lhm77499作业贴（10.20）

lhm77499UID: 3420601

8.1
Task 1 Which personal quality you admire the most? (1)intelligent (2) creative (3)courage
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Task 2 Do you like to travel alone or with your family members? Explain your answer with details and examples.
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wangrui1008UID: 3457988

7.31 Task 1 watch, admit 的发音不是很准，楼主主要在议论，要是能结合下自己的例子可能会更好点
Task 2 楼主说的很有道理，用词也okay，只是语调非常的平，而且句子与句子间停顿和节奏不是很连贯。

楼主不好意思评价晚了啊

Domo-kpUID: 3255995

【8.1】评价：
T1&T2都说得很详细 例子也用的很好，但是楼主可以注意下语调的变化，不然会有种背书的感觉。T2里面的I‘d like to share with u 这个里面可以加上experience，作为宾语。

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wangrui1008 发表于 2013-8-2 15:16
7.31 Task 1 watch, admit 的发音不是很准，楼主主要在议论，要是能结合下自己的例子可能会更好点
Task 2  ...

谢谢。
task1 想不出什么具体例子。
task2 说了几遍，可能这造成了句子间的连贯不自然

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Domo-kp 发表于 2013-8-2 19:17
【8.1】评价：
T1&T2都说得很详细 例子也用的很好，但是楼主可以注意下语调的变化，不然会有种背书的感觉。 ...

谢谢。
后面应该说得更抑扬顿挫一点，只是担心一鸡冻忘了后面想说什么。
experience of travelling to，好建

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8.2
Task 1 Which period is the most difficult period in a person’s life? Childhood, Teenage or adulthood? State your choice and explain why. Include reasons and examples to support your response.
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Task 2 Some people think that teachers should assign homework to students during the class, but others say that teachers should assign homework to students after class using email. Which do you think is better and why?
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wellnessUID: 3400301

【8.2】
1. 后面的例子说的好。词上，比如as a result 你可以换成so，这样更节省时间。主题句+论点可以说的更简洁些。
2.二题说的不错。思路简洁清晰。
第= =第一次点评，我也是rookie一枚。说的不好的见谅。一起讨论进步哈。

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8.3
Task 1 Your University is planning to allow students to watch TV in theirs dormitories. What is your opinion and why? What are the advantages and disadvantages of watching TV in dormitories? Include reasons and examples to support your response.
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Task 2 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Cell phones are necessary in order to run a successful business.
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wellness 发表于 2013-8-3 08:24
【8.2】
1. 后面的例子说的好。词上，比如as a result 你可以换成so，这样更节省时间。主题句+论点可以说的 ...

谢谢。
我在时间上的把握上应该再练习。

wxx5433UID: 3458461

总体感觉语调有点太平了，语速没有什么变化有种背书的感觉。。
task1   是想说potential problem吗？ potential发音不对，之后还有好几个音也发的不太对
task2  语调感觉有点奇怪。。
task3   感觉理由说的不是特别充分。。
task4  merchandising 音发错了
task5  although重音位置不太对。。然后之后的理由展开感觉不够充分。。
task6  总体还不错~

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8.6
Task 1 Do you prefer having outdoor activities in winters or in summers? State your choice and explain why. Include reasons and examples to support your response. 8.6 task1.mp3 (391.74 KB, 下载次数: 2)

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Task 2 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Some people prefer to live in old and historical house, others prefer to live in modern house. Which one do you prefer and why? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 8.6 task2.mp3 (397.11 KB, 下载次数: 1)

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8.7
Task 1 Is it important to have good manners in your interactions with other people? Give details and explanations to support your response.
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Task 2 Some people think the best way to study is to attend a lecture. Others think that it’s better to read by yourself. Which way do you prefer and why?
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月芜UID: 3404851

8-6 LZ发言好沉稳，元音都很饱满！！！不紧不慢的节奏学习中~不过可能需要加快一点，这样说不了太多内容。

T1 A  rarely 后面应该加have吧，表示一直状态，然后后面的and应该是am willing，缺了am
     B  你朋友taught，举例子要注意时态呀~
T2 A  开头句太长了吧。。。
    B  后面的方便哪一点是什么structure？前面那个电磁没没听清~structure是可以当建筑物讲，但是我没见过，institution会不会更好。这样的配套设施我也在想怎么说，后面的词想好了，前面的你说的是哪个词呀~？望不吝赐教O(∩_∩)O
C 最后的nearby去掉

评价和作业都晚了，各种不好意思

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8.8
Task 1 Describe one positive experience and the result. Include specific reasons and details in your explanation.
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Task 2 College students should be allowed to keep pets in their dormitories. What do you think about this? Include specific reasons and details in your explanation.
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thx！

geminilee0608UID: 3436386

LZ说得比较沉稳，不过可能语速稍微有点慢，可以加强一下
T1：
In my perspectives，好像多了个s
manners用了复苏，不过前面have后面好像又用了个不定冠词
I found out that it's，主从句时态不太一致
最后一句有一个not to behaving
T2：
circumstance的重音位置不太对
中间有一句貌似是If I do not so？缺少verb