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saturn2011UID: 3071229

鸡蛋壳的回复，不好意思，有点晚

Frankie0616UID: 2763738

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Nowadays, thanks to ever-accelerated development of information technology and mass media, we are able to receive any information about the international events, through the news broadcasting in TV or internet. Nevertheless, some individuals tend to live under the illusion that it is meaningless and indifferent to be aware of the events, which will not produce any influence on their personal lives. Obviously, they may fail to take into account the basic fact that, although that information could not bring about immediate and direct impacts on personal lives, they actually make sense to other significant aspects, including future personal development and social communication.

The first cogent fact i would like to highlight is that those diverse events or incidents will directly enable us to accumulate our knowledge and experience, which indirectly update our understanding of the whole world. By learning knowledge that seems to be useless at present, people can master a wide range of knowledge and put them into practical position. To illustrate this point, that is an appropriate example that is the encyclopedia. On one could deny the fact that when childhoods, reading this sophisticated encyclopedia, which far away from our daily life, indirectly help children broaden knowledge scope and establish a correct attitude and understanding toward the universe. Therefore, although numerous information and knowledge cannot affect our life immediately, as a matter of fact, they are conductive to further our personal development.

What is also worthy to mention is that if a person doesn't possess enough information and knowledge, it will be more difficult for him or her to launch social communication, which is definitely detrimental to one's life. One could deduce the simple fact that common topic and interest provide engine to arouse harmonious communication. On the contrary, without common information and sense, one could not contact with anyone and enlarge one's social circle. Gradually, he or she will form an unsocial and introversive personality, which will hamper him or her life. To sum up, catching common but crucial information from outside world is a channel for us to communicate with acquaintances and expand our social network.

Taking into account what I have pointed out above, even though taking access to information and events will not bring about immediate and direct impacts on our lives, it is actually instrumental to our personal long-term development and further our social circle. All these elements lead us to a brilliant future.

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47# Frankie0616
修改 By kkmm130

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不好意思改晚了，先按爪~

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怎么加入小组捏？在这里报名可以吗

Frankie0616UID: 2763738

Thanks to the ever-accelerated renovation of technique and high-efficiency of productivity, the update period of technological devices has been sharply shorten, which directly triggers the popularity and favor of electronic products. As a consequence, this phenomenon initiates public concern and debate on whether it is more enjoyable to purchase a newest technological device as soon as it offers for sale or not. Actually, a proportion of electronic product fans are inclined to chase the most fashionable devices to follow the trend, regardless of the high price. As for as I am concerned, it is more sagacious to purchase those high-tech product until many people have owned it. Among countless evidences that strengthen our viewpoint, I will present the most significant and persuasive ones here.

First and foremost, it will definitely cost us more financial expense to purchase the newest technological devices to keep up the trend. Comparably, if we slow down our step to chase the fashion, meanwhile we can save a great deal of money and form an economical habit. For instance, just a week ago, the Apple Inc official launched the newest generation of IPAD. Hence, innumerous E-fans are crowding into the Apple Store to pursue the most fashionable devices with the highest expense. What is also worthy to value is that the price of IPAD 2 intensively dropped, and a proportion of people prefer to buy the cheaper IPAD 2 than the costly IPAD3. Therefore, the most striking conclusion is that to pursue the newest high-tech production will pay more financial expense, while it is more cost-efficient to purchase goods when its price declines.

Furthermore, behind my reference lies an equal important fact is that those saving money will be a valuable fortune for us to spend on other crucial aspects, such as enjoying a comfortable vacation or further our education to enrich our comprehensive ability. One could deduce this practical fact from common sense that it is fairly instrumental for us to own a considerable wealth, which benefits to further our spiritual enjoyment and possession. It is undeniable that traveling as well as extensive reading enable us to grasp more practical and profession knowledge and refresh our understanding towards the world. Obviously, compared with chasing fashion technological device, it is more meaningful and valuable to spend money on spiritual consumption, including journeys and reading.

Last but not least, we are able to operate those sophisticated machines easier and more efficient in the foundation of other people’s experiences. Since more people used a technologically production before, we may receive more feedbacks and information about this particular one, which will enable us to handle this intelligent device more easy and less laborious.

From what have been reasoned above, we may safely draw a reasonable conclusion that compared with purchasing a high-tech production as soon as it was available, it is more instrumental and sagacious to possess it later, which will produce more positive impacts.

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Frankie0616UID: 2763738

As a kind of valuable spiritual possession, friendship exerts numerous far-reach impacts on our life, including forming our personality and providing available assistance when encountering dilemma. Hence, a suitable and wisely friends standards plays a crucial part in stimulating friendship and interpersonal communication. In contemporary age, some juveniles tend to live under the illusion that sharing enjoyment and joy is the sole norm when choosing a friend.  From my perspective, i strongly reject to this statement that they seem to overlook the nature and significance of true friendship, mutual support and mutual progress. Of countless facts that strengthen my viewpoint, i will present the most persuasive supporting ones here.

The first plain true i want to highlight is that connecting with evil friend will bring about disastrous effects on our personal development, even ruins our future. It is undeniable that circumstance and acquaintances will sharp our personality without awareness. Even if one does not know from concrete examples from the gang, one could deduce it from common principle that bad friends with misbehavior will unconsciously influence our personal characteristics. Although playing with those friends may produce many fun and enjoyment, such as partying or drinking, we may go astray and be addicted to passing pleasure, which will hamper our splendid future. In a word, it is unwisely and absurd to make friends with rabbles just for short-lived pleasure.

