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Nowadays,there is a heated discussion with sharply soaring volume about the success.Some people hold the view that the success is important. However, I deem thatit is more crucial to remain happy and optimistic. My reasons are as following.

Tobegin with, happy and optimistic is a kind of positive spirit which plays veryvital role in every people's daily life. According to a survey by Virginia University, some professors and expertsfind that possess a positive mood can keep people health(healthy). Comparingwith the success, it is certain that people's health is more important, becausehealth is the requirement for people to gain success. Hence, no matter howimportant the success is, how is(to) keep healthy, in other words,possessing a positive mood is more important than the success. In some people'sview, peaceful life is the most important, so they can keep happy andoptimistic onany conditions(at an circumstance?) whether they obtain thesuccess. All in all, the necessary element in our life is health rather thanthe success.

Inaddition, when we encounter failure in the road of(on the way to) pursuing oursuccess, nothing is more important than remaining happy and optimistic. Justlike an old saying that the failure(….?) For example, when Edison who was one ofthe greatest inventors in the world desired to find a suitable material to be(as)filament, he tried thousands of different materials. During the period Edison failed for hundreds of times, but he always keptoptimistic attitude to confront with those failure(failures). Finally, he picked out(findout) the suitable material to invent(for) filament. If Edisonhad not remained happy and optimistic, he would not have continued to seek(seeking)new material(materials)when he had failed for many times. From the instance, since optimistic(optimism)can bring people power to persist until they successes(succeed),remaining happy and optimistic when you fail is more important than thesuccess.

Tosum up, based on what I mentioned, I deem it is more important to remain happyand optimistic.


:D已经改过楼主的作文很多次了，作文中还是有些错误的。Happy和optimistic这两个字的重复率比较高。也许LZ可尝试一些新的东西。