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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People spend more time on personal enjoyment rather than what they should do.

I totally disagree with the viewpoint. It depends. At this point, people can be divided into two groups: the conscientious one and the unconscientious one. People in the conscientious group can always focus on the things that they are supposed to do. And after that, that is the time for their personal enjoyment. To the opposite, people in the unconscientious group are usually enjoying themselves while seldom working hard.

All the persons with responsibility know they should spend more time on the necessary things, like working hard on their own fields to get more competetive power, studing hard on their own academic subjects to get more opportunities and etc.. Not only they know it, but they do so despite most of these things are not pleasing. As we know, almost everybody need to work hard to earn the living. Most of the workers are not pleased to their jobs, but they still insist working. Let’s take my mother as an example. She is a teacher, she teaches the same things every year. Of course she does not like it intrinsicly. However, she has spent over 20 years on teaching with her patience. Because she knows that she is responsible for the social surroundings. She needs to support our family, she also needs to offer her limited power for the education. What deserves to mention is she really like painting. But she can only enjoy it after finishing her work, cooking, clothes washing and so on so forth. So actually most people spend more time on the things they should do than the personal enjoyment.

There are still some people put their personal enjoyment first because they have no responsibility. All in their mind is just themselves. All they do is what they like to do. They never consider whether it is right, what should they od in the future. For instance, the gamblers always spend many time on playing without thinking their family and future. I really do not think this is a reasonable thing. Luckily, this kind of people is few.

Another point worth mentioning is that most of the people need change their attitudes about the things which are supposed to do but not pleasing. Because it is really painful to do the things which they do not like day after day, year after year. If they can treat them as a indirect pleasing enjoyment, life will be more wonderful.

In summary, most people do not spend more time on personal enjoyment than what they should do because they are responsible for the social surroundings. I really hope that they can live better by changing their attitudes.

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I totally disagree with the viewpoint. It depends (不是一个完整的句子). At this point, people can be divided into two groups: the conscientious one (既然是people，怎么是one呢？注意单复要一致) and the unconscientious one. People in the conscientious group (conscientious people) can always focus on the things that they are supposed to do. And after that, that is the time (?) for their personal enjoyment. To the opposite, people in the unconscientious group are usually enjoying themselves while seldom working hard (注意提出自己的论点时要小心，既然开始就说完全不同意，为什么后面的论述中给出的意思是折中意见，认为在一定情况下，这个观点还是正确的？).

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All the persons (people) with responsibility know they should spend more time on the necessary things, like working hard on their own fields to get more competetive power, studing hard on their own academic subjects to get more opportunities and etc.. Not only they know it, but they do so despite most of these things are not pleasing. As we know, almost everybody need to work hard to earn the living. Most of the workers are not pleased to their jobs, but they still insist working. Let’s take my mother as an example. She is a teacher, she teaches the same things every year. Of course she does not like it intrinsicly. However, she has spent over 20 years on teaching with her patience (patiently). Because she knows that she is responsible for the social surroundings (对社会环境负责？). She needs to support our family, she also needs to offer her limited power for the education. What deserves to mention is she really like painting. But she can only enjoy it after finishing her work, cooking, clothes washing and so on so forth. (这里句子间衔接不是很好，突然就so了) So actually most people spend more time on the things they should do than the personal enjoyment.

There are still some people put their personal enjoyment first because they have no responsibility. All in their mind is just themselves. All they do is what they like to do. They never consider whether it is right, what should they od in the future. For instance, the gamblers always spend many time on playing without thinking their family and future. I really do not think this is a reasonable thing. Luckily, this kind of people is few.

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Another point worth mentioning is that most of the people need change their attitudes about the things which are supposed to do but not pleasing. Because it is really painful to do the things which they do not like day after day, year after year. If they can treat them as a indirect pleasing enjoyment, life will be more wonderful.6 x" B: L  n: u: q5 f& H
In summary, most people do not spend more time on personal enjoyment than what they should do because they are responsible for the social surroundings. I really hope that they can live better by changing their attitudes (觉得这句话没必要，还突兀).

