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A job with more vacation time is better than a job with high salary but less vacation time


       The job with more vacation time must attract the people who like vacation .However, other people stand on different ground. They engage to catch more doller. In my humble opinion, I'm in favor of the job with more vacation and freedom.
       First of all, it provide a lot of chances to pay attention to health. one of my friends was a business man ,he was too busy to rest during a whole year, and finally, he was sick ,very bad sick.So he decided to find a more freedom job, He always told me never give health up to earn more money. Now,he works in a small company with only falf salary than before but 1 mouth vacation per year. And of course, he has become a guy who has a vary grand body.
      Secondly, the vacation make it possible to get together with our friends and family. If we work hard every day and night and have no time to stay with the people who love ours. it is too curel! Believeing or not we have little time and chance to express our love. Many persons regret he can't just have dinner with family.
Life is like a box of chocolates, you never konw what you're going to get. we should grasp any chance to go to vacation with people we love instand of earning more money.
      But we still need more money to improve our life. Without money, we can't get anything except air. In my hometown, If a young man had no money ,no car and even no horse, he would hard to find a lady who want to  get marry with him. While you want to have good car and big horse , you must work hard and want to high salary.  After all, If people want to get something, they have to lost anyting else.
     All in all, In this high-pace modern society, I prefor a job with more vacation. I believe salary is very useful but health and family are the most important.
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