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本帖最后由 misir 于 2010-1-31 23:11 编辑

1月31日 I全文写作 WORDS: 528

issue104
Education--general education
it is primarily through formal education that a culture tries to perpetuate[to make perpetual or cause to last indefinitely <perpetuate the species>] the ideas it favors and discredit the ideas it fears.
[wiki] Education or teaching in the broadest sense is any act or experience that has a formative effect on the mind, character or physical ability of an individual. In its technical sense education is the process by which society deliberately transmits its accumulated knowledge, skills and values from one generation to another.
首先，我在题库里还没过到这道题，所以连题目的理解也有问题。。。
如果一个文化想要它认为好的理念永世长存而摈弃它厌恶的理念，主要是通过正规教育。
https://bbs.gter.net/thread-1056292-1-1.html
[纠正]：
[言传身教]：
[潜移默化：Yet unfortunately, whenever something big happens in the outside world, people would tune in to CNN, swallowing its news and views without thinking much about it, and taking them for the "genuine" criterion just because of the high sound volume.
然而,这不表示我们就得束手无策,或是完全的被动,国际上发生一件大事,大家不约而同扭开美国电缆电视,潜移默化当中接受它的价值判断,似乎这就是真正的“标准”,因为他们的声音比较响亮。]

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这是本人的第一篇I吖，整整写了三个半小时。。。没有用什么复杂句，因为不习惯也不会用，Julymay组长可别瞧不起咱这篇小文吖。。。
我等着发下来的时候是满篇红。。。

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本帖最后由 misir 于 2010-1-31 23:12 编辑

A全文写作 WORD 359
Argu147
The following appeared in an editorial in a business magazine.
"Although the sales of Whirlwind video games have declined over the past two years, a recent survey of video-game players suggests that this sales trend is about to be reversed. The survey asked video-game players what features they thought were most important in a video game. According to the survey, players prefer games that provide lifelike graphics, which require the most up-to-date computers. Whirlwind has just introduced several such games with an extensive[having wide or considerable extent <extensive reading>] advertising campaign directed at people 10 to 25 years old, the age-group most likely to play video games. It follows, then, that the sales of Whirlwind video games are likely to increase dramatically in the next few months."
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=1056297&extra=
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第一次写ARUG，用时90分钟，是参考北美范文写滴。。。

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发表于 2010-2-3 18:10:23 |只看该作者

完成了第二次不限时AW~
科学与艺术的论题确实挺难写的。。。要好好总结下了。。
很严重的问题是有很多的拼写错误，还有很多表达方式好像都是自己造出来的。。

A2:https://bbs.gter.net/thread-1057320-1-1.html
I243:https://bbs.gter.net/thread-1057318-1-1.html

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发表于 2010-2-7 19:08:49 |只看该作者

第三次习作出炉~
ISSUE 25
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=1058800&extra=
ARGU 117
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=1058802&extra=

这次也是限时写的，不过各是规定时间的两倍。。。汗。我要继续努力啊啊啊。。。
粘到WORD里时又有很多的红绿线，讨厌~拼写一定要加油呢~

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