100,000 people, radio --> jazz music is popular
(does not mean jazz music club is popular, may not go to club,just listen to the radio, CD, what part of 100,000 is from local)
Nearest jazz club is 65 miles away --> local market all to C club
(other general music clubs that periodically play jazz)
Nationawide study 1,000 USD --> make money
(Monroe maybe unique, 1000usd includes many items)
All three --> C club tremendously profitable (questionable)
但是作者说的是最近的jazz club是65 miles 言下之意是想表达在当地建jazz club 会让jazz的爱好者很方便
但是作者说的是最近的jazz club是65 miles 言下之意是想表达在当地建jazz club 会让jazz的爱好者很方便 用其它clubs会周期性的play jazz 来反驳总觉得欠了点什么。。。如果说现在交通方便了65miles也很快会到达,类似这种驳点我 更能接受点
没有提到c club经营能力的原因,我考虑The following was written as a part of an application,这部分主要是在论述外部市场环境的,经营能力必然会在 other parts 里面提到。依据ets 所说的 argument的考察内容,主要是考察critically examining the line of reasoning and the use of evidence, 所以个人认为,文中没有提及的不攻击也许更合适。而指出上面只几条错误,已经展示考试者的critically examining了。
欢迎光临 寄托家园留学论坛 (https://bbs.gter.net/) | Powered by Discuz! X2 |