Issue 208 求pp 接受任何批评 感激给位

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TOPIC: ISSUE208 - "The way people look, dress, and act reveals their attitudes and interests. You can tell much about a society's ideas and values by observing the appearance and behavior of its people."
WORDS: 503
TIME: 00:43:40
DATE: 2011/2/17 2:21:35

I concede that the way people look,dress and act can reveal their attitude and interest.This statement has considerable merit with respect to most areas. However, in my view, it is partical that one can tell much about a society's idea and values by observing the apperance and behavior of the people.

Undoubtedly, it is truly that one can tell about a society's ideas and values by observing the appearance and behavior of its people, because of appearance is relevant to their inner attitude and interested, which can coincide with the contemporay society. Since , individual's attitude and interest ,which can be observed by appearance, are the significant component of the whole society. They are closely relevant with each other. Different nation ,different society, and the different ways of people dressing. As people conclude, France is the realm of romance and the people there dress romantically, America is the symbol of freedom, so the people dress casually, and an old country in Asia,Chian,with a long tradition history, Chinese people dress formally. These phenomenon illustrate
that the way
people dress can reveal the society’s value, attributed to the people's interest
which are the component of the whole society.

However ,a compelling argument rose,certain people would like to disguise their the identification by making up. It is hard for us to tell his or her interest only through the observation of appearance. Those people ,such as actors,spy,and politic offical,may have certain reasons. Jim parsons, the TV star, play the role of Sheldon Cooper who is an extremely
talent physics
in the Big Bang Theory, may be a lovely big boy in his really life. Those people is different from the figures which them played on screen. So it is hard for people to tell their inner attitude and interest just from the apperance. Since ,it is insufficient to tell a
society's value and idea by observing its people.

Yet another striking argument is that a society's value and idea is hidden deeply in the way people thinking, specially the elites, profound thinkers and artists. Their inside-world can not be observe easy from the apperance result in their interest and attitude may out of step of the society or can not be accepted by ordinary people immediate. For instance ,Albert Einstein issue his relativity Theory on that time, few physics could accept the paradox idea. In the end ,as time passed by, the theory has been proved to be the best explanation of the universe in high speed, as a common sense for us right now. Of course, Einstein's idea is part of the whole society, however a few people could understand that . Thereby, it is insufficient to get the information from a people 's inner world by observation.

In sum, I agree insofar as the statement that appearance reveal people's interest and attitude. Nevertheless, to tell about the society's value and idea
need a long time
understanding and thoroughgoing observation despite they are interrelated with individual's interest. We should strike the balance when we want to tell about
both of individual's and society 's interests and ideas.

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