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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement:
Improving school is most important factor to successful development of country.

Today, education means a lot of things, whether a person accept education or not is equal to whether he will succeed. Identically, the degree of a country’s education investment represent the successful development of a country. So from my point of view. Improving schools is the foremost factor for prosperous of a country.

Initially, in modern society, more and more talented and intellectual people are needed, but where these kinds of people came from？ The answer is school. Everyone knows a person who is very talented can’t be successful if he didn’t accept education in school. But only have school is not enough. If the facilities and other educational equipment of school are so poorly, it will not guarantee the quality of study and research. For instance if the computer of school library cannot suffer the internet, but a student need find some information in internet at a emergency time. He can do nothing at this time and he can’t obtain the knowledge he want to know and if this kind of situation always take place, how can we ensure the students’ ability can improve and how can they make their own contribution to their country.

What is also worth noticing is that whether a country’s schools are good or not indicate how strong this country was. As we all know, America is the strongest country including economic and military power in the world meanwhile their educational level is also the best. Most of foreign country’s students are eager to do far-research in America to achieve their goals.

Furthermore, a country’s development determined by economic, culture, polite and military etc. All this fields need talents. But if we didn’t improving school how can we have make sure cultivate these talents.

So from what has present above we may reach the conclusion that improving school plays a important role in the successful development of a country.