth. It is hard for people to observe objectively, since they can not comprehend the phenomenon deeply. Take a common phenomenonphenomena for example, we see the sun rise from the east and sink in the west everyday, so we tend to conclude that the sun turn around the earth if we are lacking of knowledge concerning to去掉to the subject and that is what our ancestors thought in the past. Even when Galileo invented the telescope, people are still inclined to believe their eyes rather than the equipment, because of the limited knowledge and lacking of the scientific attitude. Nowadays, people know more about the earth, but they still feel difficult to observe the world objectively. Why? Their observation largely limited by the equipment, the root cause of which is still cognition. Therefore, limited cognition makes the objective observation hard to realize.

Admittedly, desire and expectation also serve to conduct people’s subjective observation, set aside apart from the limitation of knowledge and people's disposition. As we know the Neptune is call the calculated-planet of which the discovery was delayed, due to the scientists’ expectation that the Uranus is the farthest one from the earth. And it is because someone’sAdams发现的 calculation demonstrates过去式 the existence of another planet that the astronomer discovered it by their expectations. Furthermore, such kind of subjective observation is indispensable in some area of human life, such as art. (We see)删掉 the photographs, the paintings and the sculptures are all created based on subjective observation of artists. For example, the photographer tends to take photograph of what he expects to see by focalizing and so does do other artists. 这个例子好像不太好,我以为你要举两个例子,比如同时拍大海,一个拍的汹涌澎湃,一个拍的安静祥和等等They have different preference and expectation复数, which serve them to create works in different forms and within various contents. In a word, the desire and expectation is another factor guiding people’s observation.

To sum up, all the observation are subjective, but the reason lead to this phenomenon is different. Personal expectation and desire, limited cognition, and people's disposition are all the factors that have influence on the result of observation.

没挑出什么大毛病,觉得逻辑都还行,一些小语法错误,主要是单复数问题,注意下就行了。哎,写得比我好多了,我一限时就全是大白话,句式也单调了,字数也就400多一些,真不知道怎么办

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发表于 2005-7-28 13:09:52 |只看该作者
Originally posted by polymath at 2005-7-28 00:08
偶写过了!明天帮你看看!今天太晚了!刚写了一篇!好累!:):):)

欢迎批改偶的习作!不胜感谢!有拍必回!
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你的习作好多,先拍一篇哈
谢谢你,虽然我只想亲吻一片雪花,你却给了我银色的世界。

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