韩小夕的作文本~~哎，大家使劲拍……

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7.15
People should live in the city or country all life instead of moving to another place.
When asked whether people should live in the city or country all life. Some people insist that moving to another place or even immigrating to another country may provide people with better job opportunities and welfare. But in my opinion, living in the city or country all life can ensure people to have a interpersonal relationship and a in-depth knowledge of the city/country culture.

First and foremost, interpersonal friendship always takes time to set up. When you first move to somewhere else, even another city beside the former one, you still will feel different; especially you will miss your friends most. When I went to America as an exchange student, it was difficult for me to fit in at first. Everyone seems like they know each other when they went to kindergarten and I feel like I’m the totally stranger. Even though after several months, I made friends with plenty of people, but it still took me a long time and our friendship is perhaps not as deep as lifetime friends, I suppose.

In addition, an increasing number of people start to realize that how important it is to identify local culture, especially in a city/country with a long history. Just imagine, if the migrants move to another place without cultural empathy, how can they suit in the city/country well? What will happen is that they will have a hard time and feel upset for the whole time. What is worse, they may move back to the place where they come from. Like in Karate Kid, Dre Paker, who moved to China with his mother, feels lonely and begs to move back to America. That is because it doesn’t feel like home in Beijing. Luckily, he met Mr. Han, who taught him kung fu and Chinese culture. But not everyone is as lucky as Dre.

To sum up, I hold the opinion that people should not easily move or immigrate around so that they can make sure of their steady interpersonal relationship and feel cultural identified.

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不好意思这么晚给你~


..我好像发错了 我这几天补发给你  = =

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会发附件了~

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我改好啦，我发不了附件，在群里叫我一声吧

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明天中午一定改出来！

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2008.5.16 NA
independently writing: 是telephone 还是television对人类的有more effects
480字
When it comes to the most important invention in this century, telephones and televisions are definitely foremost. However, a recent survey analyzed the statistics and indicated that people intend to determine that televisions have more effects on people’s lives. Some people who object to this saying insist that telephone first provide connection for people in different area or even different country. However, since the televisions can offer communication with more people and consist of both sound and image, I hold that televisions have a greater influence on people.

It is universally acknowledged that television changed people’s lives at night. Instead of going out or to the bed, people can relax themselves on the couch and enjoy the TV shows, movies and news. Compared to telephone, television provides a broader communication with people. Advertisement on TV can be seen by hundreds and thousands of people, while telephone can only get connection with a single person. My mom once said that she cannot live without television. Not just because of the various TV shows that bring her knowledge and joy, but also the basic news that keep her informed about the city, country as well as the world. On the country, living without a telephone seems much easier. If you really need to find somebody, you can step in the show and ask others for help.

Also, televisions consist of both sound and images. It is hard for an ordinary telephone to do so. On the contrary to all kinds of pictures, videos on TV, telephone can only provides sound communication. Just imagine, if you are trying to post advertisement through the phone, it will be really hard to describe the product. What’s more, few people will believe it. There is an old saying”Seeing is believing” How can you trust and pay for something while you have no clue what it looks like. It is more useful for people to have a source through television of all kinds of information. From this, I can easily imagine that people try to sell things through telephones are going to fail.

On the other hand, I will not draw a definitely conclusion that telephone has no efforts on people’s lives. When you are upset, a call with friend can usefully calm you down. When you are blue, a call approaching parents can let you have someone to talk to. Telephone seems important for personal communication. It can neither provide a broader connection with thousands of people nor have pictures, videos or shows.

From all I mentioned above, I deem that television influences people’s lives more than telephone. The living pictures, delicate videos and various programs provided by television and latest information and broader resources through TV programs make television intends to have a greater effect on people’s lives.

对不住同组的同学。我也不知道怎么不能传附件了=。=汗
21号就要考了，小夕有点紧张。。不知怎么的
要不大家给我估个分？

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Nowadays, a recent survey shows that more and more parents intend to teach their children how to show their accomplishments instead of teaching (感觉improving更好) them strengths only. That means, people start to realize how significant it is to exhibit the accomplishments. Some people who object to this saying insist that gold can always shine. Even the influential people or employers don’t know about your strengths, you may still achieve great success in another area. However, I found little evidence to prove this. So, in my personal view, learning good ways to ensure other people know about one’s advantages are necessary, both as a student and an employee.

It is acknowledged that American universities consider student more fairly while dealing with applications. That is because they weigh students according to both their scores and personal state and recommendation from teachers. As a student, you need to show your specific accomplishments and unique advantages to pop out from other applicants. This year, a student who got highest scores in College Entrance Test in China attempted to apply to top American universities. However, he got rejections form all the colleges he applied. This is because the way he was showing himself was ordinary and boring. Listing a bunch of numbers and accolades, he lost the opportunity to reveal a real person. Obtaining ways of exhibiting oneself is crucial for students to acquire the fondness.

Moreover, it is undoubtedly important for employees to ensure that the bosses know about your accomplishments. If employers have no clue about one’s efforts and success, how can they offer one promotion? That is to say, ensuring that your boss is aware of your endeavor and achievements is the key to promotion and further success. My friend Aries was shy when he was first employed as a manager assistant. Working assiduously with his work, he devoted himself to the job. On the contrary, he had no sense of showing off himself a little bit so that employers can see his devotion. After talking with his experience （experienced？？） father, he realized if he couldn’t make his bosses see his devotion and achievements, he would never get a promotion and be successful. So he started show his strengths in a wise way. In the end, he got a quick promotion and achieved great success in work.

