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A recently issued twenty-year study on headaches suffered by the residents of Mentia investigated the possible therapeutic effect of consuming salicylates. Salicylates are members of the same chemical family as aspirin, a medicine used to treat headaches. Although many foods are naturally rich in salicylates, food-processing companies also add salicylates to foods as preservatives. The twenty-year study found a correlation between the rise in the commercial use of salicylates and a steady decline in the average number of headaches reported by study participants. At the time when the study concluded, food-processing companies had just discovered that salicylates can also be used as flavor additives for foods, and, as a result, many companies plan to do so. Based on these study results, some health experts predict that residents of Mentia will suffer even fewer headaches in the future.
Write a response in which you discuss what questions would need to be answered in order to decide whether the prediction and the argument on which it is based are reasonable. Be sure to explain how the answers to these questions would help to evaluate the prediction.

chrishong119UID: 3412641

    TS
    The article predicts that residents of Mentia will suffer even fewer headaches in the future as many companies begin to add salicylates to food. Well, I find a few questions need to be answered to assess this prediction and the argument on which it is based, the answers of those questions would strengthen or weaken the prediction.

    ts1
    The first question which need to be answered is that could people in Mentia would get addictive to salicylates and as a result would be no more sensitive to salicylates to cure headache? 因为每天都在吃含有那物质的食物，身体每天都在对那物质做出反应，日积月累久了，身体会对那物质耐受，由此，再怎么吃含有那物质的食物甚至单独服用那物质也不会有效果。Because people there would have food contain salicylates everyday, the gradual accumulation of salicylates would of course irritate the body everyday and then make the body tolerant and insensitive to the salicylates and medicines alike. Then the continuing take of salicylates and salicylate-included foods would do no help to therapy headache. Thus, the article`s prediction would be weaked.

    ts2
    The second question is that do people there really like and would have salicylate-included foods and will continue to consume those food in the future as before? M的当地人喜欢吃那食物吗？也许不会喜欢，就算以前喜欢，也许后面食用久了，就会觉得那味道有些不好了，会想要食用没含salicylates的食物。

    ts3
    Third, will the salicylates in food get deterioration and not be as effective as when are taken independently? 在食物中添加此物质，必然会随着食物一起被各种加工，经过那么些化学反应及加温加热，salicylates也许会变性，效果不如单独服用。

    ts4
    Forth, would some people in the study do not report when got a headache and would take aspirin to preclude headache? 也许，头疼了也不会去报告，而且，生活中会提前服用阿司匹林来预防头疼。

    ts5
    Finally, could salicylates be as effective as aspirin in curing headache? 尽管与阿司匹林是同一家族的来治疗头疼的，但，在没有有效证据的条件下，也许salicylates并没有阿司匹林那么有效.




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    TS
    Some health experts predict that resident of Mentia will suffer even fewer headaches in the future because their daily food contains considerable numbers of salicylates, which can therapy headaches. Well, I find some relative questions need to be answered to check whether or not the prediction and the argument on which it is based are reasonable. The answers would strengthen or weaken this prediction.

    ts1
    The First question which need to be answered is that would human body remain sensitive to salicylates after incessant use in Mentia. 因为每天都在吃含有那物质的食物，身体每天都在对那物质做出反应，日积月累久了，身体会对那物质耐受，由此，再怎么吃含有那物质的食物甚至单独服用那物质也不会有效果。

    ts2
    Second, would food-processing companies really use salicylates as flavor additives rather than something else?目前，因为这些公司只是打算做，而并未真正开始，也许salicylates比起其他的食物添加剂要贵一些，而且，可能对于食物中添加这种东西，相关部门有限制：少量添加防腐就行，不可过量使用当作味道添加剂等等。

    ts3
    Third, did people in the study take no more other medicines except salicylates and would definitely report to researchers when get headaches? 可能，当地人在头疼时会服用别的药如阿司匹林，因为阿司匹林更便宜、有效，且可以随处买得到。而且，可能有些人头疼时没报告，甚至有些被漏报了。

    ts4
   Finally, the last question which critically matters is that are salicylates as effective as aspirin in curing headaches and would be so when are taken in salicylate-rich foods?尽管与阿司匹林是同一家族的来治疗头疼的，但，在没有有效证据的条件下，也许salicylates并没有阿司匹林那么有效.并且， Salicylates是以食物含有的形式被服用的，可能吸收没有单独服用的好，也没那么有效。

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chrishong119 发表于 2014-12-6 21:08
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    The article predicts that residents of Mentia will suffer even fewer headaches in the fu ...

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tesolchina 发表于 2014-12-7 14:35
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