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TOPIC: ISSUE49 - "Imaginative works such as novels, plays, films, fairy tales, and legends present a more accurate and meaningful picture of human experience than do factual accounts. Because the creators of fiction shape and focus reality rather than report on it literally, their creations have a more lasting significance."



Did the author meaning to focusing human experince which present their pricesely human reality construction for their creations lasting? While picturing human experience will bring the creation more histroical value and recording merits for the future people to know the reality in that time. But a great creation impossiblely only contain this merit which can not make a work great sufficiently. The identifical standar of a lasting creation is vague.
Considerating the reason which promote us to be convinced by the point of the speaker is a creation containing a reality mean recorded the speacialilies of that age and hold a fuction to bring the reader back to that age vividly. This kind of creation have historical research value and the spirit of criticism, a addition for the part that offical history missing. The most influntial realism writer Charlse Dickens use all the details to construct hard life of oridinary people without money in london---"David copperfier". Supposing a work isolates from reality, stuff with fantasy and imagination which without any relevant to reality. People might can't catch up with its logic, feel weird and uncomfortable with all the thing revise their vaules , commonsense, even have trouble to accept the story resonable. On the contrary, a creation have no other factor only citing reality aslo can't be a lasting creation.
A great  work can be inspired from reality, but a fiction still protect its most maintain feature----fictional. To the bottom a fiction isn't a documentary film
, never mind a history. Repeating all the fiction, none of them can't be the same with the true facts. For its artical effect , to express all-over the most deep emotion accurately the author eager to present, proposly exagurating and addition of amout of details all can be resonable.  The fictional figure can be perfect in some aspets which impossiblely exist in reality. Just like no existence of Shlock Holmes, Edvear Dentis, but their original shape is ture man.
A propse imagination, not only be counted as a wings for a fiction, but also a perspective for the trend of the newly thing in future. A lot of sci-fictional story set assumption of end of world for various reason- such as omputer controlling the world, the enviroment of the earth to be so worse to live for human, a huge disease kill the whole hunman. That present a responsibility for think the world we live.
Query whether the speaker dog a dominant point of this claim-- difine key factors to be a lasting work, it still can't be a persuadable claim. The speaker's opinion is too extrimely without considerating the others which make a creation lasting and great.


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xiao.xinUID: 2682051

我没太看懂你的主旨，这个题目比较2种不同的记录形式，你第一段的倾向是什么， 同意还是不同意。另外有些句子应该用从句清楚一些。