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对不起楼主君我改晚了！！！！请您不要客气的回改我吧！！！~~~飞扑 二月十五 综合 TPO6 The lecturer insists that the benefit online encyclopedias bring outweighs greatly its (这里一直很困惑啊百科君是复数撒，那到底是its 还是用their呢？)disadvantages, which differs from the main idea of the reading passage.
Firstly, considering the error in the resource of online information, the professor states that traditional encyclopedia still can not avoid making mistakes. Moreover, it is easier for online books to correct mistakes than for（去掉貌似更流畅？） the printed versions which cost more. Therefore the advantage of the traditional encyclopedia is actually problematic and unreal, as the passage mentions.
Also, as for the potential problem of fabrication and corruption of the original and official information online, the professor argues that there are two ways to solve this problem. The first strategy is to announce official information in a special format, which can not be edited by other people. Another way is to hire professional editors to supervise all the changes in the internet, who can also delete some inappropriate content. Both method（复数？） has been put to use, making the problem not so threatening as the reading says.（咦咦咦？有这样说到两个问题吗？难道是我听错了？？？汗。。我以为是它说不对的就被监视者删掉，然后谁改了谁删了都知道。。。）
Last, the lecturer argues that it is unfair to let the minority to choose what information is important due to diversity of reading requirement. The traditional books offer a limited number of people to decide what is important for the entire public, which ignores the diversity of knowledge. Those traditional book editors can not reflect the interest of the majority. Consequently, the field included in the traditional version is quite limited comparing with that online, which contradicts the standpoint of the reading.
To conclude, the advantage of online material is significant, considering its broad knowledge source, solution to the hacker problem as well as its convenience to correct mistakes. Thus, the reading passage may have ignore（ed） some important facts
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发表于 2012-2-17 14:17:55
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