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发表于 2011-7-7 17:27:39 |只看该作者 |倒序浏览

Prof
I’m sorry to bother you.
My name is XXX. I'm very interested in your research area of “computer keyboard and mice”, so wish to pursue a doctor degree thereof.
I will receive my master Degree majoring in sports biomechanics from Da Lian University of technology of China in July. 2012. In the period of master study, I did well in research of grip strength. That is also the theme in my thesis. And, I am not sure would you please intake students in sports biomechanics.
Maybe, I could share some research in your group depending this background. Through Cuergo web, I find some your paper, such as “Ergonomic comparison of slanted and vertical computer mouse designs”, “Ergonomic comparison of five mouse designs: Performance and posture differences”.etc. But, I can’t find the full text through SCI, Elsever or google search(free). If it is convinent for you please sending the paper above to me, I am very interesting about them.

I sincerely appreciate your reply
. Thank you very much! Best regards,

大家尽管拍，我受得住，这是第一次套词，就是想知道对方愿不愿意收我这个专业的研究生。自己感觉专业背景还是有一些关系的，所以就写成这样了。另外我确实在SCI ，Elsever，和google search 搜不到文章的全文。就这样直接找老师要，也不知行不行，不想再找了。还要赶时间看GRE呢，就4个月了。才刚开始。祝福我吧。亲们。

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沙发

发表于 2011-7-7 17:29:06 |只看该作者

洗完澡挖耳朵，湿湿一大坨

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板凳

发表于 2011-7-7 23:20:48 |只看该作者

convenient 拼错了=。=

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地板

发表于 2011-7-8 00:06:03 |只看该作者

a bunch of grammar mistakes.
Also, don't place yourself too low. Your opening like "I’m sorry to bother you." seriously weakens your image and does not good whatsoever.
Just be straightforward.

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