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0910AW SPECTACULAR 之【SU & SY SO】第四十期——Transitions
https://bbs.gter.net/thread-982752-1-1.html
KG阅读笔记
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Transitions and Transitional Devices
--transition: 1 a : passage from one state, stage, subject, or place to another : CHANGE b : a movement, development, or evolution from one form, stage, or style to another
从以上definition可以看出:在写作中,上下两段表达的观点与看法、讨论的内容不相同时,我们一般需要加入transition devices进行过渡,以使得文章各部分衔接恰当,不至于出现脱节的地方。
Writing Transitions
(借助These/Those/After/Though…引用关键词,实现平滑过渡)
Good transitions can connect paragraphs and turn disconnected writing into a unified whole(即为前面提到的衔接). Instead of treating paragraphs as separate ideas, transitions can help readers understand how paragraphs work together, reference one another, and build to a larger point(在Scientific Writing中,力求每一句话只有一个观点,各段内部只表达一个意思,并且各段整体结合表达一个主旨。由于这里的整体性,必然要求各段间存在合理的关系—相辅相承). The key to producing good transitions is highlighting connections(某些情况下,用恰当的transition devices来highlight是有必要的,通过这些transition devices,读者比较容易理解作者的意图) between corresponding paragraphs. By referencing in one paragraph the relevant material from previous ones, writers can develop important points for their readers.
It is a good idea to continue one paragraph where another leaves off (instances where this is especially challenging may suggest that the paragraphs don't belong together at all.) Picking up key phrases from the previous paragraph and highlighting them in the next(提到用上文出现过的词是方法之一,也是简单但行之有效的) can create an obvious progression for readers. Many times, it only takes a few words to draw these connections. Instead of writing transitions that could connect any paragraph to any other paragraph, write a transition that could only connect one specific paragraph to another specific paragraph(注意transition的对象段).
Example: Overall, Management Systems International has logged< to make a note or record of : enter details of or about in a log > increased sales in every sector, leading to a significant rise in third-quarter profits.
Another important thing to note is that(前面的词组违背了写作的原则之一:需要从旧东西引过新东西,如果直接Another…显得比较突然,修改方法是—重复引用上文的profits) the corporation had expanded its international influence.
Revision: Overall, Management Systems International has logged increased sales in every sector, leading to a significant rise in third-quarter profits.
These impressive profits(旧东西) are largely due to the corporation's expanded international influence(新东西,即前旧后新).
Example: Fearing for the loss of Danish lands, Christian IV signed the Treaty of Lubeck, effectively ending the Danish phase of the 30 Years War.
But then something else significant happened. The Swedish intervention began.
Revision: Fearing for the loss of more Danish lands, Christian IV signed the Treaty of Lubeck, effectively ending the Danish phase of the 30 Years War.
Shortly after Danish forces withdrew(借助These/Those/After/Though…引用关键词,实现平滑过渡), the Swedish intervention began.
Example: Amy Tan became a famous author after her novel, The Joy Luck Club, skyrocketed < to cause to rise or increase abruptly and rapidly >up the bestseller list.
There are other things to note about Tan as well. Amy Tan also participates in the satirical garage band< : an amateur rock band typically holding its rehearsals in a garage and usually having only a local audience > the Rock Bottom Remainders with Stephen King and Dave Barry.
Revision: Amy Tan became a famous author after her novel, The Joy Luck Club, skyrocketed up the bestseller list.
Though her fiction is well known, her work with the satirical garage band the Rock Bottom Remainders receives
far less publicity.
Transitional Devices
Transitional devices are like bridges between parts of your paper(其重要性可见一斑!!). They are cues that help the reader to interpret ideas a paper develops. Transitional devices are words or phrases that help carry a thought from one sentence to another, from one idea to another, or from one paragraph to another. And finally, transitional devices link sentences and paragraphs together smoothly so that there are no abrupt jumps or breaks between ideas(transition devices的目的!!).
There are several types of transitional devices, and each category leads readers to make certain connections or assumptions. Some lead readers forward and imply the building of an idea or thought, while others make readers compare ideas or draw conclusions from the preceding thoughts(transitional devices可承前,也可启后!).
Here is a list of some common transitional devices that can be used to cue readers in a given way.
To Add: and, again, and then, besides, equally important, finally, further, furthermore, nor, too, next, lastly, what's more, moreover, in addition, first (second, etc.)
To Compare: whereas, but, yet, on the other hand, however, nevertheless, on the contrary, by comparison, where, compared to, up against, balanced against, vis a vis, but, although, conversely, meanwhile, after all, in contrast, although this may be true
To Prove: because, for, since, for the same reason, obviously, evidently, furthermore, moreover, besides, indeed, in fact, in addition, in any case, that is
To Show Exception: yet, still, however, nevertheless, in spite of, despite, of course, once in a while, sometimes
To Show Time: immediately, thereafter, soon, after a few hours, finally, then, later, previously, formerly, first (second, etc.), next, and then
To Repeat: in brief, as I have said, as I have noted, as has been noted
To Emphasize: definitely, extremely, obviously, in fact, indeed, in any case, absolutely, positively, naturally, surprisingly, always, forever, perennially, eternally, never, emphatically, unquestionably, without a doubt, certainly, undeniably, without reservation
To Show Sequence: first, second, third, and so forth. A, B, C, and so forth. next, then, following this, at this time, now, at this point, after, afterward, subsequently, finally, consequently, previously, before this, simultaneously, concurrently, thus, therefore, hence, next, and then, soon
To Give an Example: for example, for instance, in this case, in another case, on this occasion, in this situation, take the case of, to demonstrate, to illustrate, as an illustration, to illustrate
To Summarize or Conclude: in brief, on the whole, summing up, to conclude, in conclusion, as I have shown, as I have said, hence, therefore, accordingly, thus, as a result, consequently, on the whole
了解并掌握上述transitional devices有助于读懂作者的意图,并应用于GRE阅读;也有助于我们在写作中比较恰当地传达意思,并应用于GRE AW。从这里可以学习到,GRE各部分间存在一定的联系,也就是“草木也知愁”强调同时准备的原因之一吧,呵呵!!! |
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