单词拼写错误可以自己改
注意题目的主语是people，而不是most people，所以楼主的论点可以定为写大多数人如何，小部分人如何，而不是一来就全盘否定
感觉第一个论点用的笔墨太多，就不能照顾到其他论点的展开了。并且倒数第二段我觉得不太合适，里面说的是people做他们不喜欢的事情，但是关键是没有说出这些不喜欢的事情跟people必须要做的事情有什么联系，所以我觉得如果这层关系没有讲出来，就跟题目没有关系

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（第一句和后面的确不一致，所以换成温和一点的）Not all the people spend more time on the personal enjoyment than what they should do. It depends (不是一个完整的句子)（我查了查，这好像是个完整的句子哦）. At this point, people can be divided into two groups: the conscientious one (既然是people，怎么是one呢？注意单复要一致)（这里one是指group） and the unconscientious one. People in the conscientious group (conscientious people) can always focus on the things that they are supposed to do. And after that, that(这个that 换成it会不会好一些？) is the time (?) for their personal enjoyment. To the opposite, people in the unconscientious group（Unconscientious people） are usually enjoying themselves while seldom working hard (注意提出自己的论点时要小心，既然开始就说完全不同意，为什么后面的论述中给出的意思是折中意见，认为在一定情况下，这个观点还是正确的？).( E/ s7 I) t( L7 o" s/ P# }7 v- u

All the persons (people) with responsibility know they should spend more time on the necessary things, like working hard on their own fields to get more competetive power, studing hard on their own academic subjects to get more opportunities and etc.. Not only they know it, but they do so despite most of these things are not pleasing. As we know, almost everybody need to work hard to earn the living. Most of the workers are not pleased to their jobs, but they still insist working. Let’s take my mother as an example. She is a teacher, she teaches the same things every year. Of course she does not like it intrinsicly. However, she has spent over 20 years on teaching with her patience (patiently). Because she knows that she is responsible for the social surroundings(many people surrounding her.) (对社会环境负责？). She needs to support our family, she also needs to offer her limited power for the education. What deserves to mention is she really like painting. But she can only enjoy it after finishing her work, cooking, clothes washing and so on so forth. (这里句子间衔接不是很好，突然就so了)That means she need to spend more time on the necessary things.
So actually most people spend more time on the things they should do than the personal enjoyment.
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There are still some people put their personal enjoyment first because they have no responsibility. All in their minds is just themselves. All they do is what they like to do. They never consider whether it is right, what should they do in the future. For instance, the gamblers always spend many time on playing without thinking their family and future. They are crazy about the gamble and do not go to work and even do not go back home for a long time. The results are they will lose their jobs and destroy the harmonious family. All of these just because they spend more time on what they like to do. I really do not think this is a reasonable thing. Luckily, this kind of people is few.
point worth mentioning is that most of the people need change their attitudes about the things which are supposed to do but not pleasing. Because it is really painful to do the things which they do not like day after day, year after year. If they can treat them as a indirect pleasing enjoyment, life will be more wonderful.).这段确实与主题不搭，全删了吧6 x" BJ) L  n: u: q5 f& H' ]W9 c% \. p  z: ^; L% g
In summary, it is rather superficial to simply say that people spend more time on the personal enjoyment than what they should do.
We can say that most of the people spend more time on what they should do, and few people spend more time on the personal enjoyment. I really hope that they can live better by changing their attitudes (觉得这句话没必要，还突兀).（这句也不要了）


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真是特别谢卷卷这么认真的修改！
这个题目这么分成两类人写实在太幼稚，但越复杂我就越写不清楚了，这么两个点我都写不清楚。真是要多练。我又按照卷卷的修改意见简单的做了修改，仍然有很多不足（第二个点还不够展开，全文这样分两点太单一……）。不然被改完了就那么看看了事不会有进步啊，不过就是再要辛苦卷卷帮我看看了。
Thanks again!

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People spend more time on personal enjoyment rather than what they should do.

