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发表于 2008-9-9 20:42:16 |只看该作者
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越来越难过~不知道怎么写

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发表于 2008-9-9 22:55:51 |只看该作者
9.9 限时不了,哎 郁闷~~
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9.9号作业-yangkeli22

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楼下同学辛苦啦!!!

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发表于 2008-9-9 23:22:16 |只看该作者

9.9 meimener

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今天刚刚刷到的9.21,不知现在还能否加入?多谢多谢,一起加油!
嗯,我觉得如果考到电影可能不会问 which is better,我是按 which do you prefer (比较主观)写的, 欢迎拍砖~
对了,Kangxi那个例子比较汗,应该没这么个电影,但有限时间里我实在想不起来了,还是编一个比较快,见笑~
正在修改楼上的,马上放上来:)
楼下辛苦~

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楼上的朋友,我打不开你的链接,请你看看。
我明天有事,可能要下午才能给你改了。

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是我吗?好奇怪哦~那我粘在这里吧:)

Watching movies is one of my favorite activities in my spare time. Some friends are fond of serious movies, while others are fascinated by the amusing ones. As far as I am concerned, I would prefer the serious movies, for they are more informative, deeply moving and likely to be classic.

To begin with, I can gain a lot of knowledge from the serious movies. For instance, I only knew that Kangxi was a powerful Emperor in Qing dynasty
before I watched the movie Emperor Kangxi, which narrated the experience of Kangxi. He took control over the empire when he was still a child, later crushed the rebellion in the southwest, expanded the empire in the northwest against Russia and so on. From that movie, I knew more about the history around seventeenth century. Although it was a fiction instead of documentary, it, as serious movies usually do, corresponded to (accorded with 更合适?) what really happened in history. On the other hand, the amusing movies like to twist the history for the purpose of entertainment.

Furthermore, I am always moved by the serious movies. No doubt, serious movies are profounder and tend to make audience weep bitter tears. While watching the movie The Graduate, I burst into tears when Elaine discovered the affair between Ben and her mother, and left with a broken heart. Indeed, God made fool of people. Later I cried again when Elaine accepted Ben at the end. I understood in tears that everyone should be forgiven and given a second chance for the sake of true love. Speaking of amusing movies, nothing remains after a burst of laugh.   

Lastly, most of classic movies are serious movies. I love classic, whether memorable or thought provoking, which can be viewed over and over again. Look at the winners of Oscar or take a glimpse of the DVDs shelved in our bookcases, serious movies occupy most of the positions, such as Titanic, Forrest Gump and Scent of Woman.

In brief, facing a serious movie and an amusing movie, I will definitely pick up the former. (350)

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发表于 2008-9-10 04:51:30 |只看该作者
刚刚在网上看到英文原题,供大家参考。
Some movies are serious, designed to make the audience think. Other movies are designed primarily to amuse and entertain. Which type of movie do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

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楼下的以及个各位朋友,辛苦了!我链接里的作业是昨天和今天的。就是动物以及人性,和电影的文章。因为昨天早上刚刚收到6G的成绩,一直在郁闷中!也没心思写。本来成绩应该会早点到因为第一次的邮丢了,所以ETS又邮寄一份。如果各位有时间希望也帮看看昨天的作业。没时间的话晚一点也好。写的不好请指教。



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发表于 2008-9-10 11:58:12 |只看该作者
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发表于 2008-9-10 12:59:49 |只看该作者
COMEON小组--ansoncode 谢谢
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9.9
Watching movies is one of my favorite activities in my spare time. Some friends are fond of serious movies, while others are fascinated by the amusing ones. As far as I am concerned, I would prefer the serious movies, for they are more informative, deeply moving and likely to be classic.

To begin with, I can gain a lot of knowledge from the serious movies. For instance, I only knew that Kangxi was a powerful Emperor in Qing dynasty before I watched the movie Emperor Kangxi, which narrated the experience of Kangxi. He took control over the empire when he was still a child, later crushed the rebellion in the southwest, expanded the empire in the northwest against Russia and so on. From that movie, I knew more about the history around seventeenth century. Although it was a fiction instead of documentary, it, as serious movies usually do, corresponded to (accorded with 更合适?—原来那个更好) what really happened in history. On the other hand, the amusing movies like to twist the history for the purpose of entertainment.(要么展开说,要么干脆不说)

Furthermore, I am always moved by the serious movies. No doubt, serious movies are profounder(more profound) and tend to make audience weep bitter tears. While watching the movie The Graduate, I burst into tears when Elaine discovered the affair between Ben and her mother, and left with a broken heart. (没看过这部电影的人会觉得云里雾里的,细节应该再写的明白些。)Indeed, God made fool of people. Later I cried again when Elaine accepted Ben at the end. I understood in tears that everyone should be forgiven and given a second chance for the sake of true love. (However,) Speaking of amusing movies, nothing remains after a burst of laugh.  

Lastly, most of classic movies are serious movies. I love classic, whether memorable or thought provoking, which can be viewed over and over again. Look at the winners of Oscar or take a glimpse of the DVDs shelved in our bookcases, serious movies occupy most of the positions, such as Titanic, Forrest Gump and Scent of Woman.(再加个总结句)

In brief, facing a serious movie and an amusing movie, I will definitely pick up the former. (350)
语句的应用有点偏口语化了,不过我也有这毛病,加油!

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发表于 2008-9-10 13:19:57 |只看该作者
COMEON小组--9.9作业



楼下辛苦了!

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都说越写越有感觉,我怎么就感觉越写越没有思路!

脑子里的东西都用光了,就是感觉不到进步呢?

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发表于 2008-9-10 14:41:56 |只看该作者

COME ON 小组-----9月9日作业

9月9日 作业,请大家多多指教!
https://bbs.gter.net/thread-876908-1-1.html

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