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Task1
daily这个词发音不准,第一句I was suggest语法错误residents 后面的没听清
Task2
has to find the job用法有误,而且应该是过去式others这个词发音也有问my own sisiter 这个用法也值得商榷中间有两句说的乱了点
Task3
conceal这个词用错了,要说清楚both of the advicor and student are free,原因阐释得不好,1。没说出it may be another requirement for graduation,2.没说出那个学生有的是时间,不存在时间不够用的问题
Task4
这题说得不好,前面忘了说寄生植物并不从host tree里吸收营养,没有说明是哪种植物应该是urn plant,一些昆虫动物的尸体腐烂产生营养被store water传递这一节没说出来,发音也要注意,tree发音不准
Task5
楼主没说演出是在weekend,然后最后一句话没听明白
Task6
customer等发得不准,然后层次不是很清晰,应该用连词吧一二点突出出来,基本上也都说出来
综上,楼主发音要加强(话说我也不行呢),语气尽量自然点,加油吧
Task3
1. girl的发音错误 [ɡɝl]
2. 文章里save money这一点只说到save money就够了,不用展开太多download之类的
3. 听力里cost这个点概括的有点简单了,还应提到:if we add up the costs for repair and those for buying new versions, the e-books wouldn't save money at all
Task4
1. 对于swarm intelligence概念的解释过长,占用了20s,其实你可以直接讲概念的后半段:swarm intelligence describes that when animals work in a group, they can finish complex behaviors that cannot be accomplished by individuals
2. 例子描述的很好,到结尾处有些着急了,没讲清楚最后的步骤:form a brige and allow the rest of the group to reach the food on the other branch. 最后做好再强调一下例子和概念的关系:在时间紧的情况下可以直接说:this example shows how swarm intelligence works
Task5
1. she has class about...she has a party about...这个表达显得有些死板,可以说:The woman has a scheduling problem, her cousin's retirment party starts at the same time when she supposes to teach a poetry review class
2. "with the material help" 应该是“with the help of the materials”
这个题语言组织得不太好,感觉意思表达不出来,建议再多练几遍
Task6
1. 观点句Roman cities expanded “larger” than other ancient cities
2. advanced technology是两个点共有的,不止属于第一点
3. 第一个点:building material, 意思讲到了,但是关键句:the concrete enabled them to build bridges big enough to transport materials with wagons and carts 解释得不够清楚
第二个点OK