I totally disagree with the viewpoint. It depends (这里转得有点硬，可以稍微多说点). At this point, people can be divided into two groups: the conscientious one and the unconscientious one. People in the conscientious group can always focus on the things that they are supposed to do. And after that, that is the time for their personal enjoyment. To the opposite (On the contrary) , people in the unconscientious group are usually enjoying themselves while seldom working hard. (感觉观点表达得有点跳跃，LZ应该说明并不是时间花多花少的问题，而是有意无意的问题)

All the persons with responsibility (不一定哦，人有责任不一定会履行，应该是说有责任感sense of responsibility) know they should spend more time on the necessary things, like working hard on their own fields to get more competetive power (advantage), studing hard on their own academic subjects to get more opportunities and etc.. Not only they know it, but they do so despite most of these things are not pleasing. As we know, almost everybody need (needs) to work hard to earn the living. Most of the workers are not pleased to (with) their jobs, but they still insist working. Let’s take my mother as an example. She is a teacher, she teaches the same things every year. Of course she does not like it intrinsicly (intrinsically).(感觉有点绝对，有些人还是爱自己的工作的) However, she has spent over 20 years on teaching with her patience. Because she knows that she is responsible for the social surroundings (the future of the sosiety). She needs to support our family, (and) she also needs to offer her limited power for the education. What deserves to mention is she really like (likes) painting. But she can only enjoy it after finishing her work, cooking, clothes washing and so on so forth. So actually most people spend more time on the things they should do than the personal enjoyment. (单凭一个例子就说了所有人，有点太过武断吧，例子再加强)

There are still some people put (consider) their personal enjoyment first because they have no (sense of) responsibility. All in their mind is just themselves. All they do is what they like to do. They never consider whether it is right, what should they od (do) in the future. For instance, the gamblers always spend many time on playing without thinking their family and future. I really do not think this is a reasonable thing. Luckily, this kind of people is few.

Another point worth mentioning is that most of the people need change their attitudes about the things which are supposed to do but not pleasing (太绕，能分成短句吗？). Because it is really painful to do the things which they do not like day after day, year after year. If they can treat them as a (an) indirect pleasing enjoyment, life will be more wonderful.(But how to change?)

In summary, most people do not spend more time on personal enjoyment than what they should do because they are responsible for the social surroundings. I really hope that they can live better by changing their attitudes.

这个题目确实不好写，感觉主题很飘忽，大家都很难去抓主题，LZ的文章感觉在强行把写的东西往“时间多少”上面托，可是所举的例子，有的陈述语句感觉并没有陈述到点上，还有就是有的结论太过武断，缺乏可信性，例子方面应该加强，另外语句方面，有时候感觉LZ转得很生硬，有时候会产生不流畅的感觉；结构上，第一个观点陈述得很多，后两个较少，有点头重脚轻的感觉。另外文中太多长句，有时候不免有点绕。 加油！

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总结：
1，练习过程中，我决定先构好思后再动手，不然就为了赶时间，想到哪里写哪里了。这样思路会比较混乱，论点论证会比较牵强。
2，结构上要协调，不然，部会会显得论证不充分，而整体效果也就不好了。
3，借来eddie的部分好的表达：
lend support to
guarantee the well operation of this huge "machine"
devote their whole life to
social individuals
are not necessarily mutually exclusive
promulgate the attractiveness of basketball
spread pop culture to all over the world

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1.27 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Governments should spend more money in support of arts than in support of athletics such as state-sponsored Olympic teams. Arts and athletics are both a part of human being’s culture. Governments should support both of them. In my opinion, governments should spend more money and pay more attention about athletics according to the social situation these days. At present, people would like to spend their own money to prompt the arts developing. That means governments could spend less money on it. Because after the material requirements are satisfied, people are more likely to persue the spiritual needs. Under this situation, people would like to spend more energies and money on arts. As we know, more and more people are interested in music, literature, film, sculpture, paintings and etc.. let us take the film as a exmaple, the film Avatar was a huge box office hit. This tells us two things: first, this kind of arts is really very flourishing; second, people are willing to spend money on it. So governments can spend less money on arts comparatively. To the opposite, people are not doing very well in athletics. They not only can not remmerring to do some excercises to keep healthy, but also do not want to spend money on it. On the one hand, more and more dilicious and attractive food make people can not help to eat excessive food. This leads many serious diseases like adiposity. On the other hand, people are always busy working hard to accommodate to the vertiginous envirnment. So they have no time and energy to care their health. In addition, most of people are under subhealth condition. But they do not want to improve the health condition because they always think that they are young and can hold their own untill they get old or fall ill. Under these circumstances, the government should advocate people to pay more attention to the health condition, and the financial surpport is definitely a very good way. With that said, governments should shoudler the the responsibility to improve people’s health condition. One of the significant thing for governments to do is spending more money in support of athletics.

