3.19独立写作

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3月19日 101211 do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People think it is more enjoyable to work three days a week for long time than work five days a week for shorter time


The the development of people’s living standard and the frequent pace’s advancing , people always complain that the pressure burdened on their shoulders is more and more heavily, especially for the official ladies and stuffs, who will spend 5 days working in the office. May be the shorter time about working for 3days can be more relaxed in their views. However, in my opinion, working for 5 days is much more available and enjoyable for people both physically and mentally.

There is a saying ”All work and no play will make Jack a dull boy”, which I want to say that is people working for a long time, he or she must be more and more hardworking in their jobs in order to compensate their common 5day’s working phase, leading to a serious diseases, such as fever, cough and ever heard diseases if people keep working for a long time. To be contrary, working for a comparative longer time will relatively settle down and improve this situations because people may feel out of pressure and robust.

Moreover, the subsequent reason coming to my mind is that the efficiency of working 5 days can be more wonderful and surprising. There is a piece of data in the China Dialy, which made an experiment in an international multi-companies about the question whether it’s more enjoyable and pleasant for workers to choose to spend 3 days instead of 5 days to work. The experiment is divided into 2
groups and each group is working 3days a week and the other is working 5days a week to make a programme.The result totally amazed us that the latter made a perfect outcome and progression, however, the other group was prior to those who were working 5days a week

Of course, there are also some merits for workers to work 3days a week, due to having 4days accompanying with their family and doing some interesting things, such as shopping, travelling and so on. However, if we put all these factors into account, we may find out it’s more enjoyable and accessible for people to work 5days a week both mentally and physically.

eileen73UID: 3256364

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