T1;
1.finish ?还是另外一个词,
2.例子没有体现出那个leave much time to solve the problems that robots can not solve. 不知道是我没听懂还是什么,专业名词有吧。
T2
1.VERY 用得稍多,pretty 也不错。
2.最后morning 什么的?没听懂。
2.28
task--tasks.
Play some movies--watch movies.
Use two "so". ---- so.... Therefore...
Your sole reason is about your major. Seems not so convincing.If you use only one reason to support your view, please make your example more vivid.
less effective---less effectively
can't stand talking and talking (little confused)
Add a "But" to contrast the first choice and second.
Say more about the benefits about self-study.
NO.1
1.Not fluent.
2. Unnecessary repetition.
3."drive too much"?
You almost lose the clear clue to follow and your example is actually confusing. So, I recommend you to try writing something down and memerize your points before recording.
NO.2
The content is OK. But personally, i think the example is too long, you can just use the not-concentrated part to illustrate your point and then add another reason. Your view will be better supported then.