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BY BY LRXSS Arts and athletics are both a part of human being’s culture. Governments should support both of them. In my opinion, governments should spend more money and pay more attention about athletics according to the social situation these days. M+ e: V) ^  B+ k8 Z% G At present, people would like to spend their own money to prompt the arts developing. That means governments could spend less money on it. 这一句和前一句可合成一句 用which改为非限定定从 Because after the material requirements are satisfied, people are more likely to persue pursue the spiritual needs. Under this situation, people would like to spend more energies and money on arts. As we know, more and more people are interested in music, literature, film, sculpture, paintings and 去掉 etc.. let 大写us take the film as a exmaple, the film Avatar was a huge box office hit. This tells us two things: first, this kind of arts is really very flourishing; second, people are willing to spend money on it. So governments can spend less money on arts comparatively. n" \, D* o To the opposite, people are not doing very well in athletics. # B3 T3 t; C$ i: O, M They not only can not remmerring to do some excercises to keep healthy, but also do not want to spend money on it. On the one hand, more and more dilicious and attractive food make people can not help to eat eating excessive food. This leads many serious diseases like adiposity. On the other hand, people are always busy working hard to accommodate to the vertiginous envirnment. So they have no time and energy to care 加about their health. In addition, most of people are under subhealth 形容词 condition. But they do not want to improve the health condition because they always think that they are young and can hold their own 用themselves untill they get old or fall ill. Under these circumstances, the government should advocate people to pay more attention to the health condition, and the financial surpport is definitely a very good way.7 I* `$ T1 \7 ^$ G$ G6 R; t( m+ N' {. w/ g' n/ d4 t With that what‘s said, governments should shoudler the the responsibility to improve people’s health condition. One of the significant thing for governments to do is spending more money in support of athletics.

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发表于 5 天前 14:05 | 只看该作者

remmeberring-remmeber dilicious-delicious under subhealth condition-under subhealth hold one's own是固定表达哦 多谢LRXSS！

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发表于 5 天前 17:25 | 只看该作者 BY summerdingdavid

我大致看了你的文章，发现你的文章的论点很清晰：政府已无需在已经很能自己解决生存问题的艺术上花钱，而应该在运动上。这个是你的文章的优点。 缺点，也是最大的缺点是：重复！在第二段反复说不要再政府花钱了，如果要重复表达一个意思可以用不同的表达方式比较好，比如：there is no point in governments' act to spend more money to    is the one field that deserve the Gs' more attention/ G should lay more emphasis on m2 J! C, a5 w: z. z/ k8 R 我这里抛砖引玉下哈。7 H4 Z- I. P6 a8 A3 c 还有，我看了下，你的more and more 用了很多次了，还是上面那个问题。 总体来说，很清晰的！

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发表于 5 天前 23:05 | 只看该作者 BY heqiang_1001

1.27 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Governments should spend more money in support of arts than in support of athletics such as state-sponsored Olympic teams.9 [  Z, n6 K6 n8 N+ P" d' H  S1 P2 n& e # B6 q& O( U+ _* B/ \" n Arts and athletics are both a part (parts, 感觉both arts and athletics are parts of ……舒服一些)of human being’s culture. Governments should support both of them. In my opinion, governments should spend more money and pay more attention about athletics according to the social situation these days.（怎么先说应该支持两者，又说应该重点支持atheletics？可以先让步一下，说尽管art有什么好，但是……）# m. }+ y# Y1 r8 |0 ` 2 X5 `. a( F7 T  Q/ A: AAt present, people would like to spend their own money to prompt （on prompting）the arts developing(development). That means governments could spend less money on it. Because after( ?别扭) the material requirements（material needs） are satisfied, people are more likely to （prefer, be likely to 是“可能是”的意思）persue the spiritual needs. Under this situation, people would like to spend more energies（不可数） and money on arts. As we know, more and more people are interested in music, literature, film, sculpture, paintings and etc.. let us take（直接换成Taking吧，let us这种用法不够正式 ） the film as a exmaple, the film Avatar was a huge box office hit. This tells us two things: first, this kind of arts is really very flourishing; second, people are willing to spend money on it. So governments can spend less money on arts comparatively.  （我总觉得，政府投资艺术和百姓自己花钱欣赏艺术不是一回事吧？）   0 {/ T  ]0 O* u+ E9 D, G% w$ c- v" W' O( w5 B! N( F* F, h ' O- s& `% |: u; X! G* R3 k# ^7 W% Z3 a, D! a To（On？不太确定，但是肯定不是to） the opposite, people are not doing very well in athletics. They not only can not(?they can not only……) remmerring to do some excercises to keep healthy, but also do not want to spend money on it.（很别扭，你想说什么？） On the one hand, more and more dilicious and attractive food make people can not help to eat excessive food. This（可以把this 改成which 后面就是一个非限定性定语从句了） leads many serious diseases like adiposity. On the other hand, people are always busy working hard to accommodate to the vertiginous envirnment. So they have no time and energy to care their health. In addition, most of people are under subhealth condition. But they do not want to improve the health condition because they always think that they are young and can hold their own untill they get old or fall ill. Under these circumstances, the government should advocate people to pay more attention to the health condition, and the financial surpport is definitely a very good way.: {6 b* N! |5 I4 Y With that said（？这个用法?）, governments should shoudler the the responsibility to improve people’s health condition. One of the significant thing for governments to do is spending more money in support of athletics. 语言：部分词和用法稍显生硬，读着不是很流利。句子太简单了，一个从句都没有啊。 内容：第三段讲了很多人们不重视运动，但关于政府应该怎么做完全没提，或者政府投资钱之后的结果，是否能够改善你前面说的那些不足，这些细节和结果才是重点恩，都么有写。: z0 D1 f" ?4 \" l) T; r 我说的有点严，见谅。我不知道你什么时候考，如果有精力，去背一些段落吧，会有好处的~~加油！" N) T- j3 X: H! {! I  G% R: p

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发表于 4 天前 02:08 | 只看该作者

4# summerdingdavid 太感谢你的宝贵意见了！ 同义改写，句式多样化！！

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发表于 4 天前 02:11 | 只看该作者

5# heqiang_1001 严，才会进步！ 感激中…… 我3月6号考 我要去背段子！ Thanks again!!

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发表于 4 天前 18:03 | 只看该作者 BY mpromanus

Arts and athletics are both a parts of human being’s culture. Governments should support both of them. In my opinion, governments should spend more money and pay more attention about to athletics according to the social situations these days. " {, E' n4 d5 O At present, people would like to spend their own money to prompt the arts development of arts. That means governments could spend less money on it. Because after the material requirements? (What are 'material requirements' anyway? If you use 'the', you need to be specific, and I suppose you mean 'material needs'.) are satisfied, people are more likely to persue the spiritual needs. Under this situation, people would like to spend more energy and money on arts. As we know, more and more people are interested in music, literature, films, sculptures, paintings and etc.. Let us take the films as a exmaple: the film Avatar was a huge box office hit. (Keep in mind that conjunctions are needed when you try to put sentences together to form one larger sentence.) This tells us two things: first, this kind of arts is really very flourishing; second, people are willing to spend money on it. So governments can spend less money on arts comparatively. (This point is well argued, but, even though government can spend less money on arts, it doesn't mean they'll spend more on athletics. They can spend more money on anything that's not arts. Your question contains two keywords - arts and athletics - for comparison, therefore you need to keep both in sight. It's not enough to argue from one single keyword's perspectives. Without athletics in the picutre, this point is not a complete, valid argument that's able to address the full question.) ) b5 x; |. b2 O! G On the opposite, people are not doing very well in athletics. They not only they cannot remmerring? to do some excercises to keep healthy, but also they do not want to spend money on it. On the one hand, more and more delicious and attractive food make (Again, I see this very awkward use of 'make'. If you make someone do something, it means you force him. Use more human, active sentences like 'food is getting more and more delicious and attractive, therefore people cannot help but eat excess..') people can not help but eat excessively food. This leads to many serious diseases like adiposity (This is the medical term for 'fat', and 'adipose' is a generic term for 'animal fat'. The standard term for 'being too fat' is 'obesity'.). On the other hand, people are always busy, working hard to accommodate to (This doesn't mean 'adapt'.) the vertiginous environment. So they have no time and energy to care for their health. In addition, most of people are under subhealth condition? (Did you just try to translate 亚健康?). But they do not want to improve their health condition because they always think that they are young and can hold their own untill they get old or fall ill. Under these circumstances, the government should advocate people to pay more attention to the health condition, and the financial surpport is definitely a very good way. (This part of your logic doesn't stand either. People need athletics, yes, because they're not very healthy, but that doesn't mean people don't need the arts, or they need the arts less than they need athletics. As I've said, the question has two keywords, and you need to keep both in mind constantly. Arguing from one single keyword's perspective doesn't address the question adequately enough.)/ n1 @! P. `3 o3 Y0 _5 I7 L With that said, governments should shoudler the the responsibility to improve people’s health condition. One of the significant things for governments to do is spending more money in support of athletics.1 q/ }3 l* e& T8 h: y1 z - h' L- k4 h- j 总结：- d% V& v# v) U 语法和词汇还好，没有非常严重的问题，注意一下联结和拼写。。; F9 ^1 y! }; B# \ # L, M% ~8 K2 o, e8 Y9 b# F 逻辑方面，其实你的想法都很好，例子也举得不错，但由于问题是比较性的，所以你的论述也应该以比较性的方式展开，而不是一段光写艺术，一段光写体育。这样子给人留下的反驳空间太多了。另外一个问题就是，题目给了一个such as state-sponsored Olympic teams，你有没有想过为什么？这个特别指出的存在说明这个问题里的athletics并不仅仅是全民运动提倡健身那种体育，而是包括代表国家行为的职业体育，这个范围就更加广了，论述的时候就更需要功力。所以题目的潜台词要特别地注意。

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发表于 3 天前 01:37 | 只看该作者

8# mpromanus 非常感谢mpromanus! 改得非常仔细！ 对的，比较类的题要多比较 不能各说各的 改进！

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发表于 4 天前 04:52 | 只看该作者



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1.28 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is important for families to regularly eat their meals together. I agree with the statement that usually having meals with family members really means too much to everybody. People are always so busy with their working and studing that they have no much time for spending with their families. So often eating at home with families is absolutely good for promoting happy and harmonious familiy. First of all, if we were children, we will be looking forward to spend more time with our parents and grandparents. Because we want to talk with them about our studies, ideas, dreams, future and so on, and then get some suggestions from them. We also have so many questions and dilemma to ask them for some help. Familiy members are always the first choice to ask for because they are our nearest and dearest. However, the adults are always focus on their jobs during the working time so that children have few oppotunites to get together with adults. The children’s most expectant time is the dinner hour when they could spend with families. children really need to communicate with adults. With more communication between children and parents, the children will grow up more healthily and happily. So the adults really need to eat at home with families as possible as they can. Secondly, if we were the parents, I mean the middle generation, we also want to have more chances to have dinner with our children and our parents. We are under too much strain these days, so we really need to relax ourselves. But how to relax? The best way is to spend more time with our families, because they could make us feel comfortable easily. For example, when we come back home from office everyday, our children always give us a sweet kiss after I open the door. The table is always full of our favorite food which are cooked by our elder parents, etc.. All of these can help me feel light-hearted and happy. That is why the dinner time with families is so attactive and important. Finally, if we were the grandparents, we will intensely desire the dinner time. Because we always feel lonely, especialy those whose lose their spouses. We just want to spend more time with those children and the grandchildren. In many areas, we can not keep up with the times, but the only thing we are confident is that we can cook the delicious food for the children. Meanwhile, we need more care from the children too. We hope that they could pay more attention to us which can make us feel much better. But the fact is middle generation are not live together with the elder generation, the elder generation can only expect to have dinner with the children to increase the times they get together. So I will never emphasize the importance of dinner time enough. Regardless of how old you are, what you do,where you are, please eat with families as possibe as you can.