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lynnezhengUID: 3047385

56"Governments should focus more on solving the immediate problems of today
rather than trying to solve the anticipated problems of the future."
3:57 -4:37 40min        20110503




Whether governments should focus more on solving current immediate problems or more on trying to solve the anticipated problems of the future depends on the nature of the real problems. Governments should solve those problems related current life right now and also take actions for those anticipate problem in the future. Besides, government should consider all possible future problems when they seek the solutions to the current problems.


To begin with, governments should solve the immediate problems of today for several reasons. First, governments need the support of majority of people all the time. By solving the immediate problems, people are satisfied with their life and thus show satisfaction to their government in return. Second, only when the government can seek a solution for the current problems, a stability and secure of society can be achieved. Additionally, besides the function of government to make sure every departments perform effectively and correctly, the government also need to work together with people for a better society to live with.


However, governments should focus on the anticipated problems of the future as well. In some extent, we are taking benefits from our ancestors who tried to leave us a better world and we should also leave a even better world for our future generations. Common sense tells us that energies are not limitless and whole society should try every effort to save energies while use. As we know oil and gas are good examples. It partially depends on the implement of government. With certain laws and rules, for instance, people should follow the compulsory rules to save our energies together with the spontaneous actions. Environment, another example, is getting worse nowadays especially changing temperature. Governments among the whole world are taking actions and trying to seek better solution regarding this problem.


Furthermore, solving current problems and future problems are not conflicted with each other. They are even happening at the same situation. Government should think over the possible problems that would happen in long term while they find ways to solve the immediate problems. Otherwise, we are only taking benefits of the world but leaving a exhausted future for future generations. Governments need to combine the situations of the current problems and the possible problems following. In such way, it enables a better stable society for people and a future for next generation  as possible as better.


In sum, governments should solve immediate problems for the favor of people and the stability and secure of the society. Government should also anticipated problems in the future since it is needed to leave our future generations a sufficient society to live with. Besides, even governments take immediate actions for current problems, at the same time they need to consider possible future problems it may follow.

yiyiniuUID: 3038018

problems related current-->.....related to current life

anticipate problem in the future-->anticipated problems in the future

from our ancestors who tried -->from our predecessors who tried

tells us that energies are -->....energy is

the implement of government-->the performance.....

together with the spontaneous actions-->together and spontaneously

Environment, another example-->Environment, as another example

They are even happening at the same situation-->They even happen  simultaneously

solve the immediate problems-->solve the immediate ones

leaving a exhausted future for future generations-->...an exhausted...for next generations

problems it may follow-->problems that may follow

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yangpu2007360UID: 3120665

Whether governments should focus more on solving current immediate problems or more on trying to solve the anticipated problems of the future depends on the nature of the real(actual) problems. Governments should solve those problems regarding current life right now and also take actions for those anticipated problem in the future. ) Besides, government should consider all possible future problems when they seek the solutions to the current problems.(与上文并不是并列关系.)


To begin with, governments should solve the immediate problems of today for several reasons. First, governments need the support of majority of people all the time. By solving the immediate problems, people are satisfied with their performance and thus show support to their government in return. Second, only when the government can seek a solution for the current problems, can the stability and secure of society be achieved. (举例说明,如不解决,就会…….)Additionally, besides the function of government to make sure every departments perform effectively and correctly, the government also need to work together with people for a better society to live with. (这并没有证明 要focus more on immediate problem )


On the other hand, governments should focus on the anticipated problems of the future as well. In some extent, we are taking benefits from our predecessors who tried to leave us a better world and we should also leave a even better world(do the same) for our future generations. Common sense tells us that energies are not limitless(such as oil and gas) and whole society should try every effort to save energies while use(多余).It partially depends on the implement of government. (governments can lead the whole society to try ……..) With certain laws and rules, for instance, people should follow the compulsory rules to save our energies together with the actions spontaneously . Environment, as another example, is getting worse nowadays especially the changing temperature. Governments among the whole world are taking actions and trying to seek better solution regarding this problem.(多余,应具体说明政府在这个问题上,应起到的作用.)  (这段应表明不解决未来问题的后果,以及解决了的好处)


Furthermore, solving current problems and future problems are not conflicted with each other. They are even happening at the same situation. Government should think over the possible problems that would happen in long term while they find ways to solve the immediate problems. Otherwise, we are only taking benefits of the world but leaving a exhausted future for future generations. Governments need to combine the situations of the current problems and the possible problems following. In such way, it enables a better and more stable society for people and a future for next generation  as possible as better.(多余).  (In this way, we could expect a better and more stable in the future)


In sum, governments should solve immediate problems for the favor of people(多余) and the stability and secure of the society. Government should also anticipated problems in the future (句式单一,出现过多次,  both current and potential program should be taken into consideration)

Besides, even governments take immediate actions for current problems, at the same time they need to consider possible future problems it may follow.(多余)