I will not draw a definite conclusion that people who are not good that exhibiting their strengths can never get successful. Their efforts, ambitions or achievements may be seen or discovered by their bosses. However, nobody can deny that learning a wise way to let people see your endeavor and achievements is the best way to obtain initial success.

To sum up, in the society, not only the students but also the employees need wise ways to reveal their strengths and accomplishments to attract influential people’s attention such as teachers and bosses. This will be the first step to achieve their success.
第一遍，感觉你的文笔很正，论点也中肯。是篇好文章。
第二篇，发觉你写了近500字。如果你能在考试规定时间内完成的话，得满分对你来说是一件很容易的事。
希望有机会向你多学习学习。

迟了。请见谅！

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8.12  （21：10-21：40）
09.08.01NA
you agree or disagree with the following statement? If you do not make sure other people (especially influential people or your employers) know about your strengths and accomplishments, you will never get successful in life.

Nowadays, a recent survey shows that more and more parents intend to teach their children how to show their accomplishments instead of teaching them strengths only. That means, people start to realize how significant it is to exhibit the accomplishments. Some people who object to this saying insist that gold can always shine. Even the influential people or employers don’t know about your strengths, you may still achieve great success in another area. However, I found little evidence to prove this. So, in my personal view, learning good ways to ensure other people know about one’s advantages are necessary, both as a student and an employee.

It is acknowledged that American universities consider student more fairly while dealing with applications. That is because they weigh students according to both their scores and personal state and recommendation from teachers. As a student, you need to show your specific accomplishments and unique advantages to pop out from other applicants. This year, a student who got highest scores in College Entrance Test in China attempted to apply to top American universities. However, he got rejections form all the colleges he applied. This is because the way he was showing himself was ordinary and boring. Listing a bunch of numbers and accolades, he lost the opportunity to reveal a real person. Obtaining ways of exhibiting oneself is crucial for students to acquire the fondness.

Moreover, it is undoubtedly important for employees to ensure that the bosses know about your accomplishments. If employers have no clue about one’s efforts and success, how can they offer one promotion? That is to say, ensuring that your boss is aware of your endeavor and achievements is the key to promotion and further success. My friend Aries was shy when he was first employed as a manager assistant. Working assiduously with his work, he devoted himself to the job. On the contrary, he had no sense of showing off himself a little bit so that employers can see his devotion. After talking with his experience father, he realized if he couldn’t make his bosses see his devotion and achievements, he would never get a promotion and be successful. So he started show his strengths in a wise way. In the end, he got a quick promotion and achieved great success in work.

I will not draw a definite conclusion that people who are not good that exhibiting their strengths can never get successful. Their efforts, ambitions or achievements may be seen or discovered by their bosses. However, nobody can deny that learning a wise way to let people see your endeavor and achievements is the best way to obtain initial success.

To sum up, in the society, not only the students but also the employees need wise ways to reveal their strengths and accomplishments to attract influential people’s attention such as teachers and bosses. This will be the first step to achieve their success.

今天是从学生和雇员两个角度写的，不知道这样可不可以，纠结！

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小修改。语言运用没问题。

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bruce520

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抱歉，回复的晚了……
已经改好了，见附件~~

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8月10日交
09.07.25NA
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Movies and TV programs made in one’s own country are more interesting than those made in other countries.

Before I went abroad, I intend to watch movies and TV shows form other countries. I thought it was interesting. However, when I was sitting on the comfortable couch in my American host family and enjoy the TV shows and movies, I always have some words and phrases that I cannot comprehend easily. At that time, I ensured that the movies and TV programs in my own country are more interesting than those made in other countries. Unavoidably, the movies and TV shows contain the culture from the country that filmed it. We cannot deny that no matter how wonderful your English is, you probably cannot understand the movie when it comes to the history and politic problem, or even you may be shocked by only a joke because you don’t know the movie the characters are talking about. The most impressive thing to me is that when I was watching movies with my host family, I will always be confused by a joke the characters make. My host mom often stopped the movie and explained to me about the joke or the plot when I showed my confusion. Especially, when we watched the movie called A walk in the clouds, the main actor hadn’t seen his wife for a year. I had no clue with the background, so I was asking my host mom why he could not come home in military training. My host mom explained to me patiently that at that time, it was the Second World War and American soldiers were sent to the wars. After the explanation, I comprehended the movie better.

Additionally, different countries have different people and events. For example, this year, on August 13th, it is Chinese Valentine’s Day. Several love movies are about to come out as a way of celebrating. As we all admit, TV shows and movies are ways to reflect ordinary peoples’ lives. How can you feel a person’s life when you are having the totally different life with him/her? American people won’t celebrate Spring Festival in china, just like we don’t usually spend Christmas with family. When I was in America as an exchange student, I felt the significance of Christmas. All the TV shows and movies are fulfilled with love in the family and getting together for the festival, which I had never seen in china.

To sum up, movies and TV shows should be a reflection of people’s lives. Only movies from one’s country can show its own spirit and interest. People from a different culture may can watch it and understand part of it. However, it is hard for them to touch its original thought. Like Chinese movies, they may not always be the best in the world, but I will always consider them as my favorite.

今天小夕计时写了。29min，490+字吧。
感觉论证非常不好，大家狠批！！！

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8.28~~

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8月21号~
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