What is also reasonable is that keeping in touch with a noble person with wide knowledge and perfect personality actually benefits to correct our drawbacks and further our comprehensive development. Just to take my own experience to illustrate this point. As the assistant to my well-known professor, i attained more opportunities to connect with him and finally we became friends in spite of the difference in age. After a long talk, he pointed out my deficiencies in her subject and oriented me to correct these deficiencies. As a consequence, I actually made a better academic performance thanks to the help and guidance from my dear friend. To sum up, thanks to those well-meaning criticism and assistance from friends, our knowledge scope and comprehensive ability will be extended to some degree.

Another essential aspect i would like to reason is that mutual support always leads to mutual success, and even creates remarkable attainment. By ways of illustration, one needs to look further than the legend between marx and engels. In the foundation of identical faith and mutual support, they established a legendary and pure friendship and made extraordinary achievement in the history of human civilization.  As a matter of fact, mutual assistance and support is instrumental to pave the way for the future development, and even lead us to implement our ambitious goal.

All these evidence justifies a sound view that, compared with making friends for enjoyment and pleasure, it is more sagacious and wisely for to connect with those people, who can directly provide us with assistance and mutual support.

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53# Frankie0616
我来了···这篇文章你的小错误小多哦····状态KEEP住啊

有个地方搞错了，是定语从句···不是状语····

Frankie0616UID: 2763738

Along with the booming of tertiary industry and mass media, innumerous entertainment activities are crowding into our life, which not only influence our life-style, but also alter our behaviors without awareness. Especially, watching movies and television exerts profound impacts on the youngsters’ mentality and physical development. There is a continuous debate on what roles movies and television play on juveniles. From my point of view, I firmly believe that the drawbacks of movies and television far overweight than its disadvantages, and public should lay more stress on the phenomenon that youngster in growing numbers are addicted to watching television and movies. In order to strengthen my unshakable viewpoints, i will present and reason the most cogent and crucial facts here.

First and foremost, it is undeniable that a proportion of poor-quality TV programs with inappropriate comments, such as violent and eroticism, may produce detrimental and long-term influences on children’s mentality development. Since young people are not mature and intelligent enough to distinguish the right from the wrong, they may take access to some incorrect opinion or misbehaviors when watching TV without reasonable guidance. Once they attain those harmful and violence information, they may unconsciously imitate those behaviors. Moreover, those misbehaviors might gradually transform into bad characteristic without correct direction.  In general, those poor-quality programs post a threat on children’s mentality development, even ruin their promising future.

What is also worthy to value is that being indulge in movies and television also harms one’s physical development. A recent investigation from the USA medical and hygiene committee shows that percentage of shortsighted teenagers increased from 40 percent to 60 percent during the last 20 years. In addition, the prosperity of television and movies is the main agent of wide shortsighted.
What’s more, if one cannot keep a correct gesture when watching TV in a long time, he or she is likely to appear discomfort in necks and backs. From the database I have provided, watching TV and movies brings about direct detriment on children’s health.

Another aspect, which is equally significant as the formers ones is, that students’ academic performance will be influenced since attracting by the various programs and movies. Although there are still certain movies that broaden children’s knowledge scope, long-playing favor and addiction sharply shorten their interesting and attention in studying. Since being fascinating by comic and animated programs, students cannot concentrate their energy and time on study, which may lead to bad academic performance.

Taking into account from what have been discussed above, we may safely deduce a reasonable conclusion that television and movies are more detrimental than instrumental to juveniles’ development and correct guidance and proper supervising should be offered.

Frankie0616UID: 2763738

Thanks to the extraordinary development on economic growth and the public concern on the educational career, nowadays in growing number of excellent universities are available for students to further their education. Naturally, a proportion of people hold an opinion that compared with high quality of professors, updating school facilities plays a more essential role on improving the standard of a university. Nevertheless, I strongly believe that the most fundamental and significant factor of a remarkable university is the professors, which will exert a driving impact on students' development. Among countless facts that support my standpoint, I will present the most conspicuous and crucial ones here.

The first plain truth I want to mention is that, compared with knowledgeable professor, those well-developed facilities just play an assistant role. It is widely acknowledged that even though schools provide high-quality facilities, students cannot actually master the professional knowledge and put them into practice without the correct guidance and instruction from professional teachers. For instance, without the professional and accurate guidance from a profession, students still cannot conduct and accomplish the biological experiment about the onion cell's division personally, even though they possess the most advanced laboratory and microscopes. From this typical example, we may conclude that only with the instructors' guidance and introduce can students grasp sophisticated knowledge and correctly handle those high-level equipments.

What is also worthy to emphasize is that oriented by a noble profession, students may obtain more brilliant characteristics and upgrade their understanding towards the universe. It is undeniable that circumstance will unconsciously form one's personality and correct one's deficiencies. On campus, students may attain more opportunities to connect with professors, discuss problems with them, and even assist them in some research projects. Thanks to that unintentional instruction, they will build up many wonderful personalities, such as preserve, diligent as well as modest. This process is called "shape personality with personality ". Obviously, students will also acquire spiritual promotion from high- quality professors.

Last but not least, instructed by famous professor also put us into a beneficial position in the competitive job markets. Due to the increasing number of graduates, the competition in job markets becomes more intense than before. A recommendation letter from a well-known professor enables students to be accepted by more companies, which is direct instrumental for them to attain a decent employment.  

The above supports an unshakable statement that, compared with equipping advanced facilities, schools should lay more stress on improve the quality of instructors, which directly determine the standard of education.

alexfanfanUID: 3133140

改晚了 不好意思