I temp issue 212(觉得写得还行，第2篇了)

zerohuangUID: 2760193

issue 212
Even if a goal is worthy ,is any means taken to attain it is justifiable ？Absolutely not .Conceding that the advancement of a society lies in the never-stopping pursuit of worthy goals ,however ,proper approaches must be taken before we should start .
The reputation of an individual ,the ware fare of human beings and the harmony of the whole world lie in the forever pursuit of worthy ,sometimes even great ,goals .In the process of attaining worthy goals ,we give out(pay) our wisdom ,efforts ,and time ,which in return we get even more than what we put into .For instance ,Nobel shock the world with his explosive which he devised almost at the cost of sacrificing his lives ;Edison lighted the whole world with his bulb whose
material were ultimately selected after more than 1000 trials ;Martin Luther King enlightened the world with his effort for the fighting of equal rights for the black .Without them ,we cannot honor the most outstanding scientists with Nobel Prize ,a prize which is named after Nobel in memory of him ;we cannot sit in a bright classroom when the sun set ;we cannot gather our black friends in order to fight for freedom and liberty .
However ,though all roads lead to Rome ,what we need is an avenue under the permission of law and virtue which help us achieve our worthy goal .If not ,you will inevitably make yourself in the way of others ,resulting in a conflict ,even a invasion war .A fitting example here is the Japan's large-scale invasion war against China ,with a goal of building a prosperous East
Asia .The goal here is worth trying ,since at that time Japan is a leading country in Asia both in economy and military .To make things worse ,Japan take the inappropriate ,or exactly ,cruel and brutal way that Japan started a war(wage war发动战争) to many Asian countries at the cost of killing many people to achieve the goal .The result is clear in history :Japan brought a great catastrophe(disaster) to countries all over Asia ,including itself .This example clearly illustrates that it is only through proper method that the pursuit of the goal is worthy .
Furthermore ,human race ,as a kind of living creature ,develops with the ultimate goal of ensuring the race continue in this planet .Thus, on the pad ,we stop where we should stop ,leaving our descendants a chance to achieve their worthy goals .That is ,we meet what we need ,without sacrificing the need of out next generation .Sustainable development is becoming a heat topic day by day ,and its core is just what I refer above .This goal overshadows every goal seeming to be worthy at the first glance .Since this is it ,can we pollute our environment ,detonate the atom bomb ,and emit more and more carbon dioxide to the air ?Of course not ！
To conclude ，every goal has its worth ,but before we get to start ,we can simply ask ourselves(examine our conscience) :Is this mean taken to attain my goal justifiable?

zerohuangUID: 2760193

不好意思 字体没整好~

zerohuangUID: 2760193

大家提个意见，谁拍俺俺拍谁！

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有没pao了？！读着觉得怪怪的！日本侵略？！goal?! mean?  还有就是你的NOBEL, Edison是不是需要说下与题干的关系，展开下~~~

zerohuangUID: 2760193

我的正文第一段就是肯定追求目标是没问题的 ，所以我举了几个不懈追求目标终获成功的例子；正文二段日本侵华不是打着建立东亚繁荣圈的幌子么，目标好，但凭什么发动战争？！这不就说明手段要适度才行，第三段我写的不清楚，这样就好了：
Furthermore ,human race ,as a kind of living creature ,develops with the ultimate goal of ensuring the race continue in this planet .Thus, on the pad ,we stop where we should stop ,leaving our descendants a chance to achieve their worthy goals .That is ,we meet what we need ,without sacrificing the need of out next generation ，which is demanded by Sustainable development ,a hot issue before countries all over the world.This goal overshadows every goal seeming to be worthy at the first glance .Since this is it ,can we pollute our environment ,detonate the atom bomb ,and emit more and more carbon dioxide to the air,which ostensibly do harm to the survial of human race,with an aim of achieving the worthy goal of our generation ?Of course not ！

zerohuangUID: 2760193

怎